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GivingSpider


"Any religion that allows or commands you to pass judgement on, convert by force, or kill another human being is not a religion that serves any interpretation of any God or Gods above." Unknown

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Fluttershy and Discord are expecting a foal; which means a few things in their lives need to change. For starters they need to make sure that their foal has a healthy birth despite a rather large complication.

Discord is filled to the brim with magic. Any child he conceives must be born of similar magic. Currently Fluttershy is not equipped to see the pregnancy to the desired outcome.
The solution must be born of Chaos. Are they prepared to do what it takes?
Is Fluttershy prepared to fully give herself to Chaos to start their family?

Sex tag: because sometimes one plus one adds up to three.

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Comments ( 7 )

I have a lot of personal disagreements with the incredibly headcanony nature of this fic. I only even read it because it was on the new story list and the idea somewhat intrigued me.

That said, it really was an intriguing idea, and you executed well. Story flow, pacing, and also mechanical excellence, didn't spot a single spelling or grammar mistake on a dry read.

You make FlutterCord seem like a very cute couple.

I'll withhold my personal taste since I disagree vehemently with some of the headcanon used here, but from a more objective standpoint, I think this is an A, maybe even A+ fic.

7367491
Thank you for reading despite having justifiable objections to my headcanon:eeyup:

Yay a new fic from GivingSpider! I loved it, and in a way it was kind of sad, like Fluttershy was dying so there could be two new lives! Wonderful, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

7367577 :twilightblush:
Thank you for reading:yay:

I do find it interesting and surprising that Fluttershy's chaotic form would be the vampire bat form from the episode series. I say that is a fair idea on that being her chaotic form other than a draconequus.

I think my only disagreement on this is the fact that she is a full on vampire bat and not a vampire fruit bat.

It's nice to see that Fluttershy is pretty calm about her situation, and I like that you have her being the most calm about it, and even taking a new view on life.
I do kinda wish there was more to explain on just what is entailed with Fluttershy's chaotic self being her batpony form, since she is not just any old batpony but a chaotic-magic based one. Would she have some form of chaos powers or what?

With that said, this was a solid story with ends well, but also leaves some questions of the future.

But with that, I say this was a solid story.

9003057
Actually, the idea of her being reinforced with Chaos magic is why I went with her going full Vampire batpony instead of just a fruit batpony:derpytongue2:

9004599
Ah okay. I can see that.

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