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Screwloose a young 'pup' coming into a new world,but the problem is she can't see anything when she born.It's going to be a while ,till she finally could see the real world.

A thanks to Browneyedbagle for inspiration and proofreading.

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Awwwww!! This was very cute!!

I realized it was those two (Not saying names due to spoilers being spoilers.) moments before I got to the part where it said who they were. Wonderful story and, as others have said, very cute! :rainbowkiss:

Awwww, that was so sweet. It took me 'till the end to finally get the dog connection with Screwloose. There's a few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too terrible. Great job!

Aw, this is so sweet! I loved it. I knew that it was going to be Discord when they mentioned the many animals, but I had no idea it would be Fluttershy. I think it's so cute that she thinks she's a little puppy.:twilightsmile:

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