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One night fluttershy wakes up with a terrible nightmare. Shes afraid to go back to sleep . discord help her go back to sleep will she still have that nightmare when she falls asleep or something interesting will happen when she dreams?

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Ooh! That was so cute!:pinkiehappy: Good Job, there are a few errors here and there, but other than that, it was brilliant.!:yay::raritystarry::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::raritywink:

Sorry! I assure you I'm not a stalker!:pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:

Also, Just read your Nightmare Night story the other night... You did a good job on that too! Here's a mustache:moustache:

There were some errors. You have to make up your mind on whether the story is in the present tense or the past tense.
But this was adorable! And I think you should put the "Romance" tag on here.

3889228 um thanks and my editor did the best he or she could do on proofread it.

:pinkiecrazy: loved it!
Is this based off the comic?

I love this ship and that's the first MLP fanfiction I read. I'm trying to train my english and your text was very good for me to understand, (thank you). The story gave me a good feeling while I was reading. Thanks (again) for the experience. Good job! :yay:

3902043 thanks I'm glade u enjoy my story and ur first time reading it.there's a lot of stories I have plans for more of this ship.:twilightsmile:

3902154 I'll be waiting!:raritywink:

I loved it! It has been a little while since I read a fluttercord and i just remembered why I love them!:fluttershysad::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::rainbowwild:

Awww that was so cute! :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::yay: I really loved it :derpytongue2:

That was adorable! :heart:

Just wish there was more!

It was really cute! But Discord wasn't kissed before cause he said he never had a friend before in the show, and there were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that it was really adorable!

*dies of adorableness* :heart: :rainbowkiss: :yay: :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :twistnerd: :raritystarry:

"Of course Fluttershy. I don’t want you to have bad nightmares now. “He let go of the hug put his lion paw up to my face and wiped off my tears. “Now no more crying. Try to sleep now and try to have a delightful dream Fluttershy"

Because in this America good nightmares are illegal. Thanks a lot Trump!!!!:twilightangry2:

AHHH!! THAT WAS SOOOOO CUTE! I :heart: Fluttercord!

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