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Alexandrite Ward


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Someone's filled Fluttershy's house full of mistletoe, guess who? I know who, and you probably do too.

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AWWWW! That's so sweet! That moment with Rainbow Dash kind of threw me off though. I thought you were going to take it in a different direction. Whatever, I think I've finally gotten used to slash pairings, but it still seemed kind of irrelevant to the story.

This was really cute and for the most part everyone was in character. A nice, pleasant feel to it and a writing style which I really like (plus I'm just a sucker for FlutterCord). The only thing that I didn't really like about it was the bit with Rainbow Dash. It wasn't really needed -- if you took out everything having to do with her in the story then it wouldn't have much of an impact, and it didn't add any conflict. Discord just asked a question and acted a little bit jealous... and that was it. It seemed a little... filler-y.

Other than that I really liked it and you did a great job. Like and favorite!

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You're both right, as I look on it, Rainbow Dash is out of place. I've removed her from the story and I think it flows better, let me know? :) And thank you for reading!

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I reread the section, and it looks good to me.:twilightsmile:

Wow that was pretty good I must say that was pretty sweet amd kinda funny. I really love it :heart:

Aww~! :yay::heart: That was too sweet~!

3835434 Yep, it definitely flows better.

soooo sweet :pinkiehappy:
is there comming a sequel ?? O_O that would be AWESOME

You are amazing:heart:
Please write some more!

MOAR *pinkie pie shoots pies out of cannon* :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

i just fangirled all over the place :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::yay::yay::yay::yay:

lol
that was a nice story now Discord get to make babies with her! >:3

That was great! I throughly enjoyed it :raritywink:

And Then Came Screwball

Comment posted by ScrewballMothball deleted Oct 2nd, 2018

This is very cute and sweet. Great job!

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