Discord is in love with Fluttershy, but even though he is "reformed" old habits die hard. What will happen when he enlists Rarity's help in capturing the shy Pegasus's heart?
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Pretty cute but I feel like the ponies are being OOC in still not trusting Discord every time he shows up. He's a spirit of chaos and disharmony, of course he's not going to stop causing trouble or playing pranks. It's his way of life.
And I think Rarity was being a little bit too selfish with what she made Discord do to gain her trust. The spirit of chaos and disharmony is not your personal buttler.
Also, why exactly does this need to be human? Especially when you have a pony for the cover image? How exactly is a human Discord suppose to work?
Sir/Madam you had my interest, but now you have my attention. I'll be keeping an eye on this story, well done!
Good story, but there's a few problems.
First of all the mane 6 seem way too out of character. This takes place after his reformation, so they shouldn't absolutely despise him. It's true that they don't fully trust him, and it would be awkward around him considering what he's done, but they wouldn't outright insult him that heavily. Rainbow Dash is reasonable, considering her personality, but Twilight? Ehhhh not really.
Also, at the end, I don't understand why he didn't use his powers to clean Rarity's house.She might have added that to the deal, that he couldn't use them, but it doesn't state that.
And last, why the human tag? Who's a human? Where's a human? Or is there going to be one in the future?
I hope you take this review in mind.
You know Rarity don't you think you're trying a little too hard. Part of being love means making someone love you for who you are, not who you pretend to be.
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Well, do remember Discord has hurt Fluttershy too many times already. Rarity's just being protective
I like it so far
So are you making anymore to this?
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I have huge writer's block right now, but I am working on it!
3700917 Alright but I posted this over 3 days ago
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I was busy with Senior Finals and college apps, so I can't go on this site as often as I used to...
3701007 Alright good night
I find this kind of sweet, in a Beauty and the Beast kind of way.
He wants to have Fluttershy but he sees it as he is a monster in a way.
In the end, he will show his true colors in the story.
Angel Bunny is a BOY!
Here's the proof:
Nice chapter, really good. Couldn't spot any problems.
Aside from the fact that indeed, Angel is a boy.
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Haha, yea, i know. I slapped myself right after I pressed the publish button.
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Yea, I know. :) I remembered right after I pushed the publish button = =
Rarity's element is Generosity, not Charity.
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Rarity isn't perfect, and she certainly seems like the type to succumb to the fairytale romance tropes. And "be yourself" really isn't the right advice for Discord; while he doesn't necessarily need to change things like his posture or appearance, his manners and his conversational skills could indeed use some work, especially in learning to be less hurtful.
I'm really enjoying this so far; rarely does a story from Discord's point of view manage to convey the right tone, but this one does.
No offense, but Discord seems out of place in this whole scheme of things. Would he really go to Rarity of all ponies for advice? I mean, he's Discord.
But I do like this story so far.
Isn't Angel a boy? You did use the word "her" referring to Angel.
I need to read the rest of this! Please upload another chapter soon. Please.
Can`t dig it mate. Especially since Twilight was the one who defended him after Tirek found no more use for him and now she just suddenly reverts back to utter mistrust.
update soon please
please continue!