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Alexandrite Ward


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This story is a sequel to The Opera Phantom Discord


Discord is trying to sleep, but it is easier said than done. Oh the joys of parenthood.

Please make sure to check out:

The Calm Before The Storm

by fluttercordlover232 as she has written a wonderful companion piece to this story!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 23 )

Awwwww:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::yay: love this:heart::heart::heart::heart:

her beautiful sky blue brown eyes

Blue or brown, which is it?

It was a wonder at what this ponycould do to him

"pony could"

but just before her feet touched the cold hard wood floor

"hooves"

Flutter squealed and jumped onto Discord's surprised form

Fluttershy

There bodies pressed together

"Their"

But when I saw this I was like "OMIGOSH YOU WROTE A SEQUEL TO THIS! EVEN IF IT'S SHORT, I LOVE IT! AND MELODY'S THE PERFECT NAME FOR THEIR CHILD AND THEY HAVE ANOTHER ON THE WAY!"
So sweet!

4663689 Blast and I worked so hard to not have errors. Well I've gone in and fixed them all so hopefully it's error free now! Thank you for pointing them out and I'm glad you enjoyed my little fic. Thank you for the review of Opera Phantom Discord as well, it was interesting and informative, I've started doing chapter edits now and should have it done in the next month or so (300k words means it will take a bit lol)

Also weird that I was reading this during a thunderstorm...

Man, where do I start? It was short but at the same time sweet. It was perfect, you are amazing I loved it! :pinkiehappy:

THE FEELS!!:fluttercry::pinkiehappy: RAINBOWS FOR YOU

first i spotted 1 error (there in no need to worry,dear,all is fine)
i think it's supose to be is?
second you are to good at writing stories and melody is a perfect name for their daughter.
i feel like i am going to reread it just like the phantom of the opera discord 1,000 more times again witch i am reading again now :pinkiehappy: u to good a writer just like df. your so good i actually get emoctional
:ajsmug::yay:

Awww! It was so sweet! :rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by Fandomfreak2233 deleted Aug 3rd, 2014

Also, forgot to add that this is awesome!:raritystarry: And i love the name Melody! :yay:Its perfect! I wish this had a sequel.:pinkiehappy:
Five mustaches all the way:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

My gosh Melody is a nice name! I red the story MANY times! Please make more!!! :pinkiehappy: Since Discord LOVES Music i think he named the child Melody! :scootangel:

:yay::moustache::twilightsheepish::raritystarry::ajsmug::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:TOO CUTE!!!!

Thank you for both the Phantom of the Opera (loved the play but loved your version better :pinkiehappy: ) and this! Its so cute how Discord acts like a spoiled child who wants to cuddle (or just get some sleep :rainbowlaugh: ) But there is one thing that bothered me at the end of POTO :rainbowhuh: .... there was a mention of Discords mom loving him and not wanting to give him up and how Discord lost his memories of his childhood (damn carnie ponies! :twilightangry2: )... ahem :twilightblush: anyway i was wondering is it possible to make a short of him finding his mom and the truth :scootangel: PLEASE?? :rainbowkiss:

ok this was a sweet one shot to the other story. its great
also i really REALLY want this universe explored more. i may not get my wish but i am happy with both of these stories! :D

Harmony, ehh, Melody Is better!

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For some odd reason I thought your profile picture was pony Discord :twilightsheepish:

I'm a terrible person but I imagine Melody at school when she is older, like kindergarten age, and the teacher tells everybody to draw their family. I think Melody would consider Rarity, Rainbow, and Shortround family. She draws everybody accurately so here is the conversation I imagine the teacher and Melody have when the teacher sees her picture:

Teacher: What have you drawn?
Melody: My mommy, *points to Fluttershy* my daddy, *points to Discord* and the rest of my family, Rarity, Shortround and Rainbow Dash!
Teacher: Oh um. Why did you draw your daddy like that? Do you not like him?
Melody: No, that's what he looks like!
Teacher: Really? What about this one. *points to Rainbow Dash*
Melody: Oh that's Rainbow Dash! She looks like that too!
Teacher: Ooh okay then.

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