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fluttercord45


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A poem not a story
after discord been reformed he has this strange filling that was never there before. What's this feeling his having? What could it be and what's causing it? And why this feeling only happening around when fluttershy around him?

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What's this feeling his having, is it bad?

What could it be, what's causing it?

Poetry is not sufficient excuse to write run-on sentences.

Grammer and structure issues aside:
I think it's cute:twilightsmile:

I liked it. There were a few grammatical errors, but otherwise it was pretty good:pinkiehappy:

3571501>>3571493 thanks, I know. Sorry I was in a rush :facehoof: ill fix it later :ajsleepy:

Great Job it was so beautiful that i cried plz Flutters write another

Coool!!!
I'm flattered that one of my drawings this poem!
I loved!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3594013 thanks and ur welcome I like it I had to use it :twilightblush:

Hmm I don't like the pics but everything else was great:ajbemused:

3656993 thanks . I couldn't find a perfect picture for the story to go with it.

3657072 You can say that again :ajbemused:

3657482 Hmm Idk what you should do about this

3657499 I'm just going to leave it till I find a drawing

3657516 Alright thanks for telling me

*Sob* so...beautiful. I loved it!

Why can't I favorite it more than once :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershbad:

Finally. Someone has dared to immortalize Fluttershy and Discord's love in poetry!:rainbowlaugh:

are u flipping serious!?!:pinkiegasp: you are awesome at poetry!!:flutterrage:gosh this is so good, disney fanatic could not do better than this!!!:flutterrage: I'm not kidding.:ajbemused:

I also writte poems and i have to say this poems is beautiful keep going you are amazing.Lovely story by the way cute,funny and happy.

4203359. If you ever want to writte another poem tell me i would love to help!

Me and my 18 year old cousin read this and he was in tears saying "This is Beautiful." I loved it too It was just I didn't cry because I only cry at sad stories. My Cousin needs to turn in his man card. THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!!!! :yay::ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::twilightblush: :twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::raritywink::scootangel::twistnerd:

I LOVE IT!:heart::scootangel::pinkiehappy:
And it's like we are sisters get it fluttercord45.

So beautiful:pinkiesad2::fluttershysad::heart: I love fluttercord stories:heart::yay::pinkiehappy:

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :yay: :heart:

Aww this was so adorable! :twilightsmile: :heart:

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