It's Mother's day in Equestria and everypony is celebrating except for some members of the Apple Family. All they remember is the day their mother passed away. With nopony to celebrate the day for how will they get through?
Based on the comic by Silver Quill
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Good job fluttercord45
:twilightsmile This is a very cute story!!!
You seem like a really cool writer person
might read some more of your stories!
Did a great job converting it from a comic.
you got this from a comic on deviantart didn't you?
Kawaii desu~!!!!
4377578 a comic written by Silver Quill: The god of slapstick
This is pretty good, but the narrative is a bit...dry, maybe? Like, for example, you don't need to list Applejack and Apple Bloom's hair colors; I already know what they look like. I also would've liked more detail with Twilight and her mother eating lunch and having a conversation with AJ and AB. It's a cute idea, but it needs a little work.
Kind story, good work!
them feels