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Mister Phoenix


Since the show over, I'm gone, no more stories from me

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Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle has been friends forever. As the two soon find out about Twilight's map and how it can time travel to any place in Equestria.

With Equestria changing into a mess. Can these two friends travel though time, find the time rips and save the future?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 30 )

Need-of-an-editor warning... :facehoof:

Mister Phoenix i got a question when will the next chapter come out for this story

6698391 Well let see it been only one day since the story came out and I do need time to write the chapters I want this story to be well good and I hate being rush that and I just haven't started yet so maybe some time next week or so.

Mario and luigi partners in time




Well isn't that a convenient coincidence




Convenient for just being the same XD

6702809 Well I never played Mario and Luigi: Partners In Time I have only play a bit of Superstar Saga so this shouldn't be just a re-write of that game.

The game is hard and some of the bosses are way to hard mostly because they have 30x the hp they should and you only have like 1/5th the hp you should and without grinding i only got up to petey piranha which took like 2:30 hours and still wasn't dead so i used cheats to do 999 dog but i think its kinda fun anyway

This is good, only the pony currency is called bits. Dollars are the Equestria Girls currency.

6713088 So I have edited it because I got one thing wrong that and some small spelling errors but thanks for pointing out the smallest problem it's fix now, now it's twenty-nine bits happy?

Sounds like somewhere between Mario and Luigi: Partners in Time and Final Fantasy XIII-2. (maybe a teensy bit of Bioshock: infinite.)

that means twice the headache for me. PASS.

6714269 Yes, actually. It's a pet peeve of mine when writers don't use the proper currency, if one is established in the original work. To me, not using the established currency shows that the writer doesn't care enough. In Naruto fanfics, you use Ryo, in Mario fanfics, you use Coins, and in MLP fanfics outside of Equestria Girls, you use Bits.

Is this going to look anything like Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time?

6730012 No all it just is share the same title, I have only seen Superstar Saga thanks to Chuggaaconroy but I haven't play or seen anything of Partners In Time

6732219 Alright. I've seen Superstar Saga thanks to Chuggaaconroy as well :rainbowlaugh: I've also played Bowser's Inside Story.

So, what is this crossing over with, because there's nothing in here that reminds of Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time. In fact, this doesn't feel like a crossover at all.

6751241 I keep on saying this. It just shares the same title nothing more I put that crossover tag in there for safety. If you are looking for a crossover on the RPG this isn't your story.

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Nice story Just a bunch of grammar failures :twilightsmile: :rainbowlaugh:

Am I Just the only one who doesn't fully understand this?
Chapter 1 and 2 goes Back to 100 years at maximum, but in chapter 3 Back to Discord? Shouldn't be there some sort of chronological order? Because it's starting to get fully random. :applejackunsure:

6794696 Well there's the random tag on this story for an reason.

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Well, yeah but still a chronological order would make much more sense why is every time a problem during time travelling. A change in the past can start a whole bunch of New events -> so compairing, they were relatively in the 'future' before they went Back to Discord because the future has been fixed? :ajsmug:
Well it's still a good story, don't misunderstand me :scootangel:

Comment posted by rainbowdash1 deleted Jan 16th, 2016
Comment posted by Mister Phoenix deleted Feb 15th, 2016

When does the sequel come out?

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Well Thousand Year Door is already out, it just got cancelled. I was on work on Dream Team, but I just hadn't wrote on it in a while, I haven't found much time for it.

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