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Michael Hudson
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Michael Hudson
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That was pretty much what I expected when you announced this story. Well played. And a nice chuckle at the end with the protective older sister bit.
6571271 I'm a man of my word sir. Never forget this!
This was resoundingly mediocre. Nothing special to write home about.
Also, I think you might need an 'incest' tag since the Apples and Pies are related to a degree?
6571388 Many would debate it. As I don't like to really agree with them being related, especially since it hurts the moral of that episode, I don't count it. Not only that, but they are so far removed from each other that they may as well not be.
That was both sexy and cute! Good job!
Also, have you thought of making a sequel story? Like describing how BM and Marble are now in a relationship, and on how that effects their lives?
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Alc everyone has been over this already
They're like super distant cousins, so far apart that it's negligible.
6571427 Probably not. I have WAY too many other things to work on already. Sorry.
As I don't read pony sex for it to be hot, this is exactly what I'd want to see from this sort of story with them as ponies.
Now, if they'd been anthro or humanized, that'd be a different story.
6571444 I have plans for a Limestone fic (if I ever find the time) that will be anthro, and much naughtier. It won't be as funny though, but I have plans to make sure it has a wide birth from actual dark stuff. Just sexy punishment, and some fighting... if I ever do it.
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...anthro Limestone getting punished in a sexy way?
That sounds fun.
Limestone jealous?
6571457 Other way actually. AJ and Pinkie have a sin they need to pay for.
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...not so sure how to feel about that one. We'll see.
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Yesssss, I welcome all sort of Angry Limestone Sex.
You should do it quick while she hasn't have a fixed ship though!
IMO she should be with Applejack or Dash, since she fits the rivalry mentality, even more with AJ since she is a farmer owner too.
6571436 Damn, oh well.
Well Mac, you didn't really deserve that, but on the other hoof you should REALLY know better than to let Pinkie set the pace for you.
I mean, geez, at least take her out to dinner first. No wonder Lime went ballistic.
6571428 second cousins and beyond can legally marry, I checked.
Fucking all of my yes!
This is the sort of clop I love to read; silly, adorable, and not super explicit and not written cuz secks x3 I love this
Funny, and adorable.
I kinda wonder if the show's writers intended for there to be a romantic implication between these two or not...
Have fun.
6573068 *Blush* Thank you!
I am still surprised this is the only thing that comes up with the tags "Sex" and "Big Macintosh" that has Marble in it.
I guess the next letter from Pinkie Pie after Mac gets out of the hospital would be something like:
Don't be a dummy,
Bury it deep in her tummy.
To start off with, I liked this story. It was cute, it was fun, but it did have its problems.
One, the pacing was terrible. It was very hard to follow where you were going and when. It made it rather hard to keep up, and it did cheapen the experience.
Two, your grammar and sentence structure was, well, extremely rough. While it might have been technically "correct", it wasn't easy to read and it made te story more difficult to enjoy.
Three, you clearly rushed this. While I can applaud plowing out a story quickly, you could have benefitted from reading over it a time or two.
That being said, I still liked it. It was cute, and it was still a fun read and I am definitely pleased that it exists. Just maybe work on the polish next time, and maybe use this as a rough draft for a little bit cleaner revision. Cheers~
It was cute. And this is coming from a person that doesn't generally read clop.
I was expecting a random paper airplane to hit him with Pinkie saying: Sweet Celestia just fuck already!!
This was a good story.
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Besides, their relationship together is questionable. The end of Pinkie Apple Pie left it ambiguous. Even in Hearthbreakers, they said maybe, maybe not.
Very tender, sweet, just how it'd go between those two. :D Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go restrain Limestone. :p