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The Abyss

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Most impressive.

In the featured box, in 3... 2... 1...

Contains only anal, or is their vaginal as well? Just wondering.

PHR #4 · Nov 5th, 2015 · · 3 ·

..."Anal" needs a warning? :applejackunsure:

:rainbowlaugh: Oh Luna that last bit was to much. Big Mac is gonna get rocked in the realest way.

6602008 It's not a warning. I'm merely stating what it contains.

You do know how... Anal some people can be without a warning of some kinn right?

"Aww... come on, Marble!” Pinkie Pie eyed his shaft and licked her lips, then walked towards them, much like a lion stalking its prey. “You started without me? I thought we had agreed that we would share him!"

Big Mac simply smiled, for he knew he was going to have a good night.

There better be a sequel with Big Mac getting dually hotdogged by Pinkie and Marble...

Good sisters share.:derpytongue2:

6602036 If it does well enough, there's a good chance of me doing that.

Big Mac simply smiled, for he knew he was going to have a good night.


Let the flood of incest storys ensue


Oh c'mon don't forget Limestone Pie. She's best hardcore femdom tsundere pone next to Diamond Tiara. :derpytongue2:

Hm... Mr. Critical approves.

Damn, this fic changes cover art fast.

6602232 Touche, good sir. Touche.

Haha, amazing little fic here! I haven't read a fic in a long while, let alone a clop fic, and this was a very nice way to start off again :heart:

6602296 Heh, glad you picked me. :heart:

You know who you call on to conquer The Rock?

This was great up until Pinkie appeared. That part made the love making feel disingenuous. Other than that nice job.

“Harder, Mac! Plow me like you would one of your fields... th-thoroughly!”

Pfftt... :rainbowlaugh: I'm sorry, but that just made me crack up.

I figured Marble would be into anal, but damn.

“Ya know, those rhymes ain’t so rock-solid,” Bic Mac said with a chuckle

Bic Mac? :unsuresweetie:

Great clopfic, Abyss. That last part had me rolling, though. :rainbowlaugh:


Never underestimate the speed of the fandom. :twilightsmile:

Yes, just yes, this NEEDS a sequel!

It truly is always the shy ones, it would seem :yay:
But that ending though :rainbowlaugh:
Apple Cream Pie aaaaaallllll night.



I knew that someone would ship these both in a clop

Well I knew it would happen at some point just not so soon


When I saw the title, I figured it would be some sort of crack fic with Dwayne Johnson.

6602803 Or maybe Marble wanted to show her affections for him before they have meaningless sex.

I regret nothing.


Wouldn't have it any other way

How dare you propose anyone ever being bored of rock poetry!?

I shan't read this in protest and tell everyone about this travesty!

-A Geologist.
EDIT: I shit you not, that is what my degree is in.

good story all in all, but Marble Pie and Big Mac could be related.

I was wondering when someone would do a MarbleMac clop. I was thinking about it, but I do better with adventure and comedy.

6603820 Nobody's done it before?

Sure. But there are a couple of things to keep in mind. First, it is possible that they are not related by blood. In which case they're probably no closer than being 10th to 30th cousins. Second, even if they are blood related the show seems to suggest they are 3rd or 4th cousins at best, which is still pretty distant genetically speaking. About 10% of all marriages today are between second cousins or closer and no country in the world bans marriage between 3rd cousins or higher.

6603839 Not that I've seen. There's plenty of romance stories with them, but no clop.

6603681 Please write some rock poetry? Please? xD

Also: I really wanted to offer some constructive criticism but... I basically just like all of it, well done.


...There's always a 99.9% chance of your Clopfics going in featured

6603704 Dude don't keep encouraging us. You know WraithWriter's motto; "Instant success, just add incest."

6604061 Pretty much yeah. ^^

6602869 Wow, that sure was quick! I added it to the story's description and my page. Thanks! :heart:

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