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Shocks #1 · Oct 24th, 2015 · · 1 ·

Warning, this story contains: Breast Expansion, Butt/Hip/Thigh Expansion, FutaXFemale, minor Cock Growth, and lastly some light Cum Inflation.

Fetishes detected. Commence read.

It was nice until her breasts went bigger than her head.
I know that's the usual direction of expansion art and fics, but with the title I was genuinely hoping this would be one of those rare gems that had reasonable limits for expansion.

Still nice and hot, and I especially liked the part where she burst out of her clothes (my favorite part of expansion), but once it gets to the part where it just won't stop, I'm out.

Shocks #3 · Oct 24th, 2015 · · 1 ·

Holy shit. Feature box. That was quick.

Honestly, it's not bad, in fact it's quite sexy, but I get the feeling I wasn't supposed to be overtaken by laughter. I don't know why, but I found the concept of the whole thing just funny. Good read, though.

grunts as a satisfying climax is reached Ah... Houston. We have noooo problems.

Comment posted by detectivebrony deleted Oct 25th, 2015

Is it bad for this detective to request a sequel to this one? Involving the rest of the mane 6 and Spike?

I approve of this story greatly

6564583
Nothing wrong with requesting. I'm not sure about a sequel though. While this was VERY fun to write, I don't know if there's enough potential to continue it or not.

6565009 just thought I ask. Although I'm kind of surprised Spike didn't accidently walk in on their little 'moment'. Maybe he'll see Rainbow's new look in the morning.

6565009 There is plenty of potential for a sequel, it all depends on what kinks you want to explore? Perhaps Dash starts lactating from her new udders and Twi has to milk her? Perhaps the changes, whilst reversible, start to get harder to change back each time? Or if you want to get a bit darker, perhaps Rainbow leaves whilst Twilight is sleeping and is...abducted, shall we say?

Perhaps it is the other way with Twilight's futa spell and in time, Rainbow has to start to milk Twi to keep her testicles from exploding.

6564786 Obvious troll comment is obvious :derpytongue2:

This song fits very well.

6564983 Normal? What's that? I for one was never normal myself so I agree, it is overrated.

6564786 Did you know, I trawl through the trash heaps to find comments and see if anyone is self-aware. Not yours specifically, but just in general to see if people are fighting the good fight. Godspeed, Constant Reader.

>It'll also let me learn a counterspell to help those with the opposite problem.
-Though it's incorrectly formulated, I can guess what she really meant there.

She meant an entirely separate 'spell with a new effect that is opposed to the previously mentioned one', a 'new' spell that shrink breasts, not a 'counter-spell'.
But, technicalities...

Comment posted by Lucky Star 33094 deleted Oct 26th, 2015

6564786 You're just embarressed that you like this fic so much.
You wish you could crawl inside of this fic and live it over and over because this was your face the whole time while you read it.

i.imgur.com/rGFqYX1.jpg

I would like to read this, but, with all of this hate In the comment section, I don't think it'll be worth it...

6564786 are you sure you're on the right website

i think i have counted at least five fetish tropes in this story.

6564786 *Gets on website designed for fanfiction, among which is usually smut, as this is obviously the internet. Complains anyways.* Good job, man, good job :rainbowlaugh:

6578238 Nah man, no need to get angry. This isn't my personal fetish, but it was pretty good writing skills at the least. Just kinda pointin' out the irony here. But, 'ey, if you wanna scream at people for what they do with their spare time, you go on ahead. No sarcasm, like, if that's you, you do you, just don't be surprised when the hate comes in burning heaps. So, I guess I'ma leave before I start a flame-war in the comments of a well-liked story. Peeeeaaaacccceeeee~ :twilightsmile:

Nicely done one shot, need more of these around here.

~The Rift Walker

BAH HOT-HOT-HOTHOT-HOT

Did a reading of this fic, hope someone enjoys!

this story isn't great, badly written bruh

sequel or bonus chapter where they go even further?

Great story, dude! I don't really see why you're getting so much hate from some people in this here comment section. Admittedly, the writing is a bit bland if not poor but you did your best and presented a good story. Besides, I got off so I can't complain. Keep it up, man!

Comment posted by ContagiousCreation deleted Aug 2nd, 2016

While I'm not a huge fan of Futa, I've found the need to "tolerate" it and slowly assimilate myself to chick dicks. And I must say, this story made that easy.
So, overall, 10/10, would beat the shit out some monkey again.

Warning, this story contains: Breast Expansion

Rainbow Dash...yes this is a great one indeed.
Maybe she could have some of it be permanent and she and some other pony could have sex? Maybe you make a contest and ask people to submit their OCs to have as the ones with RD in the sequel?

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