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This looks interesting.

However, in the first few paragraphs, you used "cap" where you obviously meant "cab".

instead of letting me wait to fucking

Should be two.

6517839 Woops. Thank you very much.

Bored out of her mind, a girl with long, slightly disheveled hair, stepped out of the cap.

you mean cab or car right?
love the story please write more soon

I'm guessing they had a rough relationship growing up.

6518115 Having a vampire in the family cannot be easy. But I heard the bond between twins is oftentimes stronger than the bond between normal siblings. Some say even stronger than between lovers!

6520274 Oh, she isn't?

6520384 I'm pretty sure Opal's been referred to as a 'she' on occasion in the show...

Hope there's vampire huntin'. AJ going at it with a whip and cross would make the story GOAT.

6521216 Wow. Never would I have thought of this. It gives me a few ideas involving Pinkie Pie.

true nature

hmmm :duck:

Wow. So much for 'gently', Fluttershy.

Gratulation Miss Bat, you are now officialy no longer the only supernatural being in the family.^^

Flutterbat is so protective of her sister, I love it.

I also love how every normal human in their world doesn't bat an eyelash at the whole turning into a magical pony human hybrid thing, but the one vampire that sees it is like "WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!!!"

I really like the idea that this story has. I haven't seen anything quite like it before. As such, the grammar needs a total overhaul. It isn't awful, as the readers can still understand what is being said, but it does get a bit muddled at points. Otherwise, this is really quite interesting. I shall keep an eye on it. Onwards!

Okay, um... Fluttershy's twin sister is terrifying.

Hmm. Interesting. I shall shall continue to follow this. It promises interesting things. Onwards!

mmmm tasty crunchie can you give me some mm chocolatey goodness the story is nice

need more crunchies for flutterbat to enjoy:flutterrage:

6683123 ...You sir, are scaring me right now.

give her lenty of crunchies yeasshhhh plenty of crunchies to eat

o btw your story is awesome i really like it sorry for my ackward comments i really enjoyed it keep up the good work

6683158 Thank you, kind sir. Or ma'am? Sir ma'am.

Holy crap you did that to vinyl and tavi well mind has flown out the window

Apple diet? Take a seat ms. Bat? :rainbowlaugh: priceless! Just priceless.

Vampire

Flutterbat is Ann vampire!

But is shy an vampire?

New it hope shy stops her before it gets out of hand

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