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GildaTheGriffon


Hi there! I'm Hakan Can. Thanks for stopping on my page! Read "Crusader Saviors" my new book! I am pretty sure you will like it... Feel free to comment or ask any questions! Thanks again! ^-^

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All of our characters decided to camp on Everfree Forest and started to tell eachother some scary stories, unaware of what will happen something tomorrow mysterious. Werewolves were just a legend and nothing more in Ponyville. Rainbow Dash was walking on her side. She hated walking but she had to. A week ago she hurt her left wing and she was lucky, like the previous one, no bone fracture. Unfortunately, she had no new Daring Do comics to read neither. So she decided to visit Fluttershy, after that camp she seemed a little freaked out and scared... At last, with a little running included, she achieved to arrive. Rainbow Dash suddenly stopped. Something was different...

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 51 )

MORREEEEEE!?!?!?!? please.....:fluttercry:

Sure thing! Wait for tomorrow! The next chapter will be published on that time! Thanks for liking!

Oh my goodness! I have inspiration! A new idea! Thank you good...sir?

Nice story, btw

how long did it take to put all those individual pictures into one?

thou hast peaked our interest. we shall hope to see more of this story. we give thee a like and a fav. :)

Nice story and PLEASE don't mess it up ,it has great potential.And Moaaaaaaaar

Comment posted by SonicPonyfan deleted Jun 5th, 2015

Very good hope to see more !!!:twilightsheepish:

Come on when is the next chapter I can wait no longer.

This is very interesting! Although it does have some grammatical errors, it is a very good story overall so far!
i can't wait to see more! Keep up the good work!

Sorry for all people who I made all wait... I will write more soon because i finished the last duty that i had to do! Take care!

Comment posted by Lord Of Dorkness deleted Jul 26th, 2015

I really love tis fan fiction I even loved how pinkie pie made a confetti blaster [https://youtu.be/L5inD4XWz4U]

Comment posted by Lord Of Dorkness deleted Aug 2nd, 2015

6274369 I do not like rude comments thanks for reading

I loved your story but please be careful for title thieves someone stole your title!

Uuuu creepy and nice... :ajsleepy: I want Fluttershy back! ;_;

6274414 If someone stole my title mods will do whatever they need to... If the subject is not common or the facts are not same it is ok for me but thank you for your information have a smile and heart from me ! :D :pinkiehappy::heart::derpytongue2: (Derpy what are you doing! Get out! :D )

Comment posted by The_11th_doctor deleted Aug 2nd, 2015
Comment posted by GildaTheGriffon deleted Aug 2nd, 2015

This chapter was very nice but the one thing was why did you say the potion was gonna kill flutter shy whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

6278549 I mentioned that it has a side affect. As Pinkie mentioned we are not a hundred percent sure she will die, we will see on the next final chapter. No bloopers sorry! :heart::applejackunsure:

Comment posted by destroyer-of-pineapples deleted Aug 26th, 2015

6285814, Hahahah you supported me a lot... Thank you... :heart:

Comment posted by destroyer-of-pineapples deleted Aug 26th, 2015

6286163 My friend recommended that group, check it i published it to every group not only that.

Comment posted by destroyer-of-pineapples deleted Aug 26th, 2015

6285849 Yup of course it is a good story. Can't wait to see what happens next.:pinkiehappy:

I can see the ending! Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom learn the wolf was Fluttershy and hate her forever. And Fluttershy is put on trial for murder and is either imprisoned or executed. Then the next big threat to Equestria arrives and with no Elements takes it over easily.

Comment posted by Hairy Konquerer deleted Aug 6th, 2015

6289131 Thanks for your interest, i guess... But please do not publish videos that include bad words... Thanks!

This was an awesome story ^-^ You rock!!!

Comment posted by GildaTheGriffon deleted Aug 31st, 2015
Comment posted by GildaTheGriffon deleted Sep 3rd, 2015

Why'd u kill everybody :raritydespair: lol nice fic so far :pinkiesmile:

Ughh, I wanna read it but then I don't :fluttershbad: rarity, AJ, Zecora, and now Flutters. They're all dead/gonna die! :raritydespair:

6428498 , read untill the end... You may not know the ending

This is a good story but this was rushed, some extra work on the details and the speakers separation need work but the idea is very good. :twilightsmile:

That is really good but bringing the other 2 I think was a wrong move because then them dying is just bringing unneeded violence and gore ( not saying that is bad also Zecora is still dead so), it also brings down the shock factor.
OK that's out of the way I have to say I really like this story and the concept of werewolves!! :pinkiecrazy::heart:

Well, Zecora is also alive. :facehoof: It would be good is someone died because...I don't have a reason but I think this is almost that kind of story especially because her animals are still dead. :pinkiecrazy: Plz let Pinkie not die at any point. :pinkiesad2: She is best pony! :pinkiecrazy:

"I love you, sugarcubes...".

Perfect last words for AJ. :ajsleepy:

I like this story but sometimes it can be confusing due to grammar and tense errors. "I could have prepared you too..." this is one line that confused me. Most of the time it's not big problem but it happens quite often and kinda ruins the mood some time. Other than that it's an awesome story! Fav and like from me!

Despite the odd grammar mistake (though to say so myself, I do make the odd slip when I'm writing), this is actually a really good story. You added pictures in as well, which is different to other stories and I do enjoy the odd transformation story now and then. Well done; you deserve the like!

This is why I need to read all the tags more often :raritycry:

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