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Deadmanx513


When faced with the evils of this world, happiness can give you the foundation to bear it, sadness gives you the wisdom to acknowledge it, and anger gives you the strength to oppose it!

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I noticed that non of the rainbooms or CMC are in this fic, so does that mean Sunset name is never cleared or is cleared but they find out too late and Sunset is gone from thier lives?

Very well written had me on the edge of my seat can't wait to see more of this.

Your grammar could use a bit of cleaning up, but aside from that it's always nice to see FSN crossovers

7509487 they just impact the story as much as the ones that are listed. but they will make an appearance latter.

7509487 but like my friend said. it's a secret on what they do.:raritywink:

7509527 thank you! and sorry for the grammar issues. i was never good at writing.:twilightblush:

7509538 My grammar isn't very good either, but I'm sure you'll just get better as you write more. Looking forward to future chapters.

7509545 thank you and i hope to entertain you even more!

Archer? As in Gilgamesh!:pinkiegasp: (reads the description)

7509853 maybe, maybe not. we'll see if the king feels like showing up at all.

7510552 Please i want to see how talks down to people. It'll make for some good written comedy or dialog .:pinkiehappy:

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Emiya or Robin, more likely. Or even Arash.

7536324 well the other half that makes up this story is from an anime.:pinkiehappy:

7537093 I can respect even if I hate Equestria Girls

Who the hell is that cowboy?!?

7562138 That's what I wanna know!

This is awesome I can't wait or the next chapter

The word I should always be capitalized.

9032293
lol yeah, sorry about that, it's a bad habit i'm trying to break.

*Screams!* FINALLY I got to read this, thank goodness, its, actually, better than I expected, and I was expecting a bit to be sure.

9073368
thank you next chapter should be up today.

witch the teen quickly snatch from her and wrapped herself in.

Which

grateful that she didn’t wake up with ammonia

Pneumonia

When I win this wore I’ll include you

war

I really like this story and I'm happy to see another update so relatively soon.

9075391
thank you. I decided on short chapters to make it easier to pump them out.

9075396
That will probably work out better in the long run

9075409
yeah. i wonder if people will guess who the new opponent is.

Good work, I wish they were longer, however, I understand you want to keep them short for a good reason. Non-The-Less good work!

9075430
thank you. I'm happy that I have you and Grahf reading this story.

Will Sunset be getting some payback inthe end? she lost her home and Job thanks to Anon A Miss, and love to see her make them pay.
Alos love to see the rainbooms grovel and crawl begging for forgiveness, particularly three of them.

Awe things are getting interesting

okay i not's there is romance and sex so who is get who

Totally forgot bout this story for a while but this chapter was just brilliant

Well done on the latest chapter

Are you referring to Ditzy Doo? Muffins? lol. Sad though. I actually prefer Ditzy. Sounds cuter. At least there's Seven Saviors out there. I'm glad there's a good Sunset/Ditzy story out there.

is the story going to be updated again ? do you know others crossovers with Fate were Sunset is the protagonist ?

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