Revenge is the purest emotion a person could feel... It is sweet as it is bitter. A young high school girl named Sunset Shimmer learns this the hard way when she desires and decides to get revenge on her former friends and classmates who accuse her of being "Anon-a-Miss".
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Oh man what she planning to do?
Well, basically this story is a character study about Sunset contemplating her decision to get revenge. If I can, the Diamond Dogs, Abacus Cinch, Applejack, and Adagio Dazzle play major roles in this.
Whats going to happen next
Looking forward to next chapter
This is pretty disjointed and I strongly suggest you find an editor, but I really have to ask:
1) Why are all of these seemingly unrelated people so concerned with cyber-bullying at CHS?
2) Even more importantly, why would anyone in-universe refer to the girls as the "Humane 5"?
Ooookay it's really difficult to believe, even for fiction, that she would just go out and buy weaponry like that. I can already tell this story is full of inconsistencies..
I knew it. My head is spinning greatly already from the story that doesn't make a lick of sense.
Needs a lot of work. .......
Okay I'm way late on this but.....
WHY DOES EVERYONE HAVE A GUN?! Seriously! It's a school! Are you trying to tell us this ends in some Mad Max style school shooting? I mean so many refrences to Mad Max in this: the movies, the description if the characters, the god damn Pursuit Interceptor itself!
Also what's next in the whole "everyone has a gun" thing? Will Gilda have a Colt Python and dress like Rick Grimes from Walking Dead? Will Applejack have a Winchester rifle like Chuck Connors? Will Pinkie Pie just go Chuck Norris on everyone?!
Otherwise interesting story
Alright before I start reading this I must ask, where's the first chapter? It seems to start from chapter 2
So Sunset has become the Punisher.
Seems legit.
Wait, Sunset why are you giving them their amulets back?! She really is broken! CMC you three are so dead, cause it's huntin season!*pulls out rocket launcher*And this is how we hunt down here in Texas!
Okay, so they're going to kill the CMC. Seems legit to me.
what happened to chapter 1?
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Gilda seems more like either The Governor or Negan, no idea who Chuck Connors is, and Pinkie seems more likely to go all Deadpool on everybody.
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He was a actor on a old TV show from the 60s called The Rifleman. He played a western sherriff with a OP lever action rifle that every time he pulled the lever he shot.
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Badass.
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Rocket launcher, how about a tank instead?
Uhhhhhhh
I feel like chapter 1 is missing.
I feel like there's a lot of missing context. As it is, this is bizarre and not great.
Where is chapter 1?
Chapter one ? ... hello ?