Flutterbat is so protective of her sister, I love it.
I also love how every normal human in their world doesn't bat an eyelash at the whole turning into a magical pony human hybrid thing, but the one vampire that sees it is like "WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!!!"
I really like the idea that this story has. I haven't seen anything quite like it before. As such, the grammar needs a total overhaul. It isn't awful, as the readers can still understand what is being said, but it does get a bit muddled at points. Otherwise, this is really quite interesting. I shall keep an eye on it. Onwards!
hmmm
Wow. So much for 'gently', Fluttershy.
Gratulation Miss Bat, you are now officialy no longer the only supernatural being in the family.^^
Flutterbat is so protective of her sister, I love it.
I also love how every normal human in their world doesn't bat an eyelash at the whole turning into a magical pony human hybrid thing, but the one vampire that sees it is like "WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!!!"
I really like the idea that this story has. I haven't seen anything quite like it before. As such, the grammar needs a total overhaul. It isn't awful, as the readers can still understand what is being said, but it does get a bit muddled at points. Otherwise, this is really quite interesting. I shall keep an eye on it. Onwards!
crunchied!!!
Vampire
Flutterbat is Ann vampire!
But is shy an vampire?