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overlord-flinx


I'm 40% jokes, 30% serious, and 20% romance. The Last 10%? You tell me. Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/overlord_flinx

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I like your writing style. It's a bit bombastic at times, but on the whole, it is very eloquent and lyrical. To that end, I am intrigued with the way you set up the...ahem..."situation"...and then followed through. I especially enjoy erotic scenes that are a "slow burn," as is the case with your second chapter. Mind you, I prefer a stallion to be involved with two (or more!) mares, but this was an interesting read.

In subsequent chapters, I would very much enjoy a..."situation"...with Pinkie and a stallion...or two! Outside of "TwiSlut," she's my Favorite pony to lewd, although I'm starting to get some traction with Derpy in my latest stories. Aaaaand if you give a few MILFs sum lovin' I wouldn't be upset!

[Side Note] I haven't seen anyone use an Em Dash in a lonnnng while...thank you for the reminder!

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Thank you very much.

And this story is open to pretty much any sort of encounters. They don’t always have to be named partners, so you might get your wish. Stay tuned.

JWR

Promising set-up. Hoping for plenty of saucy FxF stuff. Side note, but I'm a sucker for cunnilingus and fingering. Looking forward to seeing where you go next.

Okay well now I just want more RariTwi :twilightsheepish:

That was very well written. It's always refreshing to see a good bit of kink (even light kink), +1 if it manages visual language I've actually not encountered before. Was it sometimes bombastic? Whatever, maybe. For me what matters is if it's entertaining, and this was 100% riveting. I'm a fairly picky reader, so kudos to you. (I might be biased having written my own "bombastic" kink fic with Rarity as the dommy, and you scratched a very particular itch.)

Anyway, I'm curious to see what else you do! I'd love more with Rarity and Twilight, as stated, but your cover art has me looking forward to best bacon human making an appearance.

Cheers for this! Can't wait for more.

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Yes, I do tend to get a little deep in the weeds sometimes. I get a vision in my head and I get lost in making sure people see it with twenty words when five will do.

Comment posted by johnthecollie deleted Dec 18th, 2023

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I certainly hope you're taking more from the praise than anything else! I didn't mind when you went into the weeds. (and if you did, you didn't go too far IMO) :heart:

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I do appreciate it, thank you. And criticism is as important and praise. It helps growth, and it’s a good thing to acknowledge. So thank you on both parts.

So is Equestria Girls besides Sunset possible?

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Sorry, I don't exactly understand the question.

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I mean can we use more human characters besides Sunset?

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I mean, yes. Ideally the whole gambit is on offer as this takes place in an entirely different universe with entirely different standards. I'll just make up stories for everyone or anything to exist if need be. Anything to facilitate a bit of fun.

For a second, the title made me think of the South Park movie lol!

I'd love to see some futadom, or just futa in general. Also, Tempest Shadow and Captain Celaeno don't get enough love. It would be great to see some with them! And in particular Tempest/Twilight is a pairing that is surprisingly rare.

I like this series! If I can make a request, then I'd like to see Trixie seducing Cranky Doodle so that he can let her out of detention.

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Everyone’s an adult, so I don’t think that’s really in the cards. Hah. But I appreciate the enthusiasm.

Now that's how you do priority shipping! ;)

Really enjoying this series so far.

Ohh, naughty naughty there, Twilight. and quite devious on Rarity's part too. Is it... fair to perhaps think that her and Rarity are in a bit of a dom/sub relationship? Or were you imagining they're just being a bit kinky just because? (not asking to be critical; just curious)

I sure hope LZ is ready for the encore. :raritywink:

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A little of both. But one point of this story is just to take little moments and go "yeah... things can get wild".

Ohhh, now this is low-key sultry. Just perfect for it to be a Fluttershy focused entry.

Idea for a possible follow-up: Fluttershy's still working here, and has become one of the more popular members of the team with callers. She has an idea to spice things up for callers (and boost earnings ofc): ASMR

That's one way to keep employee morale up around the castle. :D

Would love to see a sub Applejack & Dom Adagio public watersports / foot fetish chapter

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Anything is possible. But I’m not so sure about the foot part. Maybe.

A Marble Pie/Macintosh fiction where the focus is on the shared peace of a quiet, intimate moment.

JWR

When's the next update?

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Likely soon-ish. I'm between some opions.

i can see this happening, gloriosa would be a champ.
i'd love to see lightning dust and Rainbow dash double teaming Spitfire

Taking the idea of a self-care day to a new level. :raritywink:

I'm loving these new chapters!
Speaking of double teaming, how about Sunset Shimmer getting double teamed by Timber Spruce and Flash Sentry? Premise being that the two always fawn over Twilight, and Sunset's pride gets the better of her so she gives the both of them some ass to prove she's hotter. Whether or not any of them are in a relationship is up to you.

mmm, u have a lovely, clever, salacious way with words and turns of phrase...very elegantly sexy!

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