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Interesting.
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Thank you.
I will keep an eye on this
This got my attention.
This just got really interesting.
Friends to the end and then a bit further. I bet they decided they knew where he was from or where he is going, so we're going to find our friend one way or another!
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Now correct me if I'm wrong, but this story is going to be like a post isekai, right?
In this case the protagonist went to Equestria/Equus, lived through all nine seasons and the 2017 movie, with some adaptations since Equestria Girls doesn't exist, and somehow he died at the end of the last season for some reason, maybe Grogar in that universe is real instead of Discord in disguise, and his friends from Equus decided to find a way to reunite with him based on his last words about his home world.
Did I hit something? Or did I travel?
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You'll have to wait and see as the story goes on, all will be explained evenly; I am glad you like it though. I thought it would be fun, but I was unsure about what the rest would think because it is new.
Intriguing.
Wasn't it the moon?
How long has he been to Equestria in his "dream"? The entire nine seasons and movie?
Wait, what the f*** is that supposed to mean!?
Damnit, what the hell did you even say?
Celestia, that's a very dumbass move. Now you got the entire media, police, militaries, governments, and possibly very, very bad groups after his poor ass, friends and family.
How long was that then?
Dude, what the actual f***!? Saying that clearly EVIL and declaring war against humanity threat makes you a billion times WORSE than Equestria's own villains have combined.
Not to mentioned, that you also threatening Elliott's own family, friends, his home, MANY innocent people, and the frickin solar system. ( Oh, and including himself if he is still on Earth. )
Heck, Elliott himself would obviously give you the "What the hell/f*** is wrong with you" speech to you, once he does meet you "again".
Are you seriously trying to get him, and his own family in immediate trouble and life-and-death danger!?
There are dangerous psychopaths/sociopaths, criminals, terrorists, and major corrupt jerks that really don't give a shit if their own life is in danger themselves. But, they don't like being provoked.
So, they will actually try to go after Elliott, or more specifically his own friend's and family ANYWAY!
And giving out the counterproductive death/war threat would make you a target to our nukes!
Seriously!?
This ain't the time for stupid jokes or trolling.
Celestia, you're a god-damned F******* MORON!
You don't just frickin threatened the entirety of humanity, and call it a day!
Oh, and you endangered Elliott, his own family and friends. Thanks a lot!
NASA can't verify anything from another galaxy except that there was a galaxy there several hundred thousand years ago.... you know speed of light and time for it to get here.
Thanks for the update!
I can already smell the big pile of stupid that the government is probably gonna pull despite Celestia’s threat to basically turn the solar system into a bunch of free floating ice planets.
Thanks for the chapter At this point, the plot thickens. What would happen?
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It was a empty threat anyways. Thank goodness.
*spits out drink* what
Quick someone go and get the tech preiest
Um yeah you see you may have the power of the sun but we have millions of nukes so yeah no
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Agreed hopefully he’ll talk some sense into her for doing that.
And as I Said before she has a control of the sun and we have millions of nukes that can wipe out the world many times over so good job you Tia you moron
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Actually, according to this article, as of 2019 the number of nuclear warheads in the entire world (not just the arsenals of any one nation) was slightly shy of fourteen thousand. Now, I don’t know what sources exactly it draws on and how reliable those in turn may be courtesy of “national security” and “top secret” and “kindly come with us, we have a few questions”, so I’m going to take that number with the required dose of sodium chloride...but no matter how I slice it, I can’t deny that even as a semi-educated stab in the dark that still sounds rather more plausible than “millions”. There’s only so much ready weapons-grade fissile material to go around, after all (most of it tightly controlled for obvious reasons), and no one yet knows how to build a fusion bomb without starting with a fission device and then building on that, so this remains a major limiting factor.
And in any event, if Celestia’s threat was real, no amount of nukes on planet Earth would help a humanity at our current or slightly-beyond-that level of technological development. Our sun makes anything we could ever come up with with plausible resources in the next thousand years or so look like a wet firecracker by comparison purely as a nuke, and that’s assuming that the alien alicorn who just said hello to a good chunk of humanity all at once by demonstrating her ability to hack into at least one of their communication systems doesn’t somehow have the power to shut it off or take it away entirely. So any rational actor would think twice before deciding to call her bluff just on the off chance that it might turn out not to be one after all...
...of course, just how much she’s taken into account that humans, not excepting our leaders in the slightest, are by and large still dumb and easily panicked monkeys is another question entirely.
They certainly were not expecting that lol
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All will be explained.
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Ok
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This is a new story, I've never seen something like this before.
where is the third crusader?
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I fixed it thanks
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:P
Thanks for the update!
Edit: I'm finally finished, but you ignored this warning anyway?
See, there is doubt here.
Elliott, how the hell can you personally seen that? When was that!? And how can you even remember that particular event from your "dream"?
You are starting to be what's called a untrustworthy/unreliable narrator.
Not unless you show undeniable proof by having Celestia show it to the rest of humanity herself. But then again, it will easily bring more panic in the long run.
And as for turning Celestia into this ridiculously broken, overpowered ( OP ), universe-busting level sun goddess?
I'm sorry author, but I call this Total BS!
And I found TWO very good reasons on why I'm debunking this.
Firstly, IF Celestia is this so "overpowered" that can make Superman, DC Animated Universe Amazo, Goku, Vegeta, Gohan, Broly, Beerus, Saitama, Over Heaven Jotaro, Over Heaven Dio, GER Giorno Giovanna, Ultra Instinct Shaggy, Fanfiction "OP" Narutos, Sonic.Exe, and even the Doom Slayer blush?
Then WHY can't she solo one-shot every single MLP villain in existence!? I get it for her for not using her full-power against Nightmare Moon/Luna, and Sunset.
But other villains like Discord, Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek, Dazzlings, Starlight, Shadow Pony, Storm King/Tempest Shadow, Cozy Glow, the Legion of Doom, and especially Grogar. Will be mere termites to Celestia.
Why even have a hard time with them anyway, if she can just annihilate them all so easily!?
It possibly makes even the Elements of Harmony, and the "Rainbow Power" from Season 4 Finale ( And the Bearers like Twilight and her friends ) are actually really worthless and unnecessary.
IF Celestia can literally frickin move over trillions of gigantic stars/suns in our entire universe, without "breaking a sweat". Over a dumb prank on Luna!? 😵
Now do you see why I'm calling this bull and bluff? ( And please don't take offense to my criticism in the end. )
And I haven't even talk about the second reason as of yet.
The second reason; Is IF Celestia ( Along with Luna, Cadence, Twilight, and Flurry Heart having similar OP powers, because they're all Alicorns. ) has vast amounts of magical power?
Then her healing magic for example, can be OP as well?
If that's the case, then WHY didn't she easily heal and save Elliott's own life in his dream!?
She can move every single star/sun ( Which is still Trillions ) in the entire frickin universe. But, she CAN'T easily use a successful healing spell on a mortal human being like Elliott?
Pfft, yeah right~.
If you think about it, it's a total bitch move of Celestia ( And/or even Luna, Twilight, Candace, and the others. ) of not using her/their full-power to save Elliott in the first place. And we wouldn't be in this "Earth Crisis" situation in the first place.
Now do you see where I'm going with this? And why I have my doubts?
Elliott, you are also F****** too. Don't exclude yourself out.
Dude, it's only billions of people. Like the estimation of our total population is seven to eight billion in the last two year's charts of 2021-2022.
It's NOT Trillions. And I highly doubt that Earth can even hold that MUCH ( 1 Trillion ) people anyway, super overpopulation and all of that.
Yeah, I feel the same way. And you should feel very upset at her for causing all of this panic. And give very unnecessary attention on you, friends, and your family.
You know, these entire sentences coincidentally reminds me of madhat886's own writing!!?? ( Where he made the once-weak ponies in canon. Into ridiculously Universe-Busting, DBZ/JoJo/DC Comics/Marvel/Anime level of OP Broken like this!!!! )
Coincidence, are you a follower of him?
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Much like you have seen Celestia and Luna control the day and night sky with ease, so has Elliot seen, as he too once disblieved the fact until Celestia did it in front of his eyes. Also if they existed in our universe I figured they might as well be actual stars galaxies and blackholes not just pantings.
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and no, I haven't heard of him until now.
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Though I wouldn't be surprised, anyone who can move the Sun and control the night should be more powerful than portrayed.
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Okay. But even then, I already give you two big debunking plot holes that you haven't solve, as of yet;
Like WHY didn't they personally one-shot the many MLP villains by themselves?!
( And sometimes, they embarrassingly LOSE against them too. Like Chrysalis, Tirek, Tempest Shadow/Storm King, and even Cozy Glow for example. And I remember that they DIDN'T even handle a simple icy snow storm that is attacking the Crystal Empire in Flurry Heart's episode. Or specifically the Season Six premier. )
And WHY didn't they save Elliott's life with a full-powered healing spell?
You said they can control trillions of the gigantic stars/suns, moons, and possibly entire planets, solar systems, galaxies, and even BLACKHOLES in our entire universe.
But they can't do a "simple healing spell" correctly on a simple human mortal like Elliott!?
My doubting and very SUS face:
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Really? It's weirdly a coincidence that both of you similarly made the ponies way too brokenly OP than they really are, in your stories ( That I read and follow so far. )
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Your going to have to wait until the story develops, just know Celesta is not the only overpowered figure out there.
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It is, what it is.
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Well, when the time comes. Hopefully, Elliott himself will be the one to ask those two questions personally. So, it will finally be answered, like I was Elliott myself.
Plus, he wouldn't be too happy with her threatening his entire home planet, and species without negative consequences either. Plus, makes her acting no better than the MLP Villains themselves for threatening innocent lives and world.
And also getting him into unnecessary attention/trouble to himself, his friends, and family to literally the entire world.
He really doesn't want a big target on his forehead ( And friends and family. ) for very, very bad and stupid people. ( Even with Celestia's rather empty threat hanging out there. )
Welp, onto the remaining parts of this chapter to react.
It's a little ridiculous that Sunset got his last name like that. But, Elliott is actually married to them already!? How would he explain this to his mom ( Or dad, where is he anyway )?
And guess Spike kept his original gender. Instead of turning him to Rule 63 Barb. Thought this is a "Mares World" Equestria setting?
He have those three as his students? Never thought he will be a teaching type?
Makes sense on why not everyone is here. They will see him once he's back in Equestria.
You mean having magic? Well duh, of course we don't have magic on Earth ( sadly. ).
At least we are way technologically advanced than Equestria. THAT was until you show us that they now have a space-faring spaceship like from Star Wars/Star Trek/Halo!?
How did they quickly have space flight like that? And how did Elliott even help them with that? He is NOT a rocket scientist or something like that.
You mean ex-presidents for Obama and Trump? We don't have multiple "active" U.S. Presidents in office at once.
Hopefully, specifically one of them doesn't do something very stupid against our Ponies or Elliott. And I hope you know what I'm talking about?
Well, she is a Alicorn after all.
What's that supposed to be mean? How long was he gone when he "died"? I know he "died" at the finale battle against the legion of doom in Season 9.
Thanks for the update!
Wonderful chapter.
Keep it up.
i would had gibbs her by now for the repeating of bye bye sun by now.
gibbs-to slap someone on the back of the head out of annoyance named by Gibbs from NCIS
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Agreed. I mean, saying that threat makes her a damn villain!!! ( Even if it's a stupid empty threat. President Biden, ex-president's Obama and Trump, our U.S. military, the UN leaders, and everybody else DON'T know that. )
How is she any different than the other various villains that they faced in Equestria!?
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All will be explained, everything she does has a reason too it; Whether it be smart or stupid is for you to judge
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All will be explained, everything she does has a reason too it; Whether it be smart or stupid is for you to judge
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seriouly though eather an equastian or the MC needs to gibbs her for it
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Yeah, I gonna side this person for saying straight facts.
Good God Biden did you not see someone try to assassinate Princess Celestia I don't think all Humanity will be welcoming to the Ponies. True you caught the would be assassin but that alone should tell you not ALL Humanity is going to be welcoming
Story was believable till you had biden, obama and trump together...
Thanks for the chapter
What is this a crossover of?