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Star Dawn

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I've actually been working on a story with nearly the exact same premise; a human male in an all female Equestria. The set up is different, though. I was planning on posting it after I finished the third chapter.

Kind of wonder, if it is a world of only females. How do ponies...or all other species to be honest even know what a "male" is. Or why suddenly would they be attracted to it.

Stories where that little detail is never explain always confused me.

Or when the explanation into why only confirm why they wouldn't find him attractive, like: "A curse kill our male population for thousands of years" "if that the case, how do the recent generation even know what a male looks like? Wouldn't that be like if a blob unknown creature suddenly appear here in the human world and out of nowhere everyone is attracted to it?"

Hope this story tackles a little bit that issue. Jeje you can always just say that "male pheromones just do that right away"

Are they regular canon ponies, bat ponies, dragons, griffons, changelings, yaks, zebras, hippogliffs/sea ponies, kirins, etc..? Or are they all Anthro?

Literally an Roleplay premise everyone of us did at one point in our lives. Don't lie, we all RP'd this scenerio.

poor big mac, consigned to non existance by the female matriarchy, also shining armor and doctor whooves.

F for the poor male ponies erased from existance.

Surprisingly not, considering I'm rather perverted. I'd like to have some makei friends thank you very much.

Just leave me Twilight and Luna. :raritywink:

Caught two typos.

II was just your slightly above-average dude, living in an average community, just trying to live with what I had.


...Izekai'd into this world.


all will be explained

Nice work with this, hope to see more

Nope. Not me.

If I had to roleplay something like this, it would be a 'few males' scenario instead.

My best guess involves artists, writers, games, "toys", and other means of keeping the myth alive and kick-starting the libido. Historical romance might be a very popular genre in an all-female society.

That makes sense, like the legend that originate Nightmare Night and the bed time story of the mare of the moon.

It could work, like the legend of the elusive "male" but at full force with publicity and commercialism to ensure it not miss interpreted or lose details. (kind like Santa Claus when you think about it), making a...like an adult bed time story perhaps?

Jeje that would really make quite a twist of a lot of things in a all female society, perfect for writers that love to construct erotica's

you're going to throw in time travel/boopstrap paradox already? Jesus.

Comment posted by Star Dawn deleted January 15th
Comment posted by Star Dawn deleted January 15th

No, it’s not timetravel I assure you

well he say it a cross over story. So this explain what is the other story

It's the proper term of his kind." Twilight nodded her head.

You meant different "gender"?

This reminds me of "Bad Touch!"

Actually inspired off of it

Amongst other stories

Why does this story seem so familiar now? I think I read it somewhere else. You know that feeling that you think you read something but you can't put your finger on it?And it drives you crazy trying to remember where you did

Thank you for everything, if you dislike this then I apologize, and I wish you luck finding other interesting reads out there.

"The Elements of Harmony." she began, " are six supernatural artifacts representing subjective aspects of harmony. They are six: Honesty, Kindness, Laughter, Generosity, Loyalty, and Magic. They have been wielded on rare occasions, particularly during events marked by danger and anarchy as a last resort to restore and enforce the balance of peace and order. However, the effects of their use are generally temporary and non-lethal, usually a form of banishment or imprisonment."

Luv your summary of the Elements of Harmony.

Good story, however, some editing is very much needed. Punctuations are off here and there, along with the incorrect use of various words.

This story has already been done. Did you get permission to re-write it?

Comment posted by Star Dawn deleted January 17th

Of course it has, name a single story with a concept that hasn’t been done, I don’t need any author’s permission because it is my work that I worked hard on.

I don’t mind if you dislike my story, but don’t try and accuse me of taking someone else’s work.

Let me rephrase and explain.

I read a story in which Celestia was given no choice but to kill her love back in the early days of Equestria. Instead, she sends him to another world and he remains there being raised from childhood with no memory of her. They bring him back to Equestria and she tries to make him remember their life together before the incident.

I suppose this is only similar. It was just so close with the time travel stuff it sounded like you had taken the idea and made it your own. Write it if you want, I don't even remember the name of the story I am talking about. I can't search it and I don't have it saved in my favorites or anything. So it's not like I can say you're straight up stealing the idea.

Keep writing.

Just doing some last minute editing to make this story better, I deleted it because it didn’t make since with the storyline at that time, I will introduce it at a much smoother time.

I hope you enjoyed this chapter and have a good day

"And we still have Princess Luna Princess Candace and Shining armor...my brother and his wife."

This is clearly a mistake. You meant Gleaming Shield, and her sister.

I took another sip of my coffee.

i get tomska vibes from this sentence, specifically 'the hole' video

What concept hasn’t been done, I am just trying my own twist on things.

no . I don't think so.
I'm not fond of anthro.
so I would not have read it

There's always one of those type of people.

The Cowboy pony-wearing orange pegasus rolled her eyes..."Don't be silly, Sugahcube," she said, "Mah mom told me that males do...or did exist.,... and she never lies.


If you see any mistakes let me know so I can correct it.

Comment posted by Star Dawn deleted January 28th
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