• Member Since 7th Mar, 2022
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Star Dawn


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A human Turned Unicorn tries to find out how he got here while trying to survive; he is not alone either, his game character is here as welt

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Comments ( 10 )

Why are you rewriting this story?

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I wasn't satisfied and thought that it could be better, at a more developed pace.

Be sure to write more next. I'll save.

Interesting concept will keep an eye on this

Ye, I have no idea what's happening. There's nothing bad about the story, it's well written. But killing a tiger for lunch out of nowhere, I don't get that. I read because I'm curious about how you will handle the alicorn part. But it's unlikely that I will continue to read too much further. I'll bookmark it anyway just in case.

Any specific reason why you made them anthro-alicorn?

I'm still looking forward to more

All right, let’s see where this goes

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But it's cancelled?

Man the pop up looked interesting

Not bad.
However, you at once gave to many information and everything is so fast.
You idea is awesome, but you need to develop it.

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