I have no idea what I'm doing. \/(0.0)\/
Anonymous the human has been summoned to Equestria just outside Ponyville, by a powerful unicorn who died in the process, when the spell he cast transferred all his energy, which included life energy.
With no way back, new powers and new friends. Anon tries to adjust to his new life but nothing is ever perfect.
This is set in season 7.
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with great power, comes great responsibility
I’m already interested in anon’s powers/magic.
I’d honestly be ok with luna being in my dreams.
Knowing what we know about canterlot this shouldn’t really be a surprise.
I didn’t expect anon to have a soft side.
Is it like a bulletproof vest?
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Somehow never thought of it that way. I was gonna say more like a stab vest but with the bruises, I believe you would be more correct.
I wouldn’t say that’s sparring but it is close.
I’m a little confused. What was he doing before?
How does he know about that?
Is there some sort of demon inside of him?
Q: I’m a little confused. What was he doing before?
A: He was basically just creating objects as they appeared to look. Like looking at an image of an object and not being able to know its properties other than its appearance.
Q:How does he know about that?
A:I believe my wording was poor with 'mana pools'. I tried to express that Anon could feel his energy being drained as he used more of his magic, and that there was a limit to how much he could do before he ran dry.
Q:Is there some sort of demon inside of him?
A: We all have demons inside. Our actions are the result of how well we can control them.
I greatly appreciate the questions. I'll try to be more clear in future with these descriptions. To be honest I lost half the chapter when my browser crashed, in my haste to retype and remember everything I probably missed out some descriptive details. Apologies.
Interesting
Good work with the chapter
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Thank you for the kind words.
Ponyville
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Woops, must have forgotten about it when i was checking spelling. Should be fixed now.
REPO MAN BABYYYY
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I honestly didn't realize how close it was to the movie until I was proof reading it. I'm glad someone got the unintended reference.
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I didn’t see this until now. So sorry.
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No worries.
Actually I agree with that last line.
My Roommate From Tartarus. This is gonna be fun.
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Welp. I know what the next chapter title is going to be.
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Sweet! And I can't wait to see what comes of it.
interesting story so far
So Azzy is my new favorite character and will likely remain so for the foreseeable future. Just the right amount of playful brattiness to make her equal parts endearing and aggravating.
As far as mímos goes, all I could gather from a bit of searching was that it translates from Greek and Spanish as "mime" or probably more appropriately "mimic". Apparently it can also mean pampering or a sign of affection in Spanish, which would kind of explain why she was cleaning the living room, maybe? I dunno; whatever the real reason behind it is, she's gonna be a fun addition. Can't wait to see her antics out in public.
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Damn, you can have the whole box of Scooby Snacks. Appreciate the praise.
These kind of comments are a god send. Genuine thanks my guy. Please feel free to ask questions and such.
Love this chapter and love azrael flare
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Glad you like it!
I’m confused, he has made references and named dropped her a few times already?
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I'm afraid I do not know what you are referring to. Would you mind explaining?
He has made references to pinkie and some interactions with her, but in the chapter I commented on it made it seem like she had never met him before.
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Ah I see. I was trying to portray that he knew enough about them to make that specific 'threat' against Twilight. I imagine she has told Anon about her friends to try and attempt him to make more friends.
Similar to how a friend or relative might talk about their friend or relative a lot. Then when you meet them finally, you know a lot about them. That was the feel I was going for.
Thank you for the comment. I will try and be more clear about similar situations in the future.
Cliffhanger really?!
Great chapter
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I say good timing for it
"I choose-"
"you, Pikachu!"
Joke aside, I like how Anon is giving Azrael her own agency, which has to be far more than any demon of Tartarus has ever been afforded. Hoping that, provided all goes well in the next scene, she has the chance to stick around for the long term rather being dismissed back to the underworld.
Also, I've seen you write "on que" a couple of times. It should be "queue" for future reference. Looking forward to the next chapter.
EDIT: Okay, so it turns out I was wildly and completely wrong about that correction.
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Thank you the comment as always. The misspelling should be fixed now.
That begs the question though. What would Anon be like as a Pokemon trainer?
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Really sorry about that.
I just went back over what I said and my "correction" was completely incorrect. The real phrase is supposed to be "on cue", and I don't know why I thought it was the other spelling. Just goes to show I don't need to be proofreading when half-asleep.
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No problem my dude. It now should be all good. You had good intentions and got there in the end, all I care about.
I'll be honest I totally thought Twilight was gonna enter full freak out mode
Great chapter love it
Great chapter
I think you meant, stalls. [Commented, because you requested us to yell at you if we found a mistake.]
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I did indeed. Thanks for the correction, should be fixed.
very good, the demon is sweet, but in a world of happy ponies it makes sense.
So you just need to learn to think.
great chapter
Funny how a literal demon from Tartarus seems to be the best thing that has happened to Anon so far, especially if that dream of his past life is anything to go by. No doubt Luna is inevitably going to stumble in on those if they begin to worsen. Again, I love the dynamic between Azrael and Anon, and I can't wait to see it develop further.
Good chapter as always
Enjoying this story so far, hope to see more.