Edit: I'm finally finished, but you ignored this warning anyway?
"Can she really move the sun...."
"The newscast watched with bated breath, "That actually is a good question, can she move the sun?" a news reporter asked his cowoker, who gave him a deadpanned, "Of course not, have you seen how big and hot our sun is. There is no way that one person can destroy our sun without being killed themselves."
"I don't know..." another voice said nervously, "They are aliens and we know nothing about them....we should most likely believe that they could, even if they are bluffing..."
"I guess that the only person who truly knows that is Elliot Jackson himself." the feminine voice said, "That poor guy, I almost pity him."
See, there is doubt here.
"Hey.." a guard whispered, "Can she really destroy our sun?"
I nodded, "She can...and so much more with practical ease."
"H-how can you be so sure..." the gaurd asked more nervously...
"I have seen her do it myself." I muttered, "Manipulate all of the stars in the known universe just to prank her sisters..."
"B-but..." The guard visibly paled, "That's like trillions of Suns, planets...galaxies...and blackholes, "Your telling me that she manipulated all of that just to prank her sister?"
I nodded, "Without breaking a sweat too."
"Oh..." The Guard said as the guards within hearing distance paled too, "We are fucked aren't we?"
No amounts of nukes can ever attest to the infinite power of the known universe. And the fact that this...Princess Celestia can wield it all like it's...like it's nothing but a children's plaything then...
Elliott, how the hell can you personally seen that? When was that!? And how can you even remember that particular event from your "dream"?
You are starting to be what's called a untrustworthy/unreliable narrator.
Not unless you show undeniable proof by having Celestia show it to the rest of humanity herself. But then again, it will easily bring more panic in the long run.
And as for turning Celestia into this ridiculously broken, overpowered ( OP ), universe-busting level sun goddess?
I'm sorry author, but I call this Total BS!
And I found TWO very good reasons on why I'm debunking this.
Firstly, IF Celestia is this so "overpowered" that can make Superman, DC Animated Universe Amazo, Goku, Vegeta, Gohan, Broly, Beerus, Saitama, Over Heaven Jotaro, Over Heaven Dio, GER Giorno Giovanna, Ultra Instinct Shaggy, Fanfiction "OP" Narutos, Sonic.Exe, and even the Doom Slayer blush?
Then WHY can't she solo one-shot every single MLP villain in existence!? I get it for her for not using her full-power against Nightmare Moon/Luna, and Sunset.
But other villains like Discord, Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek, Dazzlings, Starlight, Shadow Pony, Storm King/Tempest Shadow, Cozy Glow, the Legion of Doom, and especially Grogar. Will be mere termites to Celestia.
Why even have a hard time with them anyway, if she can just annihilate them all so easily!?
It possibly makes even the Elements of Harmony, and the "Rainbow Power" from Season 4 Finale ( And the Bearers like Twilight and her friends ) are actually really worthless and unnecessary.
IF Celestia can literally frickin move over trillions of gigantic stars/suns in our entire universe, without "breaking a sweat". Over a dumb prank on Luna!? 😵
Now do you see why I'm calling this bull and bluff? ( And please don't take offense to my criticism in the end. )
And I haven't even talk about the second reason as of yet.
The second reason; Is IF Celestia ( Along with Luna, Cadence, Twilight, and Flurry Heart having similar OP powers, because they're all Alicorns. ) has vast amounts of magical power?
Then her healing magic for example, can be OP as well?
If that's the case, then WHY didn't she easily heal and save Elliott's own life in his dream!?
She can move every single star/sun ( Which is still Trillions ) in the entire frickin universe. But, she CAN'T easily use a successful healing spell on a mortal human being like Elliott?
Pfft, yeah right~.
If you think about it, it's a total bitch move of Celestia ( And/or even Luna, Twilight, Candace, and the others. ) of not using her/their full-power to save Elliott in the first place. And we wouldn't be in this "Earth Crisis" situation in the first place.
Now do you see where I'm going with this? And why I have my doubts?
"If you guys don't do anything to piss her off..." I said with a nervous eye-smile, I wasn't nervous about that, I knew she wasn't going to do that."Then yes...you are most totally fucked...."
Elliott, you are also F****** too. Don't exclude yourself out.
I was more nervous at the fact that I was now the center of attention in front of billions and trillions of people all across the world.
Dude, it's only billions of people. Like the estimation of our total population is seven to eight billion in the last two year's charts of 2021-2022.
It's NOT Trillions. And I highly doubt that Earth can even hold that MUCH ( 1 Trillion ) people anyway, super overpopulation and all of that.
"Tia what in the actually fuck!"
Yeah, I feel the same way. And you should feel very upset at her for causing all of this panic. And give very unnecessary attention on you, friends, and your family.
You know, these entire sentences coincidentally reminds me of madhat886's own writing!!?? ( Where he made the once-weak ponies in canon. Into ridiculously Universe-Busting, DBZ/JoJo/DC Comics/Marvel/Anime level of OP Broken like this!!!! )
11536508 Much like you have seen Celestia and Luna control the day and night sky with ease, so has Elliot seen, as he too once disblieved the fact until Celestia did it in front of his eyes. Also if they existed in our universe I figured they might as well be actual stars galaxies and blackholes not just pantings.
Okay. But even then, I already give you two big debunking plot holes that you haven't solve, as of yet;
Like WHY didn't they personally one-shot the many MLP villains by themselves?!
( And sometimes, they embarrassingly LOSE against them too. Like Chrysalis, Tirek, Tempest Shadow/Storm King, and even Cozy Glow for example. And I remember that they DIDN'T even handle a simple icy snow storm that is attacking the Crystal Empire in Flurry Heart's episode. Or specifically the Season Six premier. )
And WHY didn't they save Elliott's life with a full-powered healing spell?
You said they can control trillions of the gigantic stars/suns, moons, and possibly entire planets, solar systems, galaxies, and even BLACKHOLES in our entire universe.
But they can't do a "simple healing spell" correctly on a simple human mortal like Elliott!?
Really? It's weirdly a coincidence that both of you similarly made the ponies way too brokenly OP than they really are, in your stories ( That I read and follow so far. )
Well, when the time comes. Hopefully, Elliott himself will be the one to ask those two questions personally. So, it will finally be answered, like I was Elliott myself.
Plus, he wouldn't be too happy with her threatening his entire home planet, and species without negative consequences either. Plus, makes her acting no better than the MLP Villains themselves for threatening innocent lives and world.
And also getting him into unnecessary attention/trouble to himself, his friends, and family to literally the entire world.
He really doesn't want a big target on his forehead ( And friends and family. ) for very, very bad and stupid people. ( Even with Celestia's rather empty threat hanging out there. )
Welp, onto the remaining parts of this chapter to react.
Celestia stood infront of the *hatchet* patiently waiting. On her left stood Sunset Shimmer Jackson, Her sister as a fellow wife. On her right stood Twilight Sparkle, an Older Sister figure towards Elliot Jackson.... Spike the Dragon, Elliot's little brother.
It's a little ridiculous that Sunset got his last name like that. But, Elliott is actually married to them already!? How would he explain this to his mom ( Or dad, where is he anyway )?
And guess Spike kept his original gender. Instead of turning him to Rule 63 Barb. Thought this is a "Mares World" Equestria setting?
Behind them, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, all three of them now in there teens, they were the students of Elliot Jackson. All three of them had taken a liking and a dedication to his teachings and promise, and upholding it as his own.
He have those three as his students? Never thought he will be a teaching type?
A couple of Royal guards were also stationed around them as Escorts and Guards.
Some of the Main six *weren't* there, as they needed to protect Equestria when they were gone themselves, Luna wasn't there, as much as she wanted to be, because they needed a ruling figure while Celestia was away.
Makes sense on why not everyone is here. They will see him once he's back in Equestria.
It didn't take long for them to be surrounded, Celestia closed her eyes, and sensed the level of energy that they had; a trick she had learned from Elli during his time in Equestria.
She opened her eyes and sighed, it was as she'd thought. They'd basically had none.
You mean having magic? Well duh, of course we don't have magic on Earth ( sadly. ).
At least we are way technologically advanced than Equestria. THAT was until you show us that they now have a space-faring spaceship like from Star Wars/Star Trek/Halo!?
How did they quickly have space flight like that? And how did Elliott even help them with that? He is NOT a rocket scientist or something like that.
As the view of the white house got closer and closer, so did the crowd of military personnel, and national guards, as well as the crowd of citizens behind the gate. Every single one of them had eyes on either the vehicles or the guards and military surrounding the spacecraft. in the corner of my eye I spotted President Biden, as well as *ex-president's* Trump and Obama, along with there wifes... I also spotted a couple of Celebrities.
You mean ex-presidents for Obama and Trump? We don't have multiple "active" U.S. Presidents in office at once.
Hopefully, specifically one of them doesn't do something very stupid against our Ponies or Elliott. And I hope you know what I'm talking about?
A being that stood very tall, she towered over everyone....as well as the rest of the aliens that came besides her of behind her.
Well, she is a Alicorn after all.
"Ow!" I groaned, as I was dog-piled to the ground, "Oh Girls...Okay girls I know, I'm here....OW you girls *definitely* aren't little anymore!"
What's that supposed to be mean? How long was he gone when he "died"? I know he "died" at the finale battle against the legion of doom in Season 9.
They certainly were not expecting that lol
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All will be explained.
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Ok
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This is a new story, I've never seen something like this before.
where is the third crusader?
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I fixed it thanks
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Thanks for the update!
Edit: I'm finally finished, but you ignored this warning anyway?
See, there is doubt here.
Elliott, how the hell can you personally seen that? When was that!? And how can you even remember that particular event from your "dream"?
You are starting to be what's called a untrustworthy/unreliable narrator.
Not unless you show undeniable proof by having Celestia show it to the rest of humanity herself. But then again, it will easily bring more panic in the long run.
And as for turning Celestia into this ridiculously broken, overpowered ( OP ), universe-busting level sun goddess?
I'm sorry author, but I call this Total BS!
And I found TWO very good reasons on why I'm debunking this.
Firstly, IF Celestia is this so "overpowered" that can make Superman, DC Animated Universe Amazo, Goku, Vegeta, Gohan, Broly, Beerus, Saitama, Over Heaven Jotaro, Over Heaven Dio, GER Giorno Giovanna, Ultra Instinct Shaggy, Fanfiction "OP" Narutos, Sonic.Exe, and even the Doom Slayer blush?
Then WHY can't she solo one-shot every single MLP villain in existence!? I get it for her for not using her full-power against Nightmare Moon/Luna, and Sunset.
But other villains like Discord, Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek, Dazzlings, Starlight, Shadow Pony, Storm King/Tempest Shadow, Cozy Glow, the Legion of Doom, and especially Grogar. Will be mere termites to Celestia.
Why even have a hard time with them anyway, if she can just annihilate them all so easily!?
It possibly makes even the Elements of Harmony, and the "Rainbow Power" from Season 4 Finale ( And the Bearers like Twilight and her friends ) are actually really worthless and unnecessary.
IF Celestia can literally frickin move over trillions of gigantic stars/suns in our entire universe, without "breaking a sweat". Over a dumb prank on Luna!? 😵
Now do you see why I'm calling this bull and bluff? ( And please don't take offense to my criticism in the end. )
And I haven't even talk about the second reason as of yet.
The second reason; Is IF Celestia ( Along with Luna, Cadence, Twilight, and Flurry Heart having similar OP powers, because they're all Alicorns. ) has vast amounts of magical power?
Then her healing magic for example, can be OP as well?
If that's the case, then WHY didn't she easily heal and save Elliott's own life in his dream!?
She can move every single star/sun ( Which is still Trillions ) in the entire frickin universe. But, she CAN'T easily use a successful healing spell on a mortal human being like Elliott?
Pfft, yeah right~.
If you think about it, it's a total bitch move of Celestia ( And/or even Luna, Twilight, Candace, and the others. ) of not using her/their full-power to save Elliott in the first place. And we wouldn't be in this "Earth Crisis" situation in the first place.
Now do you see where I'm going with this? And why I have my doubts?
Elliott, you are also F****** too. Don't exclude yourself out.
Dude, it's only billions of people. Like the estimation of our total population is seven to eight billion in the last two year's charts of 2021-2022.
It's NOT Trillions. And I highly doubt that Earth can even hold that MUCH ( 1 Trillion ) people anyway, super overpopulation and all of that.
Yeah, I feel the same way. And you should feel very upset at her for causing all of this panic. And give very unnecessary attention on you, friends, and your family.
You know, these entire sentences coincidentally reminds me of madhat886's own writing!!?? ( Where he made the once-weak ponies in canon. Into ridiculously Universe-Busting, DBZ/JoJo/DC Comics/Marvel/Anime level of OP Broken like this!!!! )
Coincidence, are you a follower of him?
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Much like you have seen Celestia and Luna control the day and night sky with ease, so has Elliot seen, as he too once disblieved the fact until Celestia did it in front of his eyes. Also if they existed in our universe I figured they might as well be actual stars galaxies and blackholes not just pantings.
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and no, I haven't heard of him until now.
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Though I wouldn't be surprised, anyone who can move the Sun and control the night should be more powerful than portrayed.
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Okay. But even then, I already give you two big debunking plot holes that you haven't solve, as of yet;
Like WHY didn't they personally one-shot the many MLP villains by themselves?!
( And sometimes, they embarrassingly LOSE against them too. Like Chrysalis, Tirek, Tempest Shadow/Storm King, and even Cozy Glow for example. And I remember that they DIDN'T even handle a simple icy snow storm that is attacking the Crystal Empire in Flurry Heart's episode. Or specifically the Season Six premier. )
And WHY didn't they save Elliott's life with a full-powered healing spell?
You said they can control trillions of the gigantic stars/suns, moons, and possibly entire planets, solar systems, galaxies, and even BLACKHOLES in our entire universe.
But they can't do a "simple healing spell" correctly on a simple human mortal like Elliott!?
My doubting and very SUS face:
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Really? It's weirdly a coincidence that both of you similarly made the ponies way too brokenly OP than they really are, in your stories ( That I read and follow so far. )
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Your going to have to wait until the story develops, just know Celesta is not the only overpowered figure out there.
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It is, what it is.
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Well, when the time comes. Hopefully, Elliott himself will be the one to ask those two questions personally. So, it will finally be answered, like I was Elliott myself.
Plus, he wouldn't be too happy with her threatening his entire home planet, and species without negative consequences either. Plus, makes her acting no better than the MLP Villains themselves for threatening innocent lives and world.
And also getting him into unnecessary attention/trouble to himself, his friends, and family to literally the entire world.
He really doesn't want a big target on his forehead ( And friends and family. ) for very, very bad and stupid people. ( Even with Celestia's rather empty threat hanging out there. )
Welp, onto the remaining parts of this chapter to react.
It's a little ridiculous that Sunset got his last name like that. But, Elliott is actually married to them already!? How would he explain this to his mom ( Or dad, where is he anyway )?
And guess Spike kept his original gender. Instead of turning him to Rule 63 Barb. Thought this is a "Mares World" Equestria setting?
He have those three as his students? Never thought he will be a teaching type?
Makes sense on why not everyone is here. They will see him once he's back in Equestria.
You mean having magic? Well duh, of course we don't have magic on Earth ( sadly. ).
At least we are way technologically advanced than Equestria. THAT was until you show us that they now have a space-faring spaceship like from Star Wars/Star Trek/Halo!?
How did they quickly have space flight like that? And how did Elliott even help them with that? He is NOT a rocket scientist or something like that.
You mean ex-presidents for Obama and Trump? We don't have multiple "active" U.S. Presidents in office at once.
Hopefully, specifically one of them doesn't do something very stupid against our Ponies or Elliott. And I hope you know what I'm talking about?
Well, she is a Alicorn after all.
What's that supposed to be mean? How long was he gone when he "died"? I know he "died" at the finale battle against the legion of doom in Season 9.