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darf


pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here

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Lyra misses Bonbon the same way she does every day, aching to see her even tho only a few hours have separated the two of them. What bubbles thru her head while she sits at home? Can this story even be reconciled as pony fanfiction? Read on to find out!

Note: Contains references to real world drugs and sex. Don't read if you don't like those things. Not fully edited because too many stories. Sorry.

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Holy shit. He returns bearing gifts! Four stories at once?! darf, you are, and have always been, awesome. :ajsmug:

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After all this time... Darf comes back to reach the big six nine.

I think the appropriate phrase here is 'Someone's come back with a bang, haven't they?'

Sex is a treat, not a constant. It's as sweet and delectable as a caramel apple.

*through

*though

Glad to see you're back, but wtf?

Well, that was as crushing as it set out to be. Not every day can be a good (or even not-really-good-at-all-but-okay-sure-whatever) day… There are enough hints throughout that I really cannot say with certainty[1] whether or not things will get better (but I'd like to think they will.)

Quite well done.[2] And welcome back.


[1]Inasmuch as any forecasting of the actions of others can be said to be certain, even as consistent with the mental model from which the prediction originated.
[2]This also applies to the majority[3] of this flurry of return-entries.
[3]No rounding.

I reviewed this story!

My review can be found here.

These feels. Yeah, I can't say I'm unfamiliar. Take your like, just for addressing a hard topic.

An interesting tale, to be sure. A mood of undeniable realism perfectly captured.

I haven't expected a deconstruction of the usual "Bon Bon works while Lyra is a lazy bum" trope, but I like deconstructions, so it's fine. :twilightsmile:

And it's a slap in the face. At least, that's my knee jerk reaction to this story, and the utter stomping it does to the romanticized notion of a happy relationship. Extreme co-dependency stuck out to me pretty easily. Ugh. Makes me glad and depressed to be single all at once...

The night sky was like… Lyra sighed. No metaphors.

Aaaaaand he's back. And boy am I glad to see it. :pinkiehappy:

Well written, terribly real.

The whole problem with life is dealing with other people, and if not them, then the other-other people the other people we care about all have to interact with, all leading to having to deal with events and consequences of things outside out control when all we want is some blunts and sex. Or so seems to be the moral here. :derpytongue2:

Poor crazy Lyra.

In real life my 2nd ex loved having her back and her feet rubbed and massaged and it could make her sigh in pleasure after her long day.

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