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I'm still alive, probably.

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This story is a sequel to It's Me Forever


Thirty years.

Thirty years I have sat here, rotting. Thirty years I have been caught in the painful spasms of my own dead body as I am forced to relive my own death again, and again, and again, and again.

No more.

I do not know how, but I have been given the chance to live again.

Though those wretched foals may be gone, there is new blood to spill.

I will not waste the chance.


Written with the author of the prequel's permission. Obvious fnaf 3 spoilers are obvious.

Editing help provided by Doccular42

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Then the place burns down with him in it and then he gets sent to hell to suffer for all time and gets turned into some demon child's bitch.

Nice. XD

As Scott Cawthon would say: "Awesome! That was good stuff! :)"

Wow... nice going! I love the FNAF series! :pinkiehappy: Have a mustache and a like! :moustache:

This is fucking amazing! Just as good as the first if not, then it's better!! (No offense
5705708 :twilightsheepish:)

5705822 None taken. This was an excellent story. :twilightsmile:

5705873 This was. I kind of hope there'll be a third one.

Good job, good job.

Interesting taking things from Springtrap's POV instead of the standard.

I like it, I really like it. *thumbs up*

That's.... That's creepy.
Follows the storyline perfectly, but still creepy.
+1.

Purple man choose his path...now the path he takes will be for etenity...he may kill as a animatronic but in the end he will be nothing more then a puppet to eternity a slave to his endless torment...He will be forgotten not as an animatronic but by what he was...All this is what he will do for eternity...in the end he is here forever never to be at peace..his name may now be spring trap but his soul is stuck here unlike his victum who have passed on. He does not realize that now and forever he will be damned

I was going to wright a story somewhat like this one except I ended up changing topic

TGM

5705657

Thanks :3


5705708

Scott said that? :rainbowhuh:


5705760

I see your mustache, and I raise you my own. :moustache:


5705822

:twilightsheepish: Oh stop it, you're making me blush.


5705873

:pinkiesmile: Thank you, that means a lot.


5705944

I step through the door. The noise gets his attention—

"NO! FUCK YOU! GET BACK OUT THERE YOU BITCH!

Alternative rage ending...? :duck:


5706122

I was trying to keep to the theme of the prequel, focusing more on the animatronic's thoughts and feelings about things more so than anything else. :twilightsmile:


5706627

Good... good.

Thank you.:pinkiehappy:


5707272

Purple man is a psychopath. He may be stuck here for eternity, but he is more focused on the here and now. And now, he's part of an attraction that is supposed to hunt people down and 'kill' them (not really supposed to kill them, but that is what his animatronic is programmed to do for this horror attraction, and with a murderer inside he goes beyond what he's supposed to do). Yes, he is indeed paying for his mistakes.


5707353

orly? :trixieshiftright:

5708457 Well this is awesome! :pinkiehappy: It captures such a creepy feeling!

Great story. Deserves an original song.

I am trapped here, trembling in fear
Waiting out this forsaken night
I get the eerie feeling that something just isn't right
Bring up the camera and what do I see?
Some kind of mechanic atrocity
It look back at me and chills my soul
And the dread that follows, it swallows me up whole!

Five Nights at Freddy's! (Why on earth did I choose to stay?)
Five Nights at Freddy's! (Why won't the nightmares go away?)
Five Nights at Freddy's! (When will I see the light of day?)
I do not want to spend another night
Here at Freddy Fazbear's Fright!

I hear a sound, it's all around
I spot a shadow pass by the door
Something ducked under the window, I can't take this anymore!
And the ventilation went offline
For probably the seventh time
What is wrong with this piece of shit?
This is a nightmare and I want to get out of it!

Five Nights at Freddy's! (I see and hear the phantoms groan!!)
Five Nights at Freddy's! (I know that I am not alone!)
Five Nights at Freddy's! (I just want to go back home!)
I do not want to spend another night
Here at Freddy Fazbear's Fright!

I'm getting jump-scared by monsters that aren't there
I'm seeing phantoms that lost their way to Heaven
There's a killer in the halls, painting purple on the walls
Carrying on his work from nineteen-eighty-seven!

I feel less lonely suddenly
Is there something in here with me?
I move the camera away...
NOW IN THIS PLACE YOUR SOUL WILL FOREVER STAY!

Five Nights at Freddy's! (Imprisoned in this office space)
Five Nights at Freddy's!! (Get me out of this creepy place!)
Five Nights at Freddy's!! (There's no hope, there's no escape!)
I really don't want to spend another night
Here again, at Freddy Fazbear's Fright!

If anyone wants to make a music/song out of this, I demand credit for the lyrics and I want links to my YouTube channel made!

5708457 Yeah, it was on Markiplier's first FNAF animated video.

TGM

5709504

Awesome job with the song! Do you write music for a living or something? :rainbowhuh:


5709549

Oh! I never even knew that! I just looked it up and saw it, that's awesome. :)

5709593 Nope. Haven't ever made anything musical or ever written a song and sung it or had anyone sang for me.

I do a bit of poetry in my spare time when I'm not doing novice-level YouTube MLP animations for fun. Yes, that was totally a cheap poor excuse of a self-promotion right there. Sue me. XD

Please don't.

Why do you ask, if I may ask, I ask?

TGM

5709635

I was just curious, it's not every day I see people on this site making poetry/music about stuff they read. ;)

I'll check your stuff out when I get some free time.

5709644 Really? Well, so long as you're doing it out of your own free will and not just for my sake. XD

Like I said, I'm kinda a noob animator, since I haven't the fortune of owning the sort of animation software or equipment that other animators have, but I make do with what I've got and I try to come up with a good video from time to time.

So, thank you, is all I can say really. I hope whatever content of mine you look at will amuse and entertain you!

(bows politely, smacks head on laptop)

OW!

Why do I keep doing that and then typing it out in a comment? I must be weird.

Oh wait, I am!

Anyways thanks dude!

I f***ing hate him. Alot. If I ever meet him, (Warning, Brutal) F***ing kick him so hard in the balls that he would spit seamen for a week. No joke. I hate him. Nice fanfic, though!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Dear Sir Knight deleted Mar 8th, 2015

Good read. Your writing made me feel hate for the Purple Stallion, and that's good.

*slow clap*

5711501 That description... instinctive testicular shield activated...

5718329 Sorry... I just hate him. Alot.

5711501 Remind me to not get on your bad side.

5723461 Ok! Dont get on my bad side!

He always comes back...

"Thirty years I have sat here, rotting. Thirty years I have been caught in the painful spasms of my own dead body as I am forced to relive my own death again, and again, and again, and again."

I also created a story about Springtrap.

5709504 I can imagine this as a song. Right now. Music and everything.
It kind of sounds like a Break my mind and march toward the nightmare mash up- but it sounds awesome:pinkiecrazy:

Love it.
Actually, I've read this about five times now.
I just love it! Death and death along with more talking about death:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

6458552 yay! I'll play the game! When do we start!?:pinkiecrazy:

6458573 Flesh for steel. Oil for blood. Circuitry for organs. Life for death. A constant whirring nose fills the empty halls, echoing like a shrill voice in a cavern. Lonely footsteps tread past drawings of happier times, memories of smiles and laughter, a time before the screams and haunting silence. Hush hush, no more noise. Just the beating of a mechanized heart, of a soul that wants to die. Alas, the passing into the afterlife; it is denied. The smell of mucus and red fills the empty halls. Nobody comes here. But I'M STILL HERE

When the lights go out and the doors close
After the animatronic shows
At the hour of midnight, this place is filled with fright
It's a monster's delight
Darkness fills the hallways and the rooms
I get a sudden feeling of gloom
When I hear them walk, as they stalk
Gotta hide or else I'm doomed!

This place was one of fantasy
But now it reeks of depravity
I didn't understand the gravity
Of just how fucked this place could be
In the darkness I see their evil eyes
Behind their wel-com-ing disguise
This whole playground is filled with lies
Those things are ter-ror in-car-nate! Revived! Mech-a-nized!

When you are here during the day
You see the children laugh and play
But at night it is not the same
It's another story, a different game
The animals you thought were cute
Now want to stuff you in a suit
Can't you hear their garbled calls
As they pace up and down the halls?
Stay clear of that golden teddy
Hide yourself, keep your breath steady
And watch out! Be scared! And be aware!
Cause' it's another one of Those Nights At Fredbear's!

NOTE - Follow the link at the end to see a very special surprise. One I think you should inform other people about...

6458624 I love it. I love it.
Now I must do fan art...:pinkiecrazy:

*and if you don't mind possible quotes into a story.... As long as I credit you...*

TGM

6458327

Hmmm? What's this?


6458504

Oh wow, thank you :twilightblush:

It was something I came up with after reading It's Me Forever, I'm glad you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:


6458624

Another couple of lyric lines from you? interesting.

And what's that at the end? A game you're making?

6458624 I watched that trailer before. I love it. I want to play the game...

And I just sung your poetic lyrics and it would make an awesome freaking dubstep song.:pinkiecrazy:
Question though- is it an FNaF 1, 2, 3, or 4 song?
*A bit confused, though I love the piece. It's awesome!!!*

6458804 First answer - This is one of a few designs I'm making for some posters I'm planning to have made so I can make a little money for myself. My subscribers/followers/Barack Obama/other people can get signed posters from me, and I can make a little money on the side (though I'll also give them away as prizes for little competitions) I'm not the greatest artist, I know, but I think of it as just something nice to give back to the people who have supported my channels and whom without I'd never have gotten as much of a voice as I have today.

Second answer - No. This is someone else's game. I'm trying to raise awareness of this game and get attention drawn to it. It looks amazing and Nikson - one of the people working on this game - also does amazing animations on his channel. He's done things in SFM that I've never seen people do on their channels. Please help raise awareness of this fan-made game if you can. It looks astounding, and could even be scarier than the original FNAF series altogether. This guy's project deserves a little help to get noticed and I like helping folk out when I have the time and opportunity.

Third answer - Cheeseburger and fries, with a medium Coke, and a toffee sauce Sundae. Oh wait, was there even a third question? Ah shit. Now I'm hungry.

6458758 You can draw me if you want.

Forgive my OC, Unique. He's full of himself.

No I'm not. I haven't eaten myself. Ha! No? No laughs? Not even a giggle? Tough crowd...

6458829 It's a work in progress, but I was kinda freestyling with lyrics. I was trying to be the first to come up with a song for that new Those Nights At Fredbears game, so I could go on YouTube and tell Mandopony I beat him to it.

Of course Mandopony doesn't have a clue who I am so he'd be slightly confused by our short-lived conversation. But that'd suffice for me.

6458877 Well, the lyrics are going well so far!:rainbowkiss:

I can imagine Mando not even knowing those nights at fredbear's is when you get the song out:rainbowlaugh:

(Just getting to talk to him would be awesome in it's own way):raritywink:

6460111 Just so you know I'm not an actual songwriter. Not that anyone other than good folk like yourself would notice my songs regardless. XD I prefer to do animations and artwork. Well, when I'm not doing my job as a carer that is.

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