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Violently Irrelevant


I write fics, I do talky-talk readings of fics. Find them on YouTube.

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Hmmm...nothing we haven't seen before (and don't forget to properly punctuate lines of dialogue) but not bad thus far. I like the premise and will continue reading.

Just about the perfect day, actually...

5544869
Oh indeed, good sir. Nothing original at all here. I guess that is part of the point...
Felt like wallowing in copious amounts of romance.
Thanks for reading and chapter 3 coming *very soon*.

I think you should clarify if the ponies are anthro or not. I honestly can't tell.

5545433
I didn't detail it, but it's in the description.
It is indeed a bit of a stretch. I'd like to imagine them as the less common term (or idea, as it were) semi-anthro.
Think original pony but on two legs, perhaps with a bit more humanoid characteristics thrown in.
I like my ponies with hooves but apparently, at least in this instance, I also like them in human clothing...

Nice. I will definetly keep an eye on this story. Keep up the good work

This was definitely a cute read! :twilightsmile: Anon remind's me so much of me XD Can't wait for the next chapter.

5545531 All right. Good start and great chapters.

Loving it so far :).

5545949
Aye, aye, Commander!
5546130
I was hoping for people to relate to Anon. Good stuff!
5546437
Thank you. More soon. Very soon.

5547607
Cover art is freakin' adorable. I want to glomp that pic so much!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
(also, I will be reading this soon. I will give my opinion later today)

Who the hell names their kid "Anonymous"? :rainbowhuh:

I know it's a 2nd-person fic, but still, the story could've just said "you give her your name" and would've been just fine.

5549745
It's just commonplace internet braindamage. A running gag for some.
[Replace "Anon" with suitable name at your convenience]

Where did you get the cover art?

Keep these chapters coming. This one was heartwarming near the end.

5559033
Edited description for the benefit of all. Thanks for reading!
5558510
Thank you so much. There will be more.
5557904
Derpibooru. Added artist name in description.

5549745 "Anonymous" is a very popular second person name inside fan fiction, due to it allowing more versatility to what the character can appear as.

You, on the other hand, is not entirely captivated

*Are

clinging out of your shirt.

*climbing

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5561380
Thanks, I'm awful at proofreading.
Hope you enjoyed anyway!

Comment posted by Violently Irrelevant deleted Feb 2nd, 2015

Anon needs to take lessons about dancing from Shepard.

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5585864
Thanks!
And yes, Anon might need to shape up the smoothness of those moves.

Huh... so close! :rainbowderp:
But I don't like anthro and seeing as it will most probably slowly drift towards it I think I'll refrain for now. :applejackunsure:
Would have been epic if you did it full-pony though, they swim so cute :rainbowkiss:

5609927
Contains no "full on" anthro, very little of that description. Perhaps a bit walking on two hooves but it is easily overlooked.
I had no idea semi-anthro wasn't a bigger thing. It's definitely something I like playing around with.
Hooves, hooves all around!

5611849
I like hooves too, but I also like corect anatomy. Walking on 2 legs for ponies should be quite a hard task without balancing on something or relying on wings for stabilization. This being said, it is your story and you are free to do what you want =P

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I'm just intrigued to see what goes around, there seems to be a lot of different views on these kind of things. I guess I just wasn't expecting it to be as noteworthy as it apparently is. I'll hang on tight with my "creative freedom" and keep marveling at the diversity of this place. Thanks for having a look and slinging some words!

かわいいですね
(Really cute, don't you think)? :3

Lol "well we're here now....gimme yo shirt fool!" :rainbowlaugh:
Well said creator. Props to you :3

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Oh yeah, definitely wasn't going to forget about the shirt thing. It's really important ;)

5585651 damn right he needs to learn the shepard shuffle

This whole chapter, all I can think about is the fact that caveman practiced beastiality... Correct me if I spelled that wrong.

But if Anon filled RD then if everything goes scientific on us, then there might be a mutant human/pony thing crawling around. Then we'll all be screaming

KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!

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It's "bestiality" (for some reason) and yeah... Science says there's no way a human and a horse would breed, so I think we're safe... For now...

Thanks for reading!

I'm impressed by the flow of words in your story. Poetic at points. And I'm also wondering what Twilight will do with those research notes of hers. Not to mention what she'll do when she realizes the resident human is capable of mating with a pony. They might not be able to have kids together, but that might just make him more desirable in the long run.

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Thank you very much, for reading and sharing your thoughts. Anything about Twilight tickles both my fancy and inspiration. I will probably add something about that some time.
Thanks for reading!

5765274 yay, some one that speaks Japanese and doesn't use Google translate (and actually makes a correct response)

5794824
Amongst a million other things, it is in the works. Thanks for reading!

The ponies in this story are semi-anthro, that means they walk on two hooves, yet have no fingers or purposefully human anatomy. Imagine a regular pony on two legs, who carries herself like a human.

(See cover pic)

Mammaries located on the chest like in that picture are most certainly purposely human anatomy. Though it is shared with primates... and nothing else.(Scratch that. Double checked my next point and it seems elephants and whales also have their mammaries on their chests.) The protruding and prominent nature of human mammaries is strictly human only.

Oh, and it is only obliquely related but: I've seen people complain in comments on other stories when a pony comments on or questions a human male having nipples, usually commenting on how male animals have nipples also and it should be normal for the ponies. Equine males do not in fact have nipples.
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... The weirder you sound.

(Reservation for perhaps using female human anatomy such as human-placed breasts later, I have not decided on that yet.)

This? It doesn't fly. That dog don't hunt. Your disclaimer is invalid. *Insert fourth expression of invalidity here* Your reader is going to be picturing the characters from page one. You can't just change the anatomy of the characters in the middle of the story... well, you can... if your goal is to suck. Either they are bipedal ponies without human anatomy, or they have titties... one or the other. An author uses words to convey images, if you haven't decided what shit looks like how do you expect us to see the images you can't.

It's not Anthro period if they're just walking on their hind legs.

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