• Member Since 14th Dec, 2014
  • offline last seen May 24th, 2018

GrizzlytheMedic


I put out fires, write stories, other fun stuff in between too~

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Trixie isn't exactly the best pony in the world. Having been exposed as a liar and a cheat on more than one occasion, she has decided to live the rest of her life in lonely agony. Nopony would ever want to get to know her. However, she never thought she would find solace in a human by the name of Alan.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 58 )

So cute! :twilightsmile: Please make a Chapter 2 :pinkiehappy:

Wow, It made me and my Charlotte tear up a little. :raritycry:
Please make another chapter buddy! I await it eagerly!

make another one right now

Pretty adorable story:scootangel:

It's a good story, just be sure to add one space down between each paragraph.:trixieshiftleft:

Annnnd I like it good job can't wait to see where you go with this

You piqued my curiosity. You now have my attention. I want to see how this goes :derpytongue2:

good start (/sips some tea) show me more

Cannot into these feels. Too much cuteness! :pinkiesmile:

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So I'm assuming it wasn't you who gave the first downvote...:trixieshiftright:

THIS HAS ONE DOWNVOTE!!!! I WILL FIND AND KILL WHO EVER THEY MAY BE!!! WITH MY ARMY!!!!!

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:rainbowkiss:Need more, so awesome!

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No sir!, when I was last on this story it was unblemished by that unwarranted down vote.

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So, looks like you guys have another one to hunt down eh? :trixieshiftright:
Erase them from existence gentlemen, do not disappoint me

This story gave me diabetus. Keep it up.

5539836 AT ATTENTION EVERYPONY, THE GENERAL IS ARRIVING!
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AWAITING ORDERS, PRINCESS!

Feels like the story's getting rushed. Too much too soon, y'know?

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I feel ya. It's going pretty slow from this point. I'm putting more cutsey stuff rather than sexy stuff

5541508 Then I will await the next chapter so that I my judge it not-so-silently.

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Per your usual fashion as Stan has noted :rainbowwild:

5541660 Yes indeedly, but now I have more time now that I'm no longer in active service.

....Fuck it, I'm re-enlisting, but in the Army, this time! MUAHAHAHA!!

Now to play the waiting game...

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I didn't know Rainbow Dash was in the army... in a reindeer outfit.

Ummm..nice story. it pretty honry but it good.

Alan slid his hands down her form, caressing her soft blue fur as he made his hands made their way to her supple flanks.

um....*ahem* ...you better put a sex tag for next time...yeah....

“Alan, what’s the fuss abo-” Trixie stopped mid sentence and stared at the six mares in the doorway.
“Please, not again.” She said, tears welling up in her eyes.

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Oh dear, seems Trixie's past just keeps following her.

IF THEY DARE HURT TRIXIE I WILL KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM!!!!!!

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Trixie is best pony!

That escalated quickly.

This story is turning out to be very interesting..... And I agree with Elite Supreme's comment.
MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Next chapter is in the works my friends!

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Change of plan! The next chapter should be up tonight. I live in RI so I'm getting out before I have the probability to lose power! :applejackconfused:

clothes still being on.

That a think was scare me.

SWEET MOTHER OF CELESTIA, THIS IS AWESOME. Seriously, though, you did a damn good job on this chapter. Please make more......

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When you see This everyday you would cry too by seeing something so good.

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That webpage is just so people understand what the Flood is... I have to face the Flood everyday since I'm on the Sangheili (Elite) Flood combat squad...

I cannot in good conscience leave this in this story
She would parctice frequently in front of [ practice ]

Why the hell do every comments here gets a red thumb??

Do not shoot, but listen! Let me lead you safely... to our foe. Only you can halt... what he has set in motion.

Found a error, says that he has an extra bed, then he has to sleeping the couch?:rainbowhuh:

I thought Octavia's last name was Melody; Octavia Melody

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