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how lovely.

So coote!

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Thanks!
And yes, Anon might need to shape up the smoothness of those moves.

I Absolutely Love Rainbow Dash!

oh this
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stayclassy

Huh... so close!
But I don't like anthro and seeing as it will most probably slowly drift towards it I think I'll refrain for now.
Would have been epic if you did it full-pony though, they swim so cute

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Aye, it' be something like a 2. No more.

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Contains no "full on" anthro, very little of that description. Perhaps a bit walking on two hooves but it is easily overlooked.
I had no idea semi-anthro wasn't a bigger thing. It's definitely something I like playing around with.
Hooves, hooves all around!

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I like hooves too, but I also like corect anatomy. Walking on 2 legs for ponies should be quite a hard task without balancing on something or relying on wings for stabilization. This being said, it is your story and you are free to do what you want =P

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I'm just intrigued to see what goes around, there seems to be a lot of different views on these kind of things. I guess I just wasn't expecting it to be as noteworthy as it apparently is. I'll hang on tight with my "creative freedom" and keep marveling at the diversity of this place. Thanks for having a look and slinging some words!

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Yes, that's the idea.
Thanks for reading!

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Oh yeah, definitely wasn't going to forget about the shirt thing. It's really important ;)

5648687 XD you get it!

This whole chapter, all I can think about is the fact that caveman practiced beastiality... Correct me if I spelled that wrong.

But if Anon filled RD then if everything goes scientific on us, then there might be a mutant human/pony thing crawling around. Then we'll all be screaming

KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!

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It's "bestiality" (for some reason) and yeah... Science says there's no way a human and a horse would breed, so I think we're safe... For now...

Thanks for reading!

I'm impressed by the flow of words in your story. Poetic at points. And I'm also wondering what Twilight will do with those research notes of hers. Not to mention what she'll do when she realizes the resident human is capable of mating with a pony. They might not be able to have kids together, but that might just make him more desirable in the long run.

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Thank you very much, for reading and sharing your thoughts. Anything about Twilight tickles both my fancy and inspiration. I will probably add something about that some time.
Thanks for reading!

5765274 yay, some one that speaks Japanese and doesn't use Google translate (and actually makes a correct response)

Update

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Amongst a million other things, it is in the works. Thanks for reading!

The ponies in this story are semi-anthro, that means they walk on two hooves, yet have no fingers or purposefully human anatomy. Imagine a regular pony on two legs, who carries herself like a human.

(See cover pic)

Mammaries located on the chest like in that picture are most certainly purposely human anatomy. Though it is shared with primates... and nothing else.(Scratch that. Double checked my next point and it seems elephants and whales also have their mammaries on their chests.) The protruding and prominent nature of human mammaries is strictly human only.

Oh, and it is only obliquely related but: I've seen people complain in comments on other stories when a pony comments on or questions a human male having nipples, usually commenting on how male animals have nipples also and it should be normal for the ponies. Equine males do not in fact have nipples.
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... The weirder you sound.

(Reservation for perhaps using female human anatomy such as human-placed breasts later, I have not decided on that yet.)

This? It doesn't fly. That dog don't hunt. Your disclaimer is invalid. *Insert fourth expression of invalidity here* Your reader is going to be picturing the characters from page one. You can't just change the anatomy of the characters in the middle of the story... well, you can... if your goal is to suck. Either they are bipedal ponies without human anatomy, or they have titties... one or the other. An author uses words to convey images, if you haven't decided what shit looks like how do you expect us to see the images you can't.

It's not Anthro period if they're just walking on their hind legs.

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It's just a fetish thing.

5870134 I'm not saying it's about what you like just that it's not considered Anthro if they're only on their hind legs.

5869272 actually brah, there are multiple levels of bucking anthro. do you're celestia damned research before typing.

5873259 Find someone else to irritate.

5873407 I'm just stating the facts ass.

I'd love for you to continue this. Being one of my favorite stories; I expect a lot from this one. Keep on, keeping on, my friend.

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Thanks for the nice words and encouragement. My current schedule is packed to the brim but this story is definitely part of the planned works. It is likely that I dive back into it after the next "Teenset Shimmer" story that is already halfway done.
Thanks for reading, see you around!

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The entire setup is just a base for a few moments of "romance" and sex. I can see if you didn't like it.
And I don't care.

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I should indeed. I have started before, failed magnificently and given up. I will very likely do it again soon---ish.
Thanks for reading!

WOww this was just.....just great. You really had me in to this, it was hot and awesome. My heart is still beating fast after reading this. A+ 11/10 you did this well. Thank you for this, you are the best.

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And thank you. You are the best for reading and commenting!

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Hell yes, Bubbles.

He squirms on top of you,

This had me laughing for a while, just imagining the situation. Then, for all for half a second Dash is a guy, and then back to a girl, like nothing ever happened.

Great story overall and I enjoyed reading!

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In that moment, I don't think anyone would mind a second of genderbending.
Corrected the typo. Thank you so much for reading and letting me know.

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Perhaps not as much interesting as simply literally insane but hey, never have hopes too high or too low.
At least Operation Thundercloud did well in festivals.

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The bookmark option in your browser perhaps, saves a link.
On Fimfiction? No bloody clue. Why not just check back from time to time.
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Well, there's always the "Favourites" option, or adding it to a "Library" or whatever. Check around the interface of the site for a bit and I'm sure you'll figure it out.

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That sucks, mate, sorry about that. Better luck next time, yeah?

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Honestly, I think the idea of ponies walking on two looks kinda cool.