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I Am The Night


20 year old writer/attempted musician. I make music and write stories whenever available. Writing a book. Going to college. Rainbow Dash is still cute. And I'm still here.

Comments ( 74 )

This is cute damn you for no second chapter

And the wait begins...

...Only one thing to do in the next chapter FUCK HER RIGHT IN THE PUSSY

MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR wait i need something-

MMMOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRR MoaR MOAr

Description reminds me how i spend valentines day, stupid bloody holiday.

5340126 Don't worry. It will be here soon. I would have posted the story in one single chapter, but I felt it would take longer than normal. But once the story is entirely finished, all chapters will be combined. :D

5342925 and I will sit here patiently awaiting for the second chapter

5343056 Excellent, my good sir. Quite excellent, indeed. *brushes fedora-stache*

Glad to see you're striving to finish your story, and don't worry, you're not the only one who writes with a tablet!:twilightblush:

Absolutely wonderful can't wait for more

And you did. Masterfully I might add. Bravo. :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Very sexy, a great New Year gift.

That was great well done.

That's probably she didn't scream earlier.

There seems to be a missing word from this sentence.

Tis a good story and all, kinda had me giggling like a little girl from her reactions! But this error caught my attention.

Otherwise, you'd have ponies circling your house, fearing she was being attacked.

I don't remember us going back to our house with her in tow. I do remember going inside her home and never exiting it...unless she teleported us and I forgot?:twilightoops:

There might've been another that I forgot about. Trying to rush read this and then finish my story's last chapter with only 9% charge left on my tablet during my free time.:raritydespair:

5479995 Fixed. :pinkiesmile:

Thank you for pointing that out. I'm glad you enjoy the story. :twilightsmile:

5544239
Mhmm, wonder what shall happen next~

5544335 I'm currently working on the next chapter to the story. I took a bit of a break, but if I continue throughout the day, you can expect this chapter to be up by tonight. :twilightsmile:

She thanked me, her tear-stricken face looking up at me and smiling.

Hang on, when did YOU get here?! I thought it was about ME!

Er...wait...I mean I'm the one who's with Twilight not you...or would that mean you're with Twilight and I'm not?

Bah! Point is, you dun goofed up this sentence!:applejackconfused:

She makes iittle gasps and audible moans in between each breath.

I think you mean little yush? Not iittle.

Besides the minor errors, nice chapter.

5550695 Curse my blindness [I'm not really blind].

Thank you for pointing that out. Fixing now. :D

Sequel with foals is now demanded

5551299 I've been thinking about that, actually. I'm considering it. :twilightsmile:

Also, I'm glad you enjoy the story!

And then spike walks in says"nope" walks back out

5589098 He's busy with Rarity. Though, it can happen. :pinkiesmile:

Okay, I can't wait to read the next couple of chapters cos this is freaking adorable. :twilightsmile: And hot. :raritywink:

Did gone be goooood. :ajsmug:

5601050 You found one of them! Can you find the others? :twilightsmile:

Cool story bro. now, *grabs author* TO NARNIA! (XD)

This story is so god damn cute! :derpytongue2:

5680044 Thank you! Make sure to share it with your friends and followers! It would mean a lot to me! :twilightsmile:

I only skimed it and there was way too much detail

5699218 That was the plan, sir/madam/both...?

I think that was a nice ending for this story

I think this was a good ending to the story:twilightsmile:

Adorable ending to this story. :pinkiesmile:

No offence but when a chapter starts with

While this is the final chapter of the story, it is not the official final chapter. The previous chapter is the last 'real' chapter of the story. This was meant to be the final, but I don't think this is the best for it to be. It wasn't meant to be cheesy, but...yeah, it's cheesy and terribly rushed.
However, you are free to call it the last chapter if you wish. :)
But I may delete this chapter later on. It depends.

It really put me off reading this. That should be at the end or just not in it at all. Have some confidence in your work because you are clearly good at it.

she only says two words

"...Can you stay tonight.....Please?"

that is 5 words

Also you keep describing Twilight as "velvet" but velvet is not a colour its a material.
"lavender" would be more appropriate since its the colour of her coat.

5767684 I changed the notes. While I'm not proud entirely of this chapter, it's good to know people love it nonetheless. :D

This is probably my favourite clopfic. Ever.

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