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Yoni
Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick
Yoni
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I really like this story, and I look forward to what ever comes next.
that cover art is awesome
stay classy
Your stories are always amazing great work
You have my interest and my permission to continue
LOVE IT
Thumbs up so far so good.
its good but pray should be prey at the top of the page and it reminds me of don'tstarve :]
A second person fic?
Where Nightmare Moon is a Dominating Mistress of the Night?
*Huge sub*
THIS IS THE
BEST
POSSIBLE THING!!!
moar plz
Pretty good so far. Context is required though.
So she rolls over and kills you, obviously.
I say that like it's a bad thing...
5134211 No it isn't.
There sure are better ideas
And now to wait for more to come :)
I am going to fav a 2nd person story. This one.
For those that "hate" second person stories. Don't deny, you like it :3.
More like "sweet i had sex with nightmare moon"
Whoa hey wait a sec... Does Luna exist in this fic, or is it just Nightmare Moon?
Wow I love this completely. I think you inspired me to finish my chapter on my fic
So fake Nightmare Moon is really more of a shade that requires recognition by another to even exist.
So she is kind of like a changeling. She needs... Something from him or anyone else else she fades away. However, she seems to lack any true parasitic side effects like the changelings have. but I doubt that this isn't the real nightmare moon.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next.
More please This is good
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she is or isn't the real NMM?
5365013 I thinks she is the real deal
5365038 She IS the real deal. Remember that the narrator, so to speak, describes what the protagonist thinks, not facts. So when the protagonists suspected that Nightmare Moon is a fake, it was from his perspective, and not as truth. I hope it clears so of the confusion
5365244 and there we have it. I knew it was her. It really wouldn't make much sense otherwise.
Didn't you say, in the previous chapter, that his eyesight was really good? You contradicted yourself.
5401602 where?
5402125 I think it was just before his inner monologue mentioned nightvision. I remember the sharpness of vision being mentioned, and how it was unusually obstructed.
I like this one, its a bit diffrent being that NNM is a shade of some sort, but im curious as to how she is exsisting when she was basically Luna's dark side or an alter ego. Still like it nonetheless curious of how it will turn out.
Update?
5517335 I'll see to it
*beats head in waiting for the next chapter*
5848706 Sorry for the long wait. I want to end the story with the next chapter and I'm having a hard time tying all the loose ends
5848710
Shoot it with a Panzerfaust, that usually works for me.
Good story but the end was super rushed we get a reason on why then a few paragraphs later it's not needed? That was one quick cure in a story. In all honesty the ending was rushed but the last sentence was perfect.
I don't really mind the clop.The story was good.That's pretty much my type of story for me.But the ending seems to be slightly rushed.
SEQUEL!!!!
While the ending is somewhat disappointing, I would have preferred they finished then had a tender moment with a kiss and he opens his heart to her and that is when the magic happens but what Eva! It was really good, both my mind and penis are satisfied.
I like where this is going... or at least was.
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Yeah, there really needs to be another chapter out of necessity: the ending feels far too rushed and even if this is mostly for clop, who's to say we can't have some nicely placed story to go along with it? Still good, but with some more effort it could easily be better.
Also, the rabbit stew's burning!
I agree with the users above. I can see much more than just 3 chapters in this story. You should advance it a bit further.
Great story but the ending was rushed. Buuuuut since you left it kinda on a cliffhanger you MUST make a sequel!
GODDAMMIT, YOU MADE ME SPILL MY CHIPS
MUST. MAKE. SEQUEL.!!!
wow this is a great story. you most make a sequel. this is far too good to not continue
I just spit coffee all over my computer screen at that last scene.