A Hot Summer Night's Dream.

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One Punch Man

One Punch Man #1 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · 1 · ·

Not bad. Not bad at all

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #2 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

7358615 thank you bald martial arts monk. I appreciate the approval of one such as yourself

Tyler Rubygleam

Tyler Rubygleam #3 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · 1 · 1 ·

Amazing. Very good grammar, great story, and it passes the DJ Dov's "test" heh heh....

ShamefulHorsefucker

ShamefulHorsefucker #4 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

"We...I do not like removing the helm of the stars, Anonymous. I feel so... vulnerable; so helpless, and naked." You raise an eyebrow, partly in questioning, but also partly in amusement.

Who do you think you're making yourself vulnerable to? You're an all powerful deity of darkness, and few in Equestria still believe you exist as Nightmare anymore."

She gives a snort, and sends you a condescending look. "Celestia is well-loved by her subjects, and I am not.

"Yup, definitely. You know, you're so so pretty...beautiful even, when you're not giving some death glare or an evil-looking smile the way you always do." She give you a funny look at this remark. "Don't cover yourself up and hide under that anger and resentment. come here."

Huh... These lines sound really familiar. I swear, I've read them somewhere else before...

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #5 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

7358713 I'm sure its just a coincidence, i always saw such comments to describe nightmare moon, i mean her being seen as a just this vile entity when really she was princess Luna corrupted and all her anger and feelings of being unappreciated combined. Also lots of writings can sound similar in a lot of cases wither intentional or unintentional...

ShamefulHorsefucker

ShamefulHorsefucker #6 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · 1 · ·

7358758
Yeah, it's probably just a coincidence and not actually word-for-word ripoffs of my own writing.

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #7 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

7358785 oh...dude I swear it's not like that all!...if you want i'd be more than happy to cut those bits out if they feel too similar to yours...but i swear i had no idea you had lines like that in any thing you wrote...but i have checked an yeah...i see some of a resemblance but i swear bro i didn't know till now.

Oldtakufanboy

Oldtakufanboy #8 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

I'm not a big fan of Dominatrix stuff (I blame Bondage Fairies for that), but that was damn sexy.

Also it's a good thing that Nightmare Moon learns her place (pun intended)

You wonder if what she does is..."incest?" "Selfcest?"

I would say masturbation for that

DAMN HAMSTER

DAMN HAMSTER #9 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · 2 ·

Gonna have to leave a dislike here.

Zheroxzone

Zheroxzone #10 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

I feel like this is the weakest in the "Hot Summer" series, it doesnt have much, how should i say this...substance? i guess. The story with Octavia is the best so far on my list.

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #11 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

7361011 actually it wasn't going to be an entry in the hot summer series...I came up with this one kinda on the fly and just wanted to do a quick clopfic with some characters and a situation i drew at random. I decided to add it to the hot summer series...almost entirely because of the pun on the title... I promise ill try to have more meat to the other entries in this series...and i won't try and do a repeat of what happened with this one.

cause i get what you mean, The other entries told a story before they got to the clop, at least to some degree here it's just Anon waits for Luna, nightmare moon shows up and seduces him, Luna finds them about to do it but instead more or less insinuates a threesome ...ok not bad clop but really could use more plot in aseries meant to balance clop and plot....and i mean STORY