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Lunasservant1985


i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

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Feels good to read another of your stories again. It's been a while

Comment posted by Cytotoxin deleted Sep 27th, 2016

"Well I;m sure

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"you're not following what i like so therefore your story is shit"

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Comment posted by Cytotoxin deleted Sep 27th, 2016

7598307 thank you glad you liked it

So, how long have Anon and Nurse Redheart been a thing? I'm guessing pretty long since he's giving her a gold necklace.

7877143 the implications of them having been an item for a while are definitely there

You should bo a prequel to this about how theyes became lovers I know I would love other read it and I'm sure a lot of others would love it to:heart:

All right. So, a few errors that need to be corrected, and miscellaneous comments on the story as well.

You can just barley hear and see, the world exists as little more than white blurry flashes and echoing noises.

This should have been You can just barely hear and see, the world exists as little more than white blurry flashes and echoing noises.

Redheart and Celestia are smiling warmly happy to have you come around, but Vice principal Luna?

This should have been Redheart and Celestia are smiling warmly happy to have you come around, but Vice Principal Luna?

You hear Nurse Redheart tick tick tick softly as she places an ice pack on your forehead.

This should have been You hear Nurse Redheart tsk tsk softly as she places an ice pack on your forehead.

seem like she was an otherworldly being who's touch could take away the soreness in your limbs.

This should have been seem like she was an otherworldly being whose touch could take away the soreness in your limbs.

Vice principal Luna asks as she jots more notes, possibly the report for what happened.

This should have been Vice Principal Luna asks as she jots more notes, possibly the report for what happened.

" Nurse Redheart...you are aware that Mr. Anon still has to be disciplined for the fight?

This should have been "Nurse Redheart...you are aware that Mr. Anon still has to be disciplined for the fight?”

"Well I;m sure you and him can have a nice little talk about it AFTER Mr. Anon has rested up and comes around fully, now out please.

This should have been "Well I'm sure you and him can have a nice little talk about it AFTER Mr. Anon has rested up and comes around fully, now out please.

"Sure you didn't just do it to have and excuse to see me?

This should have been "Sure you didn't just do it to have an excuse to see me?

You say as you bring your lips to her own and kiss hr tenderly.

This should have been You say as you bring your lips to her own and kiss her tenderly.

"To the nurse who heals my broken heart. Aww Anon you really do love me don't?"

This should have been "To the nurse who heals my broken heart. Aww Anon, you really do love me don't you?" Also, if she couldn't tell that before that point, then I don't know what to say, really.

"You're a damn good kisser anon."

This should have been "Your a damn good kisser Anon."

You bend down, kissing her stomach while fingering her clit and pussy as you slowly slipping more fingers inside her.

This should have been You bend down, kissing her stomach while fingering her clit and pussy as you slowly start slipping more fingers inside her.

You lay down next to her, taking her in your arms and running your hands through the silken strands of her hair as you press your hard dick into her thigh, but you don't give it too her just yet.

This should have been You lay down next to her, taking her in your arms and running your hands through the silken strands of her hair as you press your hard dick into her thigh, but you don't give it to her just yet.

You hold her close as she start licking you as if tasting the flesh, her tongue running over all the beads of sweat.

This should have been You hold her close as she starts licking you as if tasting the flesh, her tongue running over all the beads of sweat.

You shake your head, words fail you as she rubs her pussy on your dick and presses her warm body close toy yours.

This should have been You shake your head, words fail you as she rubs her pussy on your dick and presses her warm body close to yours.

Blissful pleasure rings out in your head as Redheart brakes the kiss, crying out for a moment before diving into another one.

This should have been Blissful pleasure rings out in your head as Redheart breaks the kiss, crying out for a moment before diving into another one.

Her legs buck as her breathing grew hard and frantic.

This should have been Her legs bucked as her breathing grew hard and frantic.

"I love you too baby, now you rest up here for the rest of the day and I'll have Celsestia mail the letter to you...but I',m sure i can make her ease off on the details to where it's a simple note of concern over you.

This should have been "I love you too baby, now you rest up here for the rest of the day and I'll have Celestia mail the letter to you...but I’m sure I can make her ease off on the details to where it's a simple note of concern over you.”

"eh don't about me babe, my ma will fuss over it some but my dad will probably complain back saying how I should get in trouble for NOT fighting back...or losing.

This should have been "Eh don't about me babe, my ma will fuss over it some but my dad will probably complain back saying how I should get in trouble for NOT fighting back...or losing. Guy's old fashioned like that. He almost uni-bombed the PTA office to get kick off back in the school's football season." So…my father played Rugby, and got his skull broke while doing so, so you can imagine what he thinks of football, but other than that, my father is exactly like the one shown here. He even told me about the time that he took brass knuckles to school in order to beat up someone who had been beating him up on a daily basis, and how his mother was proud of him, and made sure to make everyone who was involved in the situation aware of the fact.

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