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Lunasservant1985
i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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Talk about deja vu, as I'm pretty sure I've seen this type already.
This is a good read, my friend. Well done.
This was written alright, but there needs to be a few corrections made. Several times, you have the word "my" instead of "your" in use for sentences, as if they were missed in mid-editing. If it was only once or twice, it'd be fine, but since it happens several times it needs fixing to keep the flow of the story from being disrupted. That said, not badly done at all.
Nice to see a good read.
7299395 OMG! Harm's Way?! THE Harm's Way?!
...Why..uhm..thank you, thank you so much! 
you start to squeeze Zecora’s delicious ass with my your hands.
you don’t take my eyes of her for a second
and she moves my arms away from your sides
She smiles, her eyes smoothly darting back and forth between my face and my pride.
just something i saw good read tho
Did someone say 'Summer'!?
https://vimeo.com/38296751
7301583 Well at least it wasn't the alternitve
or this...
very enjoyable 7/10 kinky, my gripes are the grammar and the occasional break of perspective but other than that I will be recommending this to wuten
7309388 whos wuten?
he is known as the king of clop he has a youtube channel by the same name I highly recommend his channel to those who have an interest in clop no matter the reason his content is of the highest quality I assure you
7309724 Spaghetti Pony
"Ahhh reverse cowgirl, nice starting position."
No offense dude but this is really cringy. It's like you're her dad, or fucking softball coach. "Yes, good starting position. Gotta make sure you follow through."
It just really threw me out of it cause I couldn't imagine saying that with a straight face during sex.
Overall, I'd say you did very well with this. The description of her body and actions were excellent. The Clop itself was well done, if a bit strange at points (Such as the changing of positions). The rhyming was rhyming, so medal for that.
I did spot a few errors that are hard to find. Not grammatical flaws, but thing like words were they shouldn't be, and lack of words.
But, overall, well done Zecora Clop-Fiction. Bravo, good lad, bravo.
Only one mishap with grammar.
Knowlage.... Is supposed to be Knowledge.
Overall fantastic. Only problem I found was that one word.
Holy crap...
7321325 What's wrong?
7321440 nothing! That was one of the best clopfics I've ever read!
7321466 ohhh thanx!
hey it IS part of a series have you read the other one? 
7321535 there's another one?!
7321751 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333748/hot-summer-in-the-dragon-city
7322677 thanks, I'll check it out! I also just posted my own clopfic that involves zecora. It's called "The merchant of equestria!"
7322735 Ill check it out myself
Niiice... do you have a link to original pic?
Probably the best clop fic I have ever read. And this is coming from a guy who's read the Winds of Change. Clop parts and all. This was MUCH better then that (no offence agent snail)
7336117 wow...thank you thank you so much. Are yoou planning on checking out the other entires in the series? though...they may not be as good
Woah woah. Wait a second. There. Are. More?! HELL YEAH THEN. This was great, I bet the other will be/are just as great.
amazing
when i read this and finished it
XDDDDDDDDD
Good story,
Minor typo
Should be drag or slide
The Monk
So much yes, I love good Zecora stories, And this is now one of my favorites.
Can I have a link to the original image if it is up somewhere
Subtle. Real subtle.
10034911
Ok in hindsight...realllly should have used a different fruit but I swear it was just because it's a fic set in the summer and watermelon is associated with that season like apples are with fall and Cherries are to spring
10038697
Just shitting on your dick, lad. If anyone bitched, I would've stuck up for you. I just wanted to be the first to point it out.