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Lunasservant1985

i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

Lunasservant1985 Joined 24th Feb, 2015 · Offline

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Oldtakufanboy
Oldtakufanboy #1 · Aug 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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This is my first Jubilee clopfic and you nailed it :raritywink:

Lunasservant1985
Lunasservant1985 #2 · Aug 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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7500965 my first writing one too

Dudeler
Dudeler #4 · Aug 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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You need an editor to fix a lot of these misspellings and grammar errors. Besides that, the pacing in the clop section was well done. You get a like.

Brother Roga
Brother Roga #5 · Aug 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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One thing I noticed was that there was no mention of a "Human" tag, yet in the first paragraphs I already find you mentioning that the main character is a human.

I'd fix it ASAP

daba zaba
daba zaba #7 · Aug 24th, 2016 · · ·
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This was good great t see cherry gets some love

Lazy Coyote
Lazy Coyote #8 · Aug 31st, 2016 · · ·
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Tis a glorious addition to thine repituar of stories!

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