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ChamomileTea
Got bored. Decided to write. That's it, really lol. I mainly write short stories.
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I like it so far.
Why you keep referring the kitchen as 'the island'?
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an island is a counter that isn't connected to the wall in a kitchen. Kind've like a permanent table.
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Thank you!
Letting a lady sleep on the couch isn't very gentlemanly.
7291140
Some kitchens have a structure made up of drawers and/or cabinets with a tabletop, smack dab in the middle of the room. This is called a 'kitchen island'.
seems good so far
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I don't know if you're serious or you're trying to use innuendo. lol
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Thanks bro!
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Ah I see, also are you familiar with the transdimensional window theory? because if Anon talk about it with Twilight that could help her feel better or she could used to try to explain what happen.
In case you don't that theory say that what we perceive as imagination is in fact a very rare and light type of perception or vision. Basically means that when someone imagined he or she is actually seeing another dimension, and watching its inhabitants, how they lived, its blurry and its never 100% aquared so what they creator made could had being just a vision that she had throw the ponies dimension.
Something similar in an animated show call 'Justice League'
Vaguely interesting concept and a very "go with the flow" style anon, I'll keep my eye on this. My only real complaint/nugget of constructive criticism is the fact you almost exclusively tell rather than show. You just say what happens with little to no description, and that has a tendency to lead to a dull story without anything interesting to fill the gaps between dialogue. Much preferable to Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, though; at least stuff actually happens at a reasonable clip in stories written like this.
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Thank you for your input!
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Something to look into. Thank you for the input!
fucken hell that was fast...i think ya should of built that up a bit more but that might just be me
Meh, i don't really care about the clop but still i read it :/ mostly so i can continue with the story without missing any sort of grammar mistakes, and because it shows how people think of this type of thing!
(As i might have mentioned to some friends of mine, i am an anti-sexual, which means i want no part in doing that sort of thing, secondly, i like to be anti-social, which has no relevance to this situation whatsoever)
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Well if Ms Cake is any indication this could be one of those cases where mares outnumber males so flirting and going fast could be a bit common, plus Maud is more a mare of action rather than words if she wish to do something I imagine she just do it or say it 'for fuck sake she burn the embodiment of chaos' that demonstrated not restrictions what so ever.
Also, nice we need some love for the rock lover, she might not show it, but its looks like Anon just crack that rock, and come on don't you think it will be funny if Maud is all happy and bouncy the next day confusing everyone? (aka, she has a small smile, is whistling a happy tune and even greet some ponies with a short hug) if she is that happy she will show it the next day I'm imagine, and Pinkie could think it was because of the couch.
P.S: Twilight maaaaaaaaay had show some interest for the little pet as well, we will had to wait to see, if this turns into a harem with Maud as the alpha mare
Just one question, Maud is always dress, was she naked in the party or did she just show herself naked in front of Anon?
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Never really paid attention to her frock, Just wanted to focus on her more as a character.
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I wanted to see things go a little faster than usual. I like shorter stories. But I get what you're saying. Thank you for your input!
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I thank you for reading it, but if you're not into that, I might not be the author for you.
7295105 i think of myself as a metaphorically "traveling" editor, and by that i mean i try not to say it rudely but i point out grammar and spelling mistakes
(Capitalization doesn't bother me becuase it's just boring to point out over and over... And over)
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Gotcha. Thanks for the input!
That was good but I have to ask, did Dash just saw the act? I got confused with that last part. I though she was going to slam right into Celestia pussy for what you wrote
7295101 then what you did makes sense. and np
Short, sweet, and sexy. Nice
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Rainbow dash died. Rest In Pepperoni.
Lol jk she just got knocked tf out.
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Thanks for the compliment!
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Glad you could see it from my perspective.
*starts fic and reads half the first chapter* . . . is this something like a crackfic? . . . i think it might be. . .
*finishes fic* yep, like a crackfic. a good one too.
gg no re 9/10 not bad
Ooookay. So how many more mares is Anon going to end up sexing?
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Nah. The fanfic is done. I'll have other stories much like it in the future, though!
This pleasantly exceeded my expectations.
Sorry if i can't offer any critical insight but i have to say i enjoyed the story so far.
chapters 1-3 are good and a bit serious but fast paced in a good way...
THEN chapter 4 comes along with its randomness.... dont get me wrong its funny, but funny weird.
all in all it made me weird as well!
woot!
Give us a sequel
Yeah. This definitely deserves a continuation.
Wait, why did you specify... Oh. Oh!
Ain't that the truth. Fuck deep, existential meaning to life, just gimme a bottle o' Jack, and let me live it up while I can.
Damn, not even an hour into Ponyland and already he's hit on...
Damn son, go for it boy!
Also, nice start to this.
Hmmmm... interesting...er, hehehe,
Nicely done dude.
Hmm... a nice chapter, went by fast but eh, it was nice.
Good show.
BRUH... Errybody be wantin' ya and you actin' like you don't want it...
Bruh...
Bruh...
Nice story though, 8/10
It was perfect goodjob
Whelp your in Molestia's universe now so.
did anybody else think of markipliers dirt animated video when it dirter
[quote?] It's cool how fanfiction works.Sweet Celestia!! The self awareness is off the charts.
This was a interesting beginning can't wait to see more and where this goes.
Oh this is getting me hooked.
This was so beyond beautifully sweet and spicy plus heartwarming.