• Member Since 9th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen 1 hour ago

Naughty_Ranko


If you like my stories, feel free to join me on Patreon.

Comments ( 109 )

NNNNNNNO.
NO.
NO.
YOU. PENALTY BOX. FIVE MINUTES FOR PUNNING.

Hm.

Anthro. Eh, fuckit.

I'll ride along for this.

~Skeeter The Lurker

4687184
Just like in the Cold Open of the actual Episode

What the hell?! My fave pony in a story like this?! And there's more chapters coming?! YES! I can die a happy man now! :yay:

4687359

May I ask which Pony your talking about :raritystarry:

Also I hope you enjoy the Rest of it (especially one Part in the 2nd Chapter :ajsmug:

4687372
Nightmare! Haven't talked to you in a while! My fave pony is Applejack, and I have a feeling I will enjoy it very...thoroughly :rainbowwild:

You are awesome! Thanks so much for commissioning this :fluttercry: and thank you Naughty_Ranko for writing this! :yay:

4687392

Yeah, I'm not that much of a Commentor :scootangel:

So your favorite is AJ :ajsmug:

Mine is Rarity :duck:

Also no Prob (I mean if ya got an awesome Scenario you write a Fanfic (or ask some talented Writer like Ranko :raritywink:)

4687504

Admittedly I'm not much of a writer :twilightblush: but I have fun with it nonetheless :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. I wonder what Applejack's reaction will be to finding out about Cherry's other business?:applejackconfused:

NR, I want to friggin HUG you! You're one of my top fave clop writers because you use the lesser loved characters like Velvet and Jubilee. We need more love for the milfs and cougars!

4687641
Thanks, although in this case it must be noted that it was Nightmare_Shinigami who asked me to use her.

Writing secondary characters is always fun for me, because I have more freedom in exploring and developing them. And trust me, there's a whole string of other secondary characters coming in this fic. I just couldn't tag them all, because of the five character limit.:twilightblush:

4687666 I can't wait to read it. Btw have you written with Harshwhinny, Mayor Mare or some of the new S4 mares? I don't remember.

I'm going to hell anyway might as well sit back and enjoy the ride so to speak :scootangel:

I find this fic so far interesting :moustache: I'm staying for more :yay:

...

[Explicit Deleted] it, I'm faving this just because I got drawn in from the teasing Cold Open.:pinkiehappy:

4687790
No, I haven't. I've got a commission involving the Mane-iac coming up, though.

4687932 *frustrated noises* there are soooo many artists and some writers, you included, that I would commission the hell out of. Like shut up and take my money. Except I don't have a job and need to save my money for college stuff.

Very nice start. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Mhmmm, this looks promising! I'll follow it for now, eagerly awaiting chapter two for proper judgement!

story looks good and that cover pic...unf :moustache:

> sees gangbang, loads of cum tags

Yes, exactly what I was looking for! :pinkiehappy:

>first chapter doesn't actually have any of that

...dammit all.:ajbemused:

4687586

But I can think of some nice Synosises :pinkiehappy:


4687626

You're about to find out soon enough :raritywink:


4690753

Well that's kind of a Problem with Tags... it spoils some important Chars or promise you something... like Braeburn (who didn't appeared till now, but we know he will) :ajsmug:

Oh snap I think flim flam are back! Keep up the good work.

Those two better not rape her or blackmail her!:flutterrage:

Prostitution? I'm gonna have to say NO.

4692458
They might surprise you. While Flim and Flam have acted as antagonists twice, I don't actually see them as evil. Notice the absence of a dark tag on the story.

Flim and Flam, huh? I imagine that they're regular customers here and are just surprised to see AJ here. My guess is that, because of how turned on AJ is right now, she agrees to take them as customers...after making them Pinkie Promise never to speak of it outside of plantation night shift.

4692458
4692488
4692725

Well to be honest when I told Ranko the Synopsis I only told her that AJ and Cherry are the main Chars and who is not allowed to be in there (Big Mac for excemple) Almost every Male was choosen by Ranko... except for Fancy (see Episode "Equestria Games") and I haven't gotten Part 3 to proofread it yet so even I don't know what's going on.here. :pinkiehappy:

4692790
I just hate stories that sexualize prostitution, rape or infidelity.

4692822

Which means almost every Clopfic... don't get me wrong, there are some where a Person has sex with the Person he/she loves and nothing else.

Also Prostitution isn't bad if the Girl (or Guy) enjoys the Job and is treated like a Human/Pony/Anthro (like Golden)

But Rape in Real Life is still bad

4692822
Well, I don't like rape either, in my stories as well as in real life.

Prostitution and infidelity on the other hand is different in my opinion. They're not black and white and a lot depends on the circumstances. So I wouldn't generalize my views on that.

But if you don't like the idea of AJ solving her money problems with sex, then that's your perogative and this story just isn't for you.

SFC

This is exactly what FiMfiction needs!

anthro

Oh.

Why does everyone write about Miss Jubilee running a whorehouse? Why is it never anyone else? And worse I almost never find it entertaining.:ajsleepy:

4693142

Straight from TV Tropes:
Cherry Jubilee's business-attitude, Southern Belle accent, and constant bedroom-eyes have led to her being compared to a brothel madame.

But you have a good Point about Cherry being the only one in Clop-Fics (I think)

4693142
Why oh why indeed..?
derpicdn.net/img/view/2012/7/10/39046__solo_anthro_suggestive_monochrome_clothes_traditional+art_dress_artist-colon-trollie+trollenberg_cherry+jubilee_madame+jubilee.jpg

4692790
You know, I kinda want to see one of his older friends (like Fancy?) drag Prince Blueblood, who is all prissy and bitchy and secretly terrified of mares, out to Cherry's ranch for some fun.^^
th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/058/f/a/common_harlots_by_13foxywolf666-d5wf766.jpg
Hey, maybe they can bond a bit over things!

:ajbemused: Oh look who turned up :ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused: this better be worth it otherwise I am flipping my laptop

4693141
Anthro... yep can give a like but no fave:ajsleepy:

Well, lookie who showed up; AJ just might start off on the 'Night Shift' with a two-fer... :applejackunsure:

Is it just me, or does it seem that AJ being paired off with one or both of the Flim-Flam bothers in a clopfic is becoming a bit of a cliche?

What a way for AJ to find out about Cherry's other business. And what a way for AJ to acquire her first customers. Applejack fails to realize something, right now. She thinks her family and friends will reject her for not getting any money at the competition. What does she think her family and friends will be like when they find out how she plans to get the money now?:ajsleepy:

4694613
Is it? I don't think I've ever read another clopfic involving them. Seen art, though. It's probably because AJ is the one of the Mane 6 that most interacted with them in the show and their characters lend themselves well to conflict.

4695495
And because of that thought it makes suddenly much more sense why Applejack was so reluctant to talk, when her friends finally tracked her down in the episode "Last Roundup," doesn't it?

4696482

So basicly the Ribbons were just a white Lie to cover up the Fact that AJ had Sex with multiple Stallions... that's a really interesting look of Things... and I didn't even thought of it when I commissioned the Story :pinkiegasp:

4696482

That's probably the reason why. As to clopfics, the fic I was thinking about was SusieBeeca's The Two-Step..

is applejack even gonna know who the flim flam brothers are? because "The Last Roundup" is season 2 episode 14 and they appear in season 2 episode 15. so are you going out of episode order?

4697443

Yeah, mine and Ranko's OCs were mentioned here! :yay:

4697436

I did realised it when Ranko showed me the Stallions she choose (even pointed it out) and it's up to her how this situation will be handled (probably that they won't speak of this ever again)

4697436
Nope, she doesn't know who they are. When they meet in the cider episode later, they do recognize each other, but neither of the three will comment on that fact for obvious reasons.

Thus continuity is preserved and it goes towards explaining why Applejack will be so resistant towards the cider deal, which wasn't really such a bad deal in the beginning (before things got out of hand with the competition). She simply didn't want to enter a business deal with them with her family present, otherwise somepony might let something slip about their history.:raritywink:

4697472

:eeyup: Ranko had the Idea for this little Cameo and to be honest I was a little embaressed, that I only reconized your OC :twilightblush:... but then again Golden Dawn is a pretty normal Name by Pony Standards.

Login or register to comment