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Lunasservant1985


i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

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Eric Inkpot loves spending time with Lyra Heartstrings, he really likes her, a lot. Lyra already has a best friend Bonnie ''Bon Bon'' Sweetie Drops, but Eric is gonna learn that being best friends isn't as narrow as he'd been raised to believe it is.

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Um... ok?

It was short, and sweet, and well written, but... where's the rest? I realize there's a sequel I need to read, but as a standalone story it kind of went nowhere.

6842855 this story and its sequel are kinda meant to be direct opposites to each other, like the first one...is mostly a harmless read that with maybe a few things removed or altered, like the underwear Lyra puts away, it would be like those Equestria girls shorts that are extras on the EG DVDs.


While the sequel is a straight up clopfic that goes for a full on mature audience, a direct opposite to this one even though they are supposed to be telling a continuous story.

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I mean that this story could basically be summarized as:

* Lyra, Bonnie, and Eric are besties

* Besties never leave each other hanging

And... that's about it. There's no real plot or story to it, just some character building.

If I really think about it, though, I guess there's nothing wrong with that. I'm probably too used to reading 500K+ word megafics. :twilightblush:

6844596. Yhea if you look at it that way didnt a lot of the actual zhows earlier eps read that way? Like look before you sleep or ticket master?

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That's exactly what came to mind, yeah.

6844907 have you read this story's sequel yet? And if so what'd you think of it?

6844596 only 500k? Read Legacy's (by Nfire) 900k!

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