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I enjoyed the story but not satisfied, there was a huge time gap between 1 & 2 that bothers me so much, you could've made the story longer by adding some vital chapters like souffle dates and have this problem throught every chapter but still add some new material, i know that you have a life but you still can't rush story's, it's like growing a flower it takes time for it to grow and bloom.(please don't delete this comment it's for your own sake.)
Upvoted. Here's hoping something funny and horrible happens to Celestia.
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Thanks for the feed back, I really appreciate it! Just a note though, I wrote this about a year or two ago and it's just been sitting in my files collecting dust. If anything, I'm probably going to add to this story
Cheers!
Deliciously Depraved more.
"Hereby" is one word
Good, story. Great progress. Though occasional grammar or spelling error. But the story is good, been stared. And looking forward to i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/312/893/8ee.png
Also in other news I find this strangely relevant to the story.... derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/5/11/623672__solo_meme_suggestive_image+macro_spoiler-colon-s04e26_lord+tirek_lord+tirek's+outstretched+arms.jpg
How long has it been since I've seen a picture of our beloved Molly/Big Sexy on a story?
To be honest, it was pretty good up until Celestia went way out of character with this line. This is something she'd never say, and it kinda killed the story for me. Because of that, you might want to use the alternate universe tag.
4622003 well its going great for him...
I don't approve of the context of this story.
HOWEVER, if I didn't like it, I didn't have to read it. SO I AM NOT GOING TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THAT.
That said, here is my opinion of the story. It is rather well written, if fast paced, but could use some more filler details. I like the flow: breakneck. Which is to say I like the rushed feeling of the story. and I feel you pulled a good mollestia, giving her a character that has some decent believability, and the same goes with Rapemare moon, (What? I don't see you trying to make names for her, so I just put one down, don't like it, then present a better option,) I felt they were wonderfull characters, and I thought the story was kind of funny, in that fucked up humor way.
I tried to make this as coherent as possible, sorry if I didn't. GOOD JOB!
So she threatens to summon the Mane 6 and tell them to banish him...
Not a good idea, I think he would just tell them what she did
Sorry, but no...
That was just...
No....
Unless Celestia and Luna get both killed in this story I have to leave a dislike.
4622218 meh it does have a dark tag
This oddly like a cycle...
>You are
>Molestia title pic
Dropped.
Downvoted.
Called the cops.
I'm getting a lot of
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Can't please everpony, just keep writing what you want, and if they don't like it, well, they didn't have to click on the story
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boo fuckin hoo.
This is a strange sort-of-rape fic...go on
Reading this leaves a bad feeling in my stomach and a bad taste in my mouth. But, it is well written, and I love 2nd person fiction.................
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Fine! Have a like and a fav. I still am not sure if I like this though.
NOOOOOO not my little Woona!!! She is not this vulgar and disgusting noooooo
you make me cry.....
Hah, fuck that.
I ain't licking up my own jizz.
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I don't give a shit if the story is dark and edgy, kid.
It's just that second person fics are pure, undiluted cancer.
And Molestia is an idiotic concept that's been done to death.
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thank you for the blessing
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much obliged
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I wouldn't even go to this place if theirs a sex crazy son of a bitch who somehow rules a whole country walking about.
4623580 Very funny.......
I'd rather die...after I've escaped, spread the word, and slander their name. Alternatively, I'd just run away and live as a hermit.
AWESOME STORY!!!
This isn't my cup of tea. It's well written and all but, not my cup of tea. Though for research purposes I will continue reading...which means a fave and email for updates. Heh, it was only a matter of time before I find a fic that makes me actually hate the princesses (because they remind me of royalty...oh wait they are.......time to change details in my fics for the future). All in all, well done.
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True dat.
Molly is a bit of a bitch, ain't she?
Loved this
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Here's a concept: Don't like Pepsi? Don't drink Pepsi. Don't like Snickers? Don't eat Snickers. Don't like Horror Movies? Don't watch Horror Movies. Now if you are still with me, here comes the kicker: Don't like 2nd person fanfiction with Molestia?
DON'T READ 2ND PERSON FANFICTION WITH MOLESTIA!
Oh but wait, we can't let other people enjoy the things they like if we don't like them right? We just have to shove in our two bits of disapproval! Look. I don't like the Fall of Equestria series, or foalcon, or any sort of fetishized rape fiction there is on this site, shit, I'd say I didn't like this fic either. And while I may question the sanity and/or moral integrity of people who are into these things, I'm not running around pissing in their parade. Why? I don't want them commenting on the fiction I like with "BLARGH U DIDNT ABUSE SCOOTALOO WIT A CACTUS WIL RAPIN FLUTTERSHY WIF A CHEESE GRATER -11/10 GET WREKT!!!ONE!" Treat others how you wish to be treated, and afford everyone a modicum of respect. Heck, you are surrounded by writers here, you could even begin writing your own fiction that caters to your own tastes, if you so wanted. :^)
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this is so good Luneth spark approves hahahahahahahhah
I thank you for this wonderful story
This is the only story I've down-voted before. I must say that the quality is very good, but the story; It made me very uncomfortable and displeased in the end. You know what the princesses are portrayed as so there's no need for me to go pointing out the obvious, but it was pretty much unresolved in the end, not with the relationship, but with the obvious injustice. That is all.
You crafty Skyrim-playing motherfucker...
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That's a compelling argument.
But how about you suck my dick instead.
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alright seriously what are you, fucking twelve?
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I find this story in my feed and I usually wouldn't read stories like this but hey.....try new things right?
Before I begin I quickly peruse the comment section to notice how much you are getting trolled by(or just hated on by) Justy, not my business but.
Fighting back is useless, this is the internet and sadly you have people like Justy who just wont give up. This is supposed to be a loving and welcoming brony community not the Call of Duty community!! This is a suggestion, give it up, not gonna help to fight back. If it gets out of hand, then go ahead and delete any comments he places, and make sure to explain why you deleted them :P
I'm sorry if I came off as rude or mean, not my intention. This is just my advice as a fellow writer <3
I'll read the story now :P
Read and what I have to say is.....
Wow...
Celestia AND Luna?! Gosh dang, the only one your missing is Souffle....and i'm pretty sure that is the next chapter.
*favorite*
I... I really wish I didn't have to read that again... I had hoped I would never have to hear that again... Those words came out of my exes mouth, and I did not enjoy the act following...
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Give one to him. Now.
4625179 10/10 Would laugh again. Also, cute lil pecker you got there.
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Nah just kidding. Good clop!
Rape fiction, and particuarly Molestia rape fiction isn't exactly my forte.
That being said... I absolutely loved this story
The main character, the love triangle between him, Souffle and Celestia (if you could call it that) and then at the end of chapter 2... It was all fantastic and well written. Despite me not liking this particular type of story.
There were a few minor grammatical errors that I spotted, but for the most part, the writing was really top-quality. One particular error I noticed was you said auction when I guess you meant suction in Chapter 1.
I look forward to seeing if you add to this story, and may even check out some of your other works. For this story, as-is, I give it:
Yeah, this story isn't very good. It actually really sucks that I have to say that, because it started off wonderfully. It just kind of started going downhill near the end of the first chapter.