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Jar of Dirt

Snitches be snitchin, bitches be bitchin, snitches in stitches, bitches in ditches

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Hmm, I will read this when some more chapters come out. For now I will add the story to my colossal pile of 'to read later list'!


Ya new chap- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Still nice to see that this is alive


Is this being rewritten? I clearly remember there being more than just the prologue.

KEKEKE :pinkiecrazy:
Not as long as my post contains something other than "first post!"

1380642, I hate star-trek for being too original. They voided Stargate of originality.

Oh, hey, lookit this.
A Dead Space crossover that I'm interested in.
That hasn't happened since The Nightmares of Yesterday.
I'm just hoping this isn't as much of a train wreck as that one.

Glad to see the rewrite is getting set up, can't wait to read it.

Woo! This updat- wait what? Oh, well then...

Woo! This is being rewritten! More to read!

Well I'll be damned. Look who's back! And here I thought I wouldn't be seeing you again till after Dead Space 3 came out.

I love this! :pinkiehappy:
I mean, I loved it the first time I read it too. But the rewrite changes just enough to make it fresh again.
Now I get to experience the joy of reading this story all over again! :rainbowkiss:

Gah! I can't remember what the Uvor are from! It's on the tip of my tongue!

Well now, I'm glad that this is, indeed, still alive. I eagerly await more.:yay::yay::yay::yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

1380709 You mean... Until after he FINISHED Dead Space 3. :trollestia:

Yessss :D It's back! Istalike, and instafav'd

This looks extremely interesting. I played Dead Space two, I was a good game. Therefore this story must be good!

YES Finally! I love this story

I shall read this later, but it looks promising.

"That's at the edges of unexplored space..."

"Edges" seems kinda odd to use, it is more common to use the non-plural form "edge".

"No, no... It okay..."
I believe that should be it's okay

Paul Leonard - Morgan - Trading Up
Song. Seems fitting for beginning. Reading.

Yep. Still good style. Maybe even better. Keeping in faves and keeping the like. :twilightsmile:
Hoping for quick updates or just updates.

Yay for dismembering! :yay:
And trauma. Yes. Mind of that one will be left in shambles. :pinkiecrazy:


Please just stop posting "First" or you WILL be banned.

I just found this story. I can't wait to see where it goes. Dead Space is one of the freakiest sci-fi horror series I have ever had the pleasure of playing.

And so it begins... again. Oh Lyra, don't ever change.

To be honest, I can't really remember the original first chapter... It's been too long:derpyderp1:

Anyway, great chapter. Loved the Mass Effect reference

Oh boy this is gonna be hard to pull off, a MLP version of Dead Space. Still, this looks promising :rainbowdetermined2:

Yay its started back up again! Typo finding time.
An inkpot and stood nearby = 'And' shouldn't be there. Or maybe you typo'd stood when it should be stool? I dunno.
"Well shock out in Aegis VII's orbit, ETA seven days." = We'll.

Can't wait for next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

As a big fan of the Dead Space series, I love this story even before you decided to rewrite this but I do have some questions.
I know there isn't a clear description on shockpoint travel but why seven days to get to the Ishimura? I know what I say won't mean much but 2 days seems to make better sense due to how fast everything goes to hell.
From what I saw in the game, the Kellion looked to be too small for a trip of that length, but I will digress because of writers liberty and me being a scrutinizing fan-boy.
Plus, I would watch on how you write Kendra because when you first did the prologue she seemed too friendly then she should be.
I would ask more but then I would be spoiling the whole game part...

Keep it up, I can't wait how all this turns out.:twilightsmile:

1381073 I gotta agree with you on that, my favourite horror game of the PS3, with my favourite pony?

Yaaaay finally you've posted the first rewrite! I need MOAR! :pinkiegasp: please :twilightsmile:

Ok... Twilight disappears. Lyra probably thinks that she has killed her... And so will everyypony else until they find out differently. And Celestia and Luna are probably the only ponies able to understand Twilight's notes.. And logically, that leaves everypony wanting to destroy Lyra.. Fuck. She is screwed. :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Yesh. It is still alive.

OMG, new chapter,:pinkiehappy: and it's a rewrite. Dammit.:twilightangry2: Oh well, as long as it starts getting updated again.:twilightsmile:

Hopefully this being a rewrite we can look forward to faster updates:unsuresweetie:

1381069 i think this more appropriately expresses your anger

Wow a combination of my 2 favorite things in the multiverse. I hope this is as good as I think it will be

Now I have to start alllll over? Augh!

Hmm... Rewrite eh? Good to know:trollestia:

she still needed practice to flawlessly preform the scrying spell
She recovered from he initial panic
along with various detritus that had flying around

1. Perform?
2. The.
3. Uhh... flown?

:unsuresweetie::yay::twistnerd: <--:facehoof:


Looks better than the old prologue as far as i can tell. Especially Lyra involved in this mess, I like that part.

"Dam it Napa Lyra!"

Already feels smoother and more thought out than the prior incarnation. Hope the trend continues, the other felt more like a jumble of moments you had in your head that you wanted to get out, this feels more tied in.

...Yes. I've heard that joke before. :ajsmug:


Awww yeah, it's here! :pinkiehappy:

The rewrite is a great improvement in terms of quality. Good job there dirt.

Loved the re-write, tho I secretly wished you just roled with the original first chapter....

Oh well. Too late for that now! :pinkiecrazy:

I'll enjoy this story with the intensity of a thousand suns

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