Holy shit I keep forgetting this place is even a thing. I should probably do some stuff on here...
Usually when you are killed, you die. Of course there are exceptions to every rule. Usually those exceptions don't end up in a world full of colorful talking ponies with 3 other people from random points of Earth's history, but hey, I can't complain too much. Now if we can just figure out what happened, how we ended up in Equestria, and who is responsible for this mix up...
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This had me giggling like a schoolgirl. Good work.
MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alkaios is best Greek.
So many lols were had reading this chapter. Tracking like a bawss
fang hua: i knocked out 8 guards
father: why not 10, u dissapoint famiry
looking forward to reading more. Good work.
This is hilarious.
have some stars. and another person tracking.
MOOOAAAAR
1. Tracked
2. MOAR
3. Tobuscus's HOT SYMPHONY!!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PVsjQbFPIPY
Smashing story idea my good lad, I simply can not withhold the copious amounts of enthusiasm I currently hold for this story.
I posted this story late last night, then I went to sleep. I wake up this morning with 50+ emails about.
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Holy crap, you guys. I am overwhelmed at the response! I'll try to post more ASAP!
Very interesting, I shall read more...
Hmmmm so interesting I'll track this also
Hmmm, what is the good word here?
Hm-hm....
Oh, I know.
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George VI was still King of England during WW2.
Hell yeah! Keep up the great work man!
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Oops! I knew there was something I was forgetting.
Thanks for pointing that out!
I laughed my ass off. If you would take the shield from a Sparta, he would be very angry. Those shields are like their souls. If a Spartan returned to Sparta without his shield, he would be sentenced to death.
I will be tracking this, very good job! Very interesting setting!
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Who gave you spoilers?!??? er... I mean... Yes, he would be mad about that...
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Track'd, 5-star'd. Congrats, you're awesome.
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No, the Spartans were definitely Greek.
Awesome story, though. Well done all around. I await new installments eagerly.
A "Human in Equestria", buddy-style comedy staring warriors displaced from their timelines? An intriguing concept... tracking now to see what hijinks await in the next episode.
172592 I can already guess what hijinks awaits. And it doesn't seem good for our fair co-er...police officer.
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Wait, who told you...? Are... are you a wizard?
I don't even know what hijinks await our group... or do I? 
I believe this summarizes my feelings...
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that was awsome! i can not wait for another chapter, i lol'd pretty hard readin this
Whoa.... This is...different....
I LIKE IT!!
This is a way cool HiE idea! Keeps a goingz! As I stroke my small beard....Curiously
I came, I saw, I tracked.
I've been needing more comedy in my diet, I hope this continues
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You... came?
ummm... thanks? 
Oh my fricking gawd, the writing is frankly second-rate but I'm tracking anyway because lulz. I'm laughing my ass off already.
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I had a feeling everyone was going to take the wrong meaning from that reference. Oh internet is there nothing you can't ruin
Just...assume I liked the fic.
*grumbles about kids nowadays"
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I know what you meant, but when you leave an opening for a joke that glaring... I just can't help myself
fist brony in equestria story that has been, well, GOOD. i already love the characters.
Man you grabbed me by the THROAT WITH THIS STORY!!!
DERPY DEMANDS MORE OF THIS AWESOME STORY!!!!
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DERP!!!
I like the attention to detail in keep the humans from way back shorter than modern humans.
This is an interesting concept to say the least. Moving on to chapter 2
-Glassed
Amazing but I'm going to wait for another five chapters before I rate.
OK, so we've got:
The badass Spartan!
The badass Chinese chick!
The saboteur from 2.WW
And a undercover cop from 2012
If this isn't the most awesome team ever, I don't know what is
I am so tracking this!
-Glassed
172760 TF2 blue team?
epic story
I was reading this in the library...
...Then I read the "air bananas" bit...
...Now I'm outside. In the cold.
Thanks a lot, author. You hilarious douchebag.
P.S. - I love you.
P.P.S. - have Alkios do a "this. Is. SPARTA!" because it would be awesome.
hahaha! *SLAP*
My god! So many lolz I think I might actually die laughing and be HAPPY about it! Tracking!!
MIND. BLOWN.
XD This seems VERY interesting! I, Magical Trevor, shall continue to read! ALLONS-Y!
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
This is amazing, interesting and funny. I will very much enjoy this. Tracking but can't give ya any stars though, the system seems to be on the fritz.
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i was cracking up, he thought what i least expected him to 
Well honestly the writing is... well a little less than average to be blunt but you more than make up for it with entertaining characters, a promising plot, and great story moments.
More than makes up any writing so definitely tracked.
Note to self: NEVER, EVER EVER EVER read this fic!... In class... OH EM CEE... Are you TRYING to get me in HUGE trouble?! I just about DIED at the end trying to contain my laughter! JERK! I thought my stomach was going to explode from not being able to laugh! Don't be so inconsiderate in the future!
*AHEM* Also, I can't help but think back to the AWESOME songs by Tobuscus, known as the 'Hot Symphony' songs! XD Hotot Hotot, hotot hotot, hotot hotot hotototot! *Continues to sing the Pirates Hot Symphony song*
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
p.s. In case you missed the overall message, KEEP ON KEEPING ON! Ma'at, dude! Just Ma'at!