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Is Equestria real? Or merely a far-off fairytale?

A simple brony goes on a quest to find the unimaginable; the world of Equestria. The chances to find it prove impossible; will he have the strength to overcome? How much faith will he have to supersede his bounds and obtain what is unobtainable?

Edited by:
Majesticyoshi and Revere91

Audio Book by Ender Brony

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 482 )

GO! FUFILL YOUR DESTINY!
I'm hoping for more your work, I like it so far. :pinkiehappy:

Wow. Well done, my friend! You've earned a like and a fav! Also, please accept my offering of some derp. :derpyderp2::derpytongue2::derpyderp1:

Yes.

Just.... yes.

I love this already and I haven't even read it yet.
The description hooked me.

Awesome idea and a great chapter, keep it up dude!

Huh, a very interesting start here. Never seen a HiE start off quite like this. I'm liking the direction that this is going in. Looking forward to more.

Have a good one.

Great start to the story, loving it so far and can't wait for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

This is amazing! Dude, whatever you smoked to think of this I WANT SOME TOO!

I really like the start to this HiE! It was great, and I only noticed a couple of grammatical errors (For example, "Feel the void" rather than "Fill the void"). Aside from that, the only negative thing I have to say is that he was a bit too quick to believe ponies were real. The background story to your protagonist succeeded in depressing me, because my own father was never really good for support, basically leeching of my mom, and after the divorce, she supported myself and my sister solo. It made me think of that. Now that I say that, I think the mom gave up too easily. Maybe she could get a dangerous job, and work herself to death trying to feed the family? All in all, I liked it. Faved and tracked, please continue this and stay awesome.

I know how it feels, go and never look back with regrets or tears

A lovely start and a brilliant twist to the HiE prompt. I'll be watching :pinkiehappy:

You have me interested. Please keep it that way!

*adds this to my other 15 fics i need to read*
cheers.

From the discription this story seems to have the basic concept of the one I am making...
Which means this will be good...
TIME TO READ

This has some promise, I'm not one for the gloomy "woe is me" beginnings, but I'll stici around for a little while yet.

SWEET LUNA PIE this is interesting thanks allot now I got another reason to break my eyes and never sleep!

edit

wake up 2 hours later and this is featured :O

I am loving it already please hurry and write the next chapter, if that's ok :yay:

Very well done indeed, I can hardly wait for more :pinkiehappy:

this is the
best
possible
thing
:raritywink:

keep it up

434858 Heavy loves your picture, Swag.

Also, i know dat feel, *Looks at his 17 stories to read* :trollestia:

Woww...
This is a new kind of story-building, a full new perspective!

Go, make your adventure and amuse us!


...

What if it is real?

435164
*looks at 75 stories that need to be read*

..........................................:rainbowwild:

i demand MOAR!!! :flutterrage: *ps very good story i like were its going :moustache:

Wow thanks guys. I am truly humbled at the response to this. This is my first fanfic and was not expecting it to explode. :rainbowwild:

435248 Here's hoping it explodes again! Wait, can you explode twice?

I must keep READING!!! :rainbowlaugh: SCREW YOU RD I DON'T CARE IF I'M AN EGGHEAD I'M GONNA KEEP READING!!! :rainbowhuh:

People make this sound epic as hehhehhehhell, I shall read up until the point where he starts constantly raging over everything like Kyle Bucy, I hope he doesn't...

Great story, you have my faves and likes! Here's hoping we all get our own little Equestria some day. Mabye in an afterlife...:scootangel:

Faved
cant wait for more

I don't normally read HiE stories, but I might as well give this one a try, seeing as there is such a positive response... :trixieshiftright:

Get your ass to Equestria!

It is well written, and an enjoyable read, but the main character, from the stand point of any rational being, could be seen as insane (before the prophetic dream). I disliked that the main character has a "destiny". Instead of showing up based on his own research and findings, and only being recognized as an odd being upon arrival, he would be recognized (at some point at least) as the messiah you have already set him up to be. Don't let my criticisms discourage you however, as they are simply based upon the content of the intro, which is of little consequence in the grand scheme of things. Hopefully this critique of the established concept will result in a more original body.

Please. Don't mind me.

JUST PROCED.

I'd usually go on about how HiE's always seem to end up with a guy with a "troubled past." But this one struck a peculiar chord with me. My own parents divorced, in a manner similar to the couple described here. You really reminded me how it felt to have something like a family get all...broken. It changes you. Even now, after more than a decade, I feel as though I lost something precious. I guess all I have to say is that I like this story for reminding me of that. In a roundabout way, it's important to keep remembering these things.

Yes! YES! Onwards! The adventure begins! Epic beginning time! Cue music as he goes to pick up the gem: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=emy8E3ZtvVM

I put this on my "Read Later" list this morning, saw it on featured when i got home. Read it instantly. Fantastic start.
"It hurt.
It hurt me so bad."
Two very simple lines, yet so powerful.

435832 my life is just like this as well

Faved before I even click the link.
Liked after I read the first sentence.

do go on fine sire, this looks promising

"I knew I could always rely on one thing to fill the void. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic"

If I had a nickel for every time I've read that line, Bill Gates would be run out of business. Aren't there any bronies who are happy with their lives?

Interesting start, looking forward to more.

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