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The pristine land of Equestria has grown a bit too peaceful and boring for the immortal sisters to handle so they decide to play a different kind of game. What started out as just a prank will quickly change into an obsession that nopony is safe from becoming a pawn in. The Shipping Games!
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Hahaha oh wow. Trollestia on a rampage!
Seriously though, that was very well written and flowed very well for the most part.
I can't wait to see who cops it next!
xjershey psycho stole the words right from me. Excellently written and hilarious in it's entirety.
You can bet I will be tracking this.
That was a pretty good read, surprisingly.
Trollestia 2012
For some odd reason, when i found this. I was listening to pimpin by Hollywood undead......
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Not bad. Not bad at all. I think what really sold me was Applejack and Rainbow Dash's letter to the Princess...it'd probably have been easy to paint Celestia as the perfect chessmaster who never actually gets caught or called out on her pranks, but that also wouldn't be anywhere near as hilarious.
Should be interesting to see where this goes next.
(Also, caught a small typo near the end: "...at the thought of the two mares together like theat." Nothing damning, just a little something that must've slipped past you.)
Rofl!
Ok, that was pretty good! One question though.
It says: Rainbow's eyes went wide as she saw Applejack falling face first towards the ground. Quicker than the blink of an eye she shot into action grabbing AJ, but because her balance and coordination was a bit off the two still clumsily fell, Dash on bottom of the pile with Applejack on top of her.
Then right after that: Applejack was now even more unsure than ever, she knew what had happened had been an accident, but she also couldn't say she minded the feeling of RD on top of her like that.
Wasn't RD under AJ?
373727 that was a small thing i missed and will go in and fix right now thanks ^.^ glad you all are enjoying this
-and fixed thanks again
Also I'd be willing to write out clop sections and post them up separately if the demand was there, so if you'd like to read a bit of clop just let me know
Am I detecting some inspiration from the hunger games...?
373849 You write what you want to write
But first I would like to see some different shipping. You still have a whole lot of characters to choose from.
I require more.
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Actually no the name thing was completely unintentional, it was more to reference events that are going to happen later on, no relation to hunger games.
Oh Celestia, next time use a blank letter.
Prank-loving Celestia? Clueless Spike? Best Dash ship?
I approve.
That being said, there are a few typos in there that could probably just be fixed with another proofreading.
That was great! The letter that they sent back to Celestia really made me crack up
. funniest fic I've read in a long time
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I'll give it another look over next time before I post, glad you enjoyed it!
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Thank you very much
o sauce, another great fic found
and now we can add Tolluna to the list of pony trolls
Oh Celestia, bet you didn't see that coming, eh? You trickster, you.
Sorry that the update is taking so long everypony, my laptop decided to explode... twice
. I just got a replacement computer yesterday, and am hard at work on the next chapter. It's about halfway written right now and I'll try and get it up as soon as i can. 
A very special lesson...
But with whom?
“Thunderlane and Blossomforth? Hmmm, too easy, seems like they are going to get together alredy.” Missing an "a" in that last word.
“Perhaps I should try two more of Twilight’s friends,it worked out splendidly the first time.” She thought to herself as she floated up pictures of Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Twilight Sparkle.
There needs to be a space after that first comma.
“Ah yes, that is the term! Sister, I have Shipped our guards with one another!” She announced triumphantly. Is the "S" in "Shipped" supposed to be capitalized here for emphasis, or was that a typo?
“Luna, oh dear, how do i put this?
This requires capitalization!
In the meantime, back at the Carosel Boutique the kitchen blaze had been extinguished, and the three ponies sat around the slightly singed dining room table with daisy and wildflower sandwhiches, wisely choosing to forgo anything that envolved the oven, stove, or toaster.
I believe a comma would fit after "Carousel Boutique" (which you spelled incorrectly) and you spelled "involving" incorrectly as "envolving".
"With chef Sweetie Bell cooking one can be sure that the final step of the recipie will be 'liberally apply fire extinguishing chemicals'." Rarity said and she and fluttershy giggled while Sweetie Bell trotted off, not nearly as amused at her sisters joke.
I do believe that you added an extra "i" to "recipe" and that "Fluttershy" should be capitalized as "Fluttershy" is a name and therefore a proper nou- I'm sleepy.
Rarity was just about to pull out her drama queen couch and have a good long cry, when an envelope that smelt of sweet perfume and shampoo floated through her mail slot.
"smelt" is supposed to be "smell". Smelting has to do with refining ores or metals or something like that.
"Didn’t we just go to the spa yesterday.” Fluttershy asked.
You may have noticed that the punctuation for this sentence is a period instead of a question mark. Well, there is a perfectly I have no clue if there is a reason for that.
Did Fluttershy know, and why was this mare focusing so much time, and attention on her flanks and undertail.
There's an extra comma after time and the sentence again has a period instead of a question mark.
“They’d never understand my dedication..” Rarity cooed as a shiver ran down her spine.
The three period thing of which you missed the third period is called an ellipsis, in case anypony ever wanted or felt the need to know.
Fluttershy bit her lower lip, and her wings flared out slightly as she mulled the idea over in her head.
Did you write this on accident or did Fluttershy almost start up a wingboner there?
Seaweed wrap awkwardly replied.
Is this a name or was there talking seaweed? (Capitalization, please.)
She only stopped when she saw her sister ushering fluttershy into the sauna, and with a whispered command Rarity eagerly followed.
Please capitalize Fluttershy's name.
Fluttershy’s wings flared and her heart began to race as she watched Rarity leaning in. She couldn’t believe her eyes, so she closed them tight, and hoped this wasn’t her mind playing a naughty trick on her.
So Fluttershy's wings DID go -pomf- or -sproing- or -some other fitting onomatopoeia- or etc?
She then turned to her sister, and the two giggled as they began to hear soft high moans coming from the back of the spa.
Oh... Oh dear...
Sorry if my grammar corrections come off somewhat rude, but I only feel like doing these when I'm tired and somewhat annoyed, as it takes away some of my frustration where it would normally only add to it. Also, this is the only time so far where I've pointed something out that wasn't a correction, suggestion, or something similar.
Been waiting ages for this followup; I love it
That was a very clever way of shipping those two, haven't seen too many RariShy stories let alone ones that make use of the spa.
Another chapter, awesome! Twilight's next, this is going to be good.
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Thanks for the input, its all fixed now, much appreciated. Sorry for how long this update took, I had the idea in my head but writing dialogue (mainly Rarity's) was a lot harder than I anticipated it would be. Also my laptop died and i lost my first attempt at this chapter, future chapters probably won't take anywhere near as long. I'm hoping to start updating on a weekly basis and keep going for as long as i have ideas.
*laughs and claps* I love it! Luna making her guards mate was especially funny.
when I first read the title, I thought u were shipping the spa sisters(aka, Lotus and Aloe)
Guard shipping is best
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Ah sorry for the confusion, hmmmm incest XD anypony interested?
Love the story keep it up
Gonna keep it simple this time.
Love the story.
The chapter was fine. Not all of them need to be long(that's what she said)
Never really read any colt cuddling fics so...sure, go for it. Can't give a honest opinion if I never gave it a shot.
Bring on the colt-cuddlin'.
Luna should sic' Twilight on Celestia, full-bore creepy-student-stalker style. That leaves the perfect revenge: making Pinkie fall for Luna. Because I don't know what a LunaPie would even look like, but I think I like it!
Good chapter, short, but good.
I personally don't care what type of parings you do, but in a future chapter can you do a couple normal mare + stallion parings?
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Everything this guy said.
I wanna see some Big Mac an Caramel.
That was both cute and somewhat kinky at the same time. Well done... I think?
Nothing wrong with a little bit of colt-cuddling. Bring it on, I say!
Is it odd that I'm kind of hoping that when Celestia mentioned that she was 'saving Twilight' for a special shipping, that it would be a kind of prank thing on Luna and she would be shipping Twi and Luna together?
Twi just has to be with one of the princesses...
She just has to!
Oh I have plans for Ms Sparkle, and if my prereaders are any indicator (which thus far they've been spot on), you're all going to really enjoy what I've got in store for her and a certain somepony who shall remain behind the curtain until the next update. Until then just wanted to say thanks again to all of you the comments, views, and knowing I'm writing something others enjoy is what makes this all worthwhile and keeps me motivated to keep doing it.
you all
460595 it's ok
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Spelling lessons what fun 
Oh noes not poor twilight
477625 Do it. Do it now.
If i don't see this during the story I will personally hold both of you accountable.
Celestia missed a detail when twilight was involved?
Remins me of he earlier blunder with the stationary, both great touches. Awesome chapter in a hilarous fic.
>OC
I'll...
Umm...
Read this later.
This story is CRAZY good cant wait for next chapter
Fancy-talkin' Luna? Art thou, Tom O'Bedlam, endeavoring to encroach upon mine accustomed territory?
Bravo!
Mmm... so Comet ends up with Twilight's male version.
Odd, but it works.
Awwwww. Sweet, sweet Colt Cuddlers. How nice.
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Just Twi's luck too, huh?
favorite line "The shipping has been doubled!"
I laughed.
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Ok, Celestia ditched Luna and tried to ship Twilight, and failed. Then Pinkie Pie shows up, and twilight gives her the eye.
So, I'm putting this chapter under 'complete with complications'. And I guess Celestia is 3/0!
But is Luna comming back in future chapters as either a 'shipper' or a 'victim?'