• Member Since 8th Jan, 2012
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Will P. Sherman

I'm Batman


FINISHED! - Now with song included!

Well, as you probably figured it out, this is the sequel to "Pillow Thoughts" (AppleDash), which you can find here:

I honestly have no idea what's going to happen in this sequel. o.O This is all your fault, fans. You wanted this.
Let's explore it together, shall we?


A huge thanks to Flutterbrony for proofreading "Pillow Thoughts" and for offering to proofread this one too.
A huge thanks to Daniel-Gleebits for proofreading "Pillow Thoughts II" and helping me out with some neat English skills.
Applejack vector by ~Terton-the-Shinigami
Rainbow Dash vector by *Takua770

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 301 )

First ! Great first chapter ! :twilightsmile:

"Aww, glad everything worked ou-"

*Last Line*


Last two lines FREAKED ME OUT! RD has got some serious work to do to get out of THIS mess. Granny Smith ain't happy! :rainbowlaugh:

If you dont make more soon im gonna come into your house while your sleeping cut off your testicles feed them to my pet dogfish let my dogfish poop it out then feed it to you in your sleep and when you puke it up im gonna feed it to my pigpony. Deal? =] :derpytongue2::raritywink:


Great way to start it off XD

ya got caught...

:rainbowkiss: THE LAST LINE

You used Stll instead of Still in one part

Oh, I forgot to mention in my comment on DA. Thanks for putting Dash's voice in my head with the title.

Just read Pillow Thoughts I in one go + this, one of the better Appledashes I've found. You have an excellent way of ending chapters :pinkiehappy:

Ah! It's on FiMFiction!

*Track and E-mail* :3

This is the best appledash fic i have ever read. Forget about my first coment. This. Is. Pure. Gold. Pure gold! Take all my stars! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

That last time. Dash, you got some explaining to do! :rainbowderp:

Good old cliffhangers, gotta love 'em.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapters. Love this series. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

:rainbowderp: Oooooh, tread carefully here Dashie ...

Thank ya' kindly fer continuin' this here story 'n all, cuz I kinda likes it a whole lot. It's sweet, like apples, y'hear?

SHIT GOT REAL SON!!! :pinkiegasp:

*Waiting for the ultimate fake-out*recalls first scene with applebloom*
This isn't going where it's expected to...

181655 Awww, that's so sweet, thank you kindly ^^

And thanks to everypony who read it and followed the fic so far. :D Me iz happy.

We will return shortly, with All My Ponies.

It feels like quite an improvement over the original pillow talk (though that was a good read aswell)
However you still sometimes switch from past to present tense which really sucks from a readers perspective.

good chapter though, looking forward to reading more. :twilightsmile:

181255 how the hell did yu do that? with the animated .gif

also, i can barely think of what granny's gonna do to poor dashie...:rainbowderp:

Dude, I can tell this will also get the SSSoA

So here you go :moustache:

shit just got real.
Also, I love Rainbow's reaction to the whole Applebloom thing :rainbowlaugh: funneh!


soz for caps to laze to change it

"“What are you guys doing?”, asked Applebloom as she, apparently, entered the room unnoticed."

My only thought was; www.dramabutton.com

In fact, that was pretty much my reaction to Granny's last comment too. That, and a mental voice going "Well, shit just got real!"
Can't wait for the update :3 =D

Oh shit bahahaha :rainbowlaugh: poor RD

My guess: the masked pony is Luna.

shit just got real
even realer than when i last said that
and that was with granny smith
omg so real

189592 that, exactly
also your name, it's ósom :pinkiehappy:


Totally wasn't expecting any of that! Nice twistin'!!

You are lucky this story and its predecessor are so good. If anyone else pulled a stunt like that I'd...well get upset I guess, not much I can do over the internets.
But seriously I am curious as to where this is going. Good luck on more chapters!

Did I see a Sailor Moon reference, or am I reading too much into things again? :3

189592 Hehe, now where would the fun in that be? ^^

189607 Next time, on "Pillow Thoughts II", Granny Smith vs Princess Celestia! ...nah, just kidding. :rainbowwild:

189617 If you're refering to the "Will P. Sherman" name, it's not mine :scootangel: I'm Wolfy.

189714 I wasn't expecting it either! I was just writing, having fun, everything nice...and then BAM! :rainbowderp: Creepy, huh?

189733 Well, it does have the "Adventure" tag on it... :pinkiehappy: I don't know where it's going. Lemme check *starts writing chapter 3*

189775 I never saw Sailor Moon, so it might just be a coincidence :derpytongue2:

And then a story about relationship problems took a knee-jerk into an adventure story...AWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

...What in the hell? That last scene was... unexpected.

Hmmm.... well, I guess we'll see. [worried, doubtful look]

189894 "Next time, on "Pillow Thoughts II", Granny Smith vs Princess Celestia!"

You sir, have just opened the proverbial floodgates.

PREPARE! for epic granny combat. :trollestia::facehoof::yay:

that pony, IT MUST BE DERPY :derpytongue2:

"she slowly took of her hat" - did you mean off?
I thought "just moar" was referring to "That Awkward Feeling You've Forgotten Something Important"

Please sir, can I have some more? :moustache:

yep, I was referring to "That Awkward Feeling You've Forgotten Something Important"
but your's is nice too:pinkiehappy:

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