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CosmicWaltz


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Just weeks before an open audition for the Wonderbolts, Rainbow Dash finds herself unable to fly after a failed stunt leaves her injured. Left in the care of her friend Fluttershy, she worries that her dream of joining the Wonderbolts may have been crushed. As the days go on, however, she finds new feelings emerging for the pegasus aiding her recovery.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 73 )
Azu

oh wow, i can't believe this is here! :pinkiehappy:

this is the fic that started it all for me. the very first pony fic that i read. :twilightsmile:

this calls for a reread~

356326
Oh wow. ^^ Yeah, just set up an account here. Crossing my works from dA! Whoo!

356326 Holy shit! It was the first ponyfic I read too!

I just read this one and I liked it. Very simple and straightforward but still nice. :pinkiehappy:

*Insert me smiling here*



Random Quote: BLRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-Shoop da Whoop

WOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO



Random Quote: Oh my Kevin Bacon
- Evil Decedent from the future*TJ TV*

Just loved this story. The plot was short but satisfying. You had the character the right personality, Dash being cocky and rash and Fluttershy a caring pony and being adorable all at the same time. I will admit that I wished that the whole story a bit longer so I can kill time better but oh well. The grammar was very spot-on. I also loved that you had Dash kiss Zecora at the end. Also I liked how you name that cool trick of hers that I cant seem to remember. In all this a very fantastic story to read, I would say this is a great refresher to all the things I read so far. 4.999999999999999999999999999999/5, the missing 0.000000000000000000000000000001 was that I wished it was a bit longer. Also FlutterDash is my second favorite shipping.(Vinyl X Octavia being my favorite)



Random Quote: THIS IS FKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Me :)

Dear god... This was the first pony fanfiction I've ever read too...
Odd.
Chapter 5? I didn't read that one!

About bloody time this got on here! Now I can re-re-re-read it on FimFic! :rainbowkiss:

361834
I added a chapter by dividing the BUCKING HUGE chapter 3. Nothing new, just a better flow!

362130 Thats what I would've guessed. Dang that is a bucking huge chapter.

DAT ENDING!!!
I LOL'D SO HARD

This was a very good story. I very much enjoyed it from beginning to end. I may check out some more of your works now. Keep up the good job.

Another phenomenal fic. I do believe I've found a favorite author on this site :yay:

JAG

D'awww. Good stuff. Easily my favorite of the three FlutterDash fics I've read so far. :yay:

Great story, I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

It was my first, too... how many of us began our dark descent into pony fiction with this gem? :twilightsheepish:

417520 I think I may accidentally have come in near the start of the shipping craze, and hitting EqD gave it a larger viewing audience. I've also heard it was posted on multiple boards and forums. :rainbowderp:

Normaly I would be completely against giving a flutterdash something reserved for flutterpie's (it anoys me when someone does it) but this deserves a daaaaaaawwwwwwwww.:yay::pinkiegasp:

Very well done. Fluttershy is my favourite pony, and FlutterDash is definatly my favourite pairing. So, I'm happy that I read this.

486528 Hmm, wondering if the username has anything to do with this comment. :unsuresweetie: Thanks!

487445 Even if my username wasn't this, I would've said the same thing.

T4

Its THIS!!! First ponyfic i ever read! Yay! so much yay! You have no idea how much I love this story :pinkiehappy:

Ok do i know you cause you just resume most of my reflexion with thoose scene were dash have a mental dispute with herself.

Btw great story

one word...
D'awwwwwwwwwww

The ending!

Simple, cheesy, corny, predictable, and a 100% warm fuzzy feel-good read. Like a Lifetime movie of the week - you know exactly what's coming but the sheer DAAWWWW factor keeps you reeled in. Gets my upvote!

1410429 Does Lifetime even exist anymore? Since Hallmark picked up "The Golden Girls", I haven't had a reason to check. :derpytongue2: Also, "I Love Lucy". The world is good.

Awesome story, I love it so much. Up till now, I still wouldn't stop a minute (except for writing this, whoops)

This is a good fanfic. I enjoyed it. :rainbowkiss:

1711940 Glad you did! This is one of my favorite creations.

This defiantly needs a follow up !

Fascinating.
can't wait to see what stupid thing RD does next

I'm suprised you didn't use the Pinkie Pie Promise, but that was still it was awesome Pinkie was the one to figure it out.

:rainbowlaugh: dat ending
flutters really need to know the difference between a joke and seriousness

You wouldn't know just how happy am I to be given permission to translate your fanfic:heart:
This one's just too awesome, I ,well ,I read this again and again ,hopped around again and again, then squealed with delight again and again.:pinkiehappy:
The personalities of them fits just right!:heart:
I'm addicted to this:rainbowkiss:

2162091 Thanks! This is one of the works I'm most proud of, and it's an honor that you feel it's good enough to warrant a translation! :twilightblush:

Ah... Re-living my old flutterdasher stage feels good, and this is one fo my favourites flutterdash fics ever, Kudos on the amazing writing!

...AMAZING! Good Job!

356326
Fancy seeing you here:moustache:

I'm a bit stuck on my stance on this story.
It's very sweet and has a nice feel to it.
However, the pacing seems very rushed, and most importantly... RD's internal dialogue got very long and a bit boring at times.
Overall, I think I'll leave it with a favorite, but withhold a vote.
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:twilightblush: Nice, very awesome story ^^ especially the ending of this chapter, omg, I lol'd and just couldn't stop smiling :yay:

Good spelling overall, not too bad, the pacing is good, I feel that some details were brushed over but it was alright. Overall a very good and cute little story, not trying to be anything it's not. It's a fun flutterdash story and I love it for being that.

I wish you would play with the idea of dash getting a wingboner from the massage, like in those blue wings, more so with the other one bouded up xD Even though i love the story, i still think the dream was a little bit too rushed:D

3243109 I'm going to be completely honest here... I don't think I even knew of "wing boner" at the time I wrote this. In fact... that may not have been around yet. :rainbowderp: Wow, I'm old.

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