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CosmicWaltz


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Following the events of "In Search of the Sun", Discord has returned, seeking citizenship in Equestria. However, he has entered a rather strange condition in the contract...

It is highly advised that you read "In Search of the Sun" first!

If you missed it, here's the skinny: Celestia gets sick, Twilight and the elements (+ Spike) have to travel with Discord to get a cure, ????, Celestia gets better, Discord is set free, and everypony lives happily ever blah blah blah! You're now up to speed, but you're still missing a lot of dynamic!

edit: This story is now has a follow-up, the slice-of-life/comedy fic A Normal Day!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 111 )

This is going to be great! I loved "In Search of the Sun," so I'm eager to see the rest of this. I guess Discord is into younger women. Who knew? And Spike DID have some pretty good points...

Haha, Discord is such a troll (that is if he isn't actually serious about the date, personally I think he's just doing it to troll them. Right?)

Whatever, I'll get my answers in chapter 2, which I highly anticipate considering how great "in search of the sun" was.

And so it was by the hand of CosmicWaltz
Did the immortal Discord passed through
the gates of Equestria and into legend!

I have to say, that this fist chapter didn't disappoint me in a single line nor a single word.
I can't wait to see this updated, and until then:
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Great job, sir! Well done. :ajsmug:

the first part with spike ringed a bell, like, did you uploaded a preview before?

awesome first chapter, awaiting for more now ^^

963111 I'm having fun with this so far! I used Spike to bring up valid points that are overlooked in the show. :moustache: Also, I think it'd be hard for Discord to be into women older than he. :derpytongue2:

963574 I love that seal. :rainbowkiss:

963979 I posted a preview of Spike's rant in a journal on my dA before. It was pretty close to the final result, so that's probably where you read it.

964018 I knew it!
When I started reading I was like "Did I already read this?"

I can't wait for the scene where Twilight tries to sneak back into the library after her date with Discord.
Spike sits in the darkness, waiting for her: "And where do you come from at this hour? Your curfew was 2 hours ago, young lady!"
:twilightoops:

wait! Twilight! Twilight!! ---> cue Metal Gear Solid Game Over Tune <---


anyways, a few errors in spelling but i already knew what words are, AND i'm kinda a nerd but still, good job on capturing the moment:twilightsheepish:

983381 Owlowishus - Owlowiscious (sorry :twilightblush:)
Reinaissance - Renaissance
reflect - reflects (or maybe it should stay...)
shapeshifting - shape shifting
est - est.
and that should be about it i suppose :twilightblush:

984574
Owlowicious has been corrected, and I'm not sure why "reflect" didn't have the "ed" on the end. It said "reflected" in both the original text file and on my dA post. :twilightoops:

The others, not so much. Reinaissance is intentional, playing on the equine-related puns from the show, shapeshifting is accepted as a single word, unhyphenated, and id est is latin for "that is", extended from the abbreviation "i.e.", and is used to specify.

Thanks for pointing out the name and error though. Not sure where I picked up the other spelling. :rainbowhuh:

984957 :twilightblush: it's okay, i suppose the pun didn't get to me though :rainbowlaugh: i guess i get it now

This is just too awesome! :rainbowkiss: I loved the first story and this looks very very promising too~ I hope the next chapter will be posted soon :heart:

Aaaaand Spike's philosophical musings go down the drain... poor kid.

I've read the previous story and found it rather nice. This one has gotten me interested in it already. Hope to see more of it soon.

Its just strange, Discord didn't request a date with Celestia. But he is chaos incarnate so I guess its best to leave how he works to the author. XD

Spike does raise some good points :moustache:
Once again Discord proves to be the ultimate troll ever (is about to click on Discord emoticon but then realizes there isn't one)
That was absolutely perfect. All of the characters are in character and I didn't notice any errors though I usually never do. Can't wait for the next chapter

:rainbowlaugh: rotfl
god that was hilarious.
hope the movies is even wilder or more embarrassing to twilight
lmfao NAKED :twilightblush: bit sensed some futurama right there for some reason

*One pony in the restaurant was not offended in the least. A grey Earth pony with a messy white mane and the oddest green-lensed goggles, dressed in a fancy lab coat and tie grinned widely as the chaos spirit and his date exited. Helix was his name and mad science his game.* Ahhh, I see what ploy you have in mind, Lord Discord. Excellent indeed. I'd expect nothing less from you. :trollestia:

That was too Incredible. It can't be put into words...

???

hehehehe....been a while since i laughed

1037910 not only him another was there, not a pony but a whole new creature composed of dragon with hedgehog staring at discord with an amused smirk. "so, you must be discord.It's gonna be great to fight you."

My first thought was, "Great, antoher twilight and discord romance... At least an author that I enjoy. Hope it's good... Wait, what was that? I must scroll back to the top and reread for the sheer enjoyment! Also, NAKED!

1038835 Discord has a rare breed of romance. Too many authors seem to miss this. AND I AM NOT TOO MANY AUTHORS!

Unless it's Tuesday.

Well that was both hilarious and epic. This and "in search of the sun" are my favourite discord fics ever. And also pretty high up there in the top ten (And I've read alot of fanfiction, I'd estimate over 30 millions words worth including what I've read before Fimfiction).

Amusing, most amusing.
I wonder what kind of movie Discord picked? I can't see him sitting 90 minutes in a seat, not even 90 seconds.

LET THE SHIPPING BEGIN!!!

But that aside, this was absolutely hilarious :rainbowlaugh:
Keep up the great writing

That was so nonsensensical, it made sense. :twilightoops:

Finally got around to this. Great fun was had.



Chapter 2:

Her fabulous friend swooned over the idea of one day dining at this establishment, but even her connections weren't not enough.

were

In a pulse of magic, she lifted each occupant of the restaurant, letting the ponies kick fruitless in the air for a second before they realize their actions no longer carried them forward.

realized

The place setting stared back intimidatingly, an array of similarly different utensils spread out to either side of a plate.

That doesn't really convey the message it's supposed to. "Slightly different", or "similar yet different" would work better.

I love Discord sooooooo much!

Hooray Discord! Not fan of Twilight x Discord, but I'll tolerate it.

:rainbowlaugh: Best Discolight (DiscordxTwilight) story I've read! Can't wait for the next chapter!

1170575
Gah Discord! You've trolled me again. Yeah I don't really know how to get those on my iPod touch

I doubt that Discord actually intends to sit through a movie, but I have a feeling "watching" the movie is not what he had in mind.

1255833 You might be closer to the mark than you think. :moustache:

1260053
HA yes! This is going to be fun! :pinkiehappy:

1260626 May take a while. Currently my hand is wrapped in three layers of gauze. :twilightoops:

1260662
Oh right, I read your blog post about that. Get better soon. :twilightsmile:

this fic is pure gold:pinkiehappy:
just re-read it.....still funny:twilightsmile:

this is a great story! and i laughed at the nakid thing! lol
seriously your stories are inspiring my own! XD

1341541 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Always cool to hear I've gotten others writing.

The final chapter of this one is finished, but at the moment I'm having trouble finding an editor. :facehoof:

1343119
lol yeah this would be perfect for my story! X3

Complete? What madness is this?
A curse upon your open ending! This must be continued!

Loved every moment of it!
Can't wait to see what you come up with next (whether this story or other)
Frostwyrm.

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