Fancy Pants and his new marefriend, Emerald Star have come to see Rarity in her home town and arrived just in time to wait out the storm that rolled in. Emerald receives a gift of brand new de-aging lotion from Fancy Pants' old marefriend, saying she has no hard feelings. Once they make it to Rarity's boutique, Emerald decides since Rarity is the host, she should have the first try, both unaware of the side effects soon to take place. Rated Teen to be safe.
Attention!!! Attention!!! This is not a test........This is an Emergency Cuteness Transmission ......... Age regression, Breastfeeding, Diapers and Cuddly Cuteness involved......... Do not read if story strays from your comfort zone or is too cute......... May cause weak hearts to fail...........This message will stay posted as long as possible...................................
now i have some thing to work with with pinkie pie cake thanks
Looks like you've finally done it.
You've separately age-Regressed all 6 spirits of harmony. Good work, Night--Mist!
Oh and, pardon me for being here, Shadowmane is a little under the weather now. Hopefully he doesn't mind that I comment in his place.
Keep Writing!
- Discord
Ah yes, I was wondering how Rarity would be regressed.
So to recap:
Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust got regressed courtesy of a potion from Spitfire.
Fluttershy got turned back into a foal due to finding the tree of youth, and her mom aged back as well.
Twilight was unintentionally regressed to the point where she's an unborn foal in Cadence's tummy.
Applejack was regressed so her parents could return.
Pinkie Pie was regressed into Mrs. Cake's tummy due to a strange necklace that found it's way to Pumpkin Cake.
And now Rarity has been regressed due to a lotion from Fancy's Pants new marefriend.
Talk about coincedience. And it makes you wonder, who's going to be protecting Equestria now that the ponies who normally did it have been regressed?
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You were right on five of the six, but Pinkie was regressed due to a bracelet, not a necklace, but that was very close. If you want I could use a co-author on any of my stories aside from Pinkie Pie Cake and Scootaloo's Guardian. I have to let my mind rest for now. My entire work team just got chewed out for a few of our members messing up big time. I feel very drained of energy, so I could use the help from whoever is offering to be a co-author so I'd like to see what they bring to the table. I just had to get this one out there so readers wouldn't keep wondering. Sorry if I made the set up a little dark for this one compared to my other sidequels.
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D-D-D-Discord!
Oh boy:
i am hear to help to
any help with any story i am there
You did finish your other regression stories before starting on this one right? RIIIGH?
Ah, so this is your rarity story..... But its so quick... Night mist, I expected better than this from the great archer of the night. ;)
The beginning feels more like history book, or a description than a story. Your writing could use a little polishing, but I still want to see where this goes. Keep writing, and good luck.
It flew by a little to quickly, but still a good beginning.
Fancy Pants paused as he felt Rarity nuzzle his and heard her call him dada, and he and Emerald already were feeling the effect. (What?)
Fancy Pants paused as he heard Rarity calling him dada, he looked down and saw her nuzzling his hoof. He saw Emerald carefully massaging her chest, he came to the conclusion that the lotion had started to work its magic as he was overcome with a fuzzy warm feeling in his heart when he looked down at the little unicorn.
(dunno if this makes more sense,but anyway you should have a look at your original sentence).
Keep the awesome work coming and always remember that you are awesome!
With love Asabrasa.
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I do see your point in this, so I'll see what changes I can make in the story. For me, first chapters are kind of an experiment, so constructive input from readers helps. Thank you.
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good chapter
you should make it so sweetie belle will be age regressed to and also I think Fleir did it because she wants fancy pants back
How very interesting, Granny Smith was Emerald's foalsitter and hasn't seen her in ages.
And now Sweetie Belle's a baby as well. This should be interesting.
Totally awesome this is.
I guess this is something to keep me going until you update Cute Cutie Mark Crusaders.
Good job as always.
3984536 I do get where you are coming from with this, but let me explain a bit. Leaving plotholes in the chapter lets the readers theorize a bit. For example, why would Granny Smith go to Canterlot of all places? Maybe she had family or friends there that she visits once in a while. As for Granny being a foalsitter, maybe Granny Smith knew Emeralds family very well in the past and didn't see why she couldn't foalsit. Yes many ponies in Canterlot are stuck up, but you have your more conciderate ponies in the city. The princesses themselves is one, Fancy Pants himself is another. AS for Sweetie Belle receiving the news, well, some could theorize she was with them when the arrest took place, another, she was unlucky enough to have the snob ponies tell her what's what. Concerning how she reacted, well, i'll admit, I was a little experimental with that, I'll see if there's something I can do to fix it. Coming to the question of are their adult/kid minds are in tact though, I am gonna leave readers guessing for now. I will be looking into that 'foal's perspective' scenario and see what I can come up with. Thanks for you opinion on the matter. Also, if you'd like, I have a blog I was hoping you might comment to, It's called. My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Twilight's Princess Status. I'd like to hear your opinion on that matter, but it's fine if you don't want to comment.
3916741 I agree, of both counts.though she pretty much made it impossible. I think her plan was that emerald would use it, fancy would call her for help and emerald would see fleur as her mother.
I can't wait to see sweetie's reaction when she learns rarity her little sister now
TOO CITE!!!!!
Now I've read them all. Though, I'm sad that I have to wait for more
I so wanna see twi's part in this more and how it all works with her
Can't stand the waiting!
gotta find other foalfics to read to distract me
Still, loving the stories so far and as I just said, can't wait for more twi
3984536 OBJECTION! How do you know emerald star didn't go to the farm? Your argument is invalid. Objection Sustained.
Rarity and Sweetie Belle, twins?! So awesome!
*takes out a smithinwedson* *puts 5 bullets in the 6 chambers* *spins it then puts put it in* *shoots self in head there is no bullet in the chamber* FUCK!
HAHHAHAAHA FUCK U FLEUR PLAN 2 ENGAGE COMMENCING MARRYING *holds the twin middle feathers to Fleur de lis*
3831301 so about Fleur De Lis do she get in trouble. because i bet try to get Fancy Pants use it. as way a payback for not marry her?
i understand that the deus ex machanic is nessicary but it could of been done a little better