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Night--Mist


Son of Princess Luna. A Bat Pony Alicorn who's small for his age.

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Fluttershy is spending the weekend with her mother Kind Heart. Things become interesting when Kind Heart wakes up Saturday Morning to see a tinier, cuter version of her little Fluttershy. Rated teen to be safe.

Prequel to Pinkie Pie Cake and sidequel to A Miscalculation Gone Cute.

Warning!!! Warning!!! This story contains diapers, breastfeeding, cuddling and cuteness. If you have a fragile heart, beware. You have been warned.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 45 )

Well this can only get better.
The chapter was enjoyable and I noticed nothing special in the ways of errors.

Keep the awesome work coming and always remember that you are awesome! :raritystarry::heart::raritystarry:

Can't wait to see how adorable baby Fluttershy is. :heart:

I lol'ed at your warning. I'll still blame you if I have strokes from cuteness.

My only regret is that there's a few spelling errors here and there. but so far good buildup.

Also Fluttershy is best pony so i have a feeling that this is gonna be AWESOME!!!:yay:

Whens the next one going to be out?

Comment posted by Darkentrophy deleted Dec 21st, 2013

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Like I said, you have been warned.

It's pretty good nothing special but just as cute I hope to see the next chap soon.:twilightsmile::heart:

No, NOOOOOO!

This chapter almost killed me, the next might kill me after I die from it.

Continue. :flutterrage:

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Calm down, calm down. I will update. Be patient my little pony. And I warned you that your heart may fail if it's too fragile.

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I have a strong heart. Until it comes to filly 'Shy.

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Like I said, you have been warned.

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Okay, just remember, "YOU ASKED FOR IT."

Um fluttershy's mom is called dewdrop (and her father was called dreamscape) the color and mane was right tho

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Okay, well no one said who Fluttershy's real parents' names are, and since it is my story, I can choose what the names are. I do understand if that seems to be the common names for Fluttershy's mom and dad, but as I said, it is my story. I'm not trying to sound harsh, just thought I would point that out.

Fluttershy is so lucky. She and her mom have been made young again, and they don't have a care in the world. Anypony would kill to be in their horseshoes. :heart:

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Well, I wouldn't say kill, but maybe find out their secret so they could share in the joy.

3678101 Indeed. Although wanting to be young again can sometimes be for very selfish reasons. Including immortality. Like with other things there are always those with corrupt hearts that would covet a never ending youth at will thing. :twilightoops:

So Fluttershy's mom had better be careful just who she trusts with the information. Loose lips sink ships after all. :eeyup:

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Very true, but I don't think she plans on giving out the info to anypony that she can't trust. Trixie might be an example, but then again, she's a unique case. You think you know all there is to know about her, and she can still surprise you sometimes. Not in the case of how The Cute and Adorable Trixie started off though. Speaking of Trixie, that does spawn an idea, but I'm not sure if I will use it.

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I'll see what I can do for the chapter. Concerning Trixie, I'll talk to you in Private Message about that.

My heart...

That's so sweet! :rainbowkiss:

Agh! The feels! No! I can do this... I can do this... I can- *heart asplodes from heart attack*

I will point out that there a many places a , should appear but don't. Listening them all off will take too. Long and would be very irritating to do on this iPad, so I won't for now.


I really like this story. I much prefer over one of the last fluttershy fics I read, in which her dad beat her when she was a filly. I'm glad she had a nice dad in this one

I look forward to the next chapter:twilightsmile:

SO CUTE!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

I will mow read the other stories so I know exactly what's been going on before I read aj's side of this:twilightsmile:

Gah! So... Cute.... Can't.... Take it! Wants more!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Where are new chapters? I've been waiting FOREVER, I counted. So.. Tired... Of waiting. :fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::raritycry::raritydespair::pinkiesick:

4550737 I am working on it, but work is keeping me so busy, I hardly have time to breath, I am trying to get an update to every uncompleted story, I have to ask you give me some time.

4550760 I'll wait forever if It's one of your stories, they're so good! Also I don't see a lot of foal Flutter Shy stories so that's good.:heart::yay:

Thank you, Nighty, for finally making another chapter at long last.

I'll update some stories of my own once I get a three-shot story with Viny and Tavi done.

Night mist is back!!!
All is right with the world, the trio are back (Night Mist, Shadowmane and myself)
Anyway great ending for fluttershy's arc and now to the main event. Can't wait for more my friend

5006006 You're welcome.
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Well, I have to still conclude App- Wait what did you mean by:

the trio are back (Night Mist, Shadowmane and myself)

Is there a secret meeting in the past that I forgot about? Or is there a story that was made where we all bumped into each other?

hmm. interesting.

now, if i recall we just need the end to the rarity sweetie one and... wait, what was i just talking about...?

*shrugs* well, this was good so i look forward to what happens in the others stories.

thanks night mist:twilightsmile:

And then they all died due to angel secretly being like James Bond...













Messing with ya then...then flutters turns into a foal..

Sorry but my mum Lauren won't let me free u cause she's "He"ll give u spoilers" so sorry...
Lauren:WHAT DID I TELL U ABOUT STAYING UP LATE? U know u have to watch the many foals tomarrow..
Nightous: Ok il go to bed mum >_> *mumbles*
Lauren: I HEARD THAT! Doesn't mean u least to be 1000 years old so u should have tryed the age regression spell!
Nightous:GOOD NIGHTTT *closes door* >_>

Shouldn't and I'm lazy to redo it XD)

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