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Dat muthafucking cover art...
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Now... to read the fic.
POST READ EDIT:
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Are you kidding me, a F**KING changeling!?!?!?!?!
uhhggg
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Disappointing really. It should have a Changeling tag as well. Description and character tags REALLY made it look like a Sparity fic. If there's one thing I hate in a ship fic, it's when you think you're going into it and expecting a pairing you like, only for it to be a complete lie.
Love this so much
3706782
>tf when you legit forgot a tag
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Fix'd now.
Good story! Is this going to become a series?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH!
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
stupid changeling
I.... seriously didn't see that Changeling coming AT ALL (no pun intended)... To be honest I actually thought that it would end up with Dusk Shine walking in on them in the morning and chasing Elusive out (or at least yelling at the two of them)... But the changeling was still hilarious!
Oh and byt he way... here's a present for you on that last line.
Also...
Best. Ending. Ever.
nope
I noticed how many mistakes were in this... even the same mistake twice... so... here we go...
I think you can spot the error. Or, at least, I hope you can, I made it red.
So again, if you couldn't see it I underlined and italicized it for your viewing pleasure. ...
Do anthro ponies have tails? I'm pretty sure Twilight didn't... Or... she might have? This is more dependent on your preferences on how you like your pony. Oh God, now I sound like a pony-meat dealer. ... That would be a really strange job.
I think it's supposed to be written 'whether' but I'm not sure. It might just be my semi-autistic computer.
You forgot the question mark and made it a period. Unless it was one of those rhetorical question that still have a question mark at the end of it... but still, your period is questionable. (See what I did there?)
I hope you weren't to offended by my forwardness, that's just how I roll.
3707381
No offence taken at all.
Will be making the edits soon.
3707386
...
okay then...
...
That was nice. However, if I was you, I would take the changeling tag out of the description so as not to spoil the ending.
Barb should have castrated the changeling with a soldering iron.
this was the most arousing thing I have read in ages dear author can you turn this into a series please oh please I will name my first born after you!!!
"Doesn't matter, had sex"
Three words for ya bud
Famous. Last. Words.
I feel sorry for Barb.
Hope she gets to keep the Changeling as a pet in exchange for what he did to her. You know, in the basement, behind some of the equipment. You know, for science!
Great ending!
Nice twist at the end.
happy new year!
3706782
That's the thing. If I had seen that tag, I'd know the twist. Or, more specifically, spoilers.
That's one hell of a twist, and a great job with the r64 reference, I really like this fic.
Maybe you could help me write my first fic that would have r64, but r34 I think I can handle on my own.
Why is it so many fics with rule 63 spike are anthro?
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Because fingers.
Goddamn you.
I normally find r63 stories meh and avoid them.
This... Is good. VERY good.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I'd fuck a changeling....
3708202 Amen, the bastar...... *cough* So Uncouth
or flossed them with razor wire 
i want those to be my dying words "didn't matter had sex"
like a certified boss
3717381 Just think of who you could bang....
lol that ending
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Dat ending...
3717381Which hole?
Oh no! Poor Barb!!!
I think she mighta been a racist,
Doesn't matter had sex,
She put a bag on my head,
STILL COUNTS!
3708348
"I'm divorcing you"
STILL COUNTS!
Damn that song is stuck in my head.
Dat ending...
well, besides this bein my 2nd fic n' 1st clopfic dealin with barb n' elusive
. i found this fic to be pretty great n' didn't really see that twist comin which of course only cause i thought it was goin to be a dream but, i hav no complaints 
3715951
That....actually makes sense.
I found two things you may want to edit.
That should be "this".
And that should be "bit". I wasn't really fond of the ending reveal about Elusive actually being a changeling pretending to be him because this means Barb was raped and it gets played for laughs. That changeling is guilty of rape by deception, which really killed this story for me. Sorry.
I loved this story I hope he gets away and that Barb is pregnant with his baby's as in twins two half breads dragon/changeling one boy and one girl
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omfg... i just had a mental click. rule 63... THATS SPIKE! aghhhhhhh!!!!!
Dam you. I demand you encase this verse into a series, or im'a chuck Sado Queen Sombra, at you!!!
...please make it a series.
“Doesn’t matter, had sex.”
For some reason, when he says "Doesn't matter, had sex," I imagine him ripping off and out his life support and laughing as he dies, content that he had his way and believing he would die anyway, and so went out on his own terms.
K, fist off i want to say that i enjoyed your story, Rule 63 'Spike' is always so cute. I'm glad you made Rainbow her first so that he wouldn't be "stealing" her first time.
Now the rest i post is simply because of that very large, almost urgent, message at the front almost demanding to be "proof read".
also i dont know how to do that "box thingy" around text... soooo...
HAVE AT YEE!!
Weather it was from helping him at his shop or going out or assisting him with gem collecting. However, this kiss was different.
"however" is usually used to join a sentence, not start one.
like this ...collecting; however, this kiss was different.
That one doesnt hurt the flow in anyway, but hey. Shrugs
Elusive started to trail a series of kisses down her chest, taking create care to place each kiss with as much delicacy as he could.
I believe that should be great, unless he was taking creative care.... which does sound kinda Elusivey.
Barb blushed as Elusive made quick move to remove her shorts and...
a quick move?
He noticed his and quickly grabbed her...
this
“I-It's okay…” Barb whispered, her raising rapidly as she kept her gaze locked....
Was this supposed to be "her breath raising rapidly"? or heart beat or what?
Elusive was about to speak by let out a low...wrapped her long, forked around the top of...
but
...Barb moan again and raise her ass up a little bot.
think that should be "bit"
The bed creaked and groaned as the dragoness rose the stallion....
rode
May your dreams be true, and of your own design.
I absolutely LOVE..The ending line....I'll give it...9/10 Pinkies...And trust me...That is very very good.
