This story is a sequel to Chaotic Harmony
Summer break... It's a time for college students to unwind and have fun. For Razor Wind, his sister and his friends, this means a road trip across Equestria. Things go great... until their stop at the Crystal Caverns. In an attempt to escape a cave-in, Surprise uses a trick taught to her by her mother, Pinkie, but something goes wrong. The friends find themselves flung far into the future where things have taken a turn for the worse. Violence and crime are commonplace, Razor is called a demon, and the nation is ruled by a cruel dictator.
Can Razor keep his friends together long enough to find a way home? Will Snow learn to keep her violent urges under control? Will Surprise ever fully embrace her heritage? Will Blaze ever live up to his mother's greatness? Will Autumn ever see her parents again? Will Oak ever get use to the crazy that follows Ponyville ponies everywhere they go?
The long awaited sequel to Chaotic Harmony, Children of Chaos is the tale of love and hate, war and peace, and of a son finding the courage to follow in his father's footsteps.
Though I recommend you read Chaotic Harmony, the first chapter is a brief overview of the events for those of you who don't wish to read the whole thing (or if you just need a reminder of what happened).
Cover by 2135D
oh hell yea!
YES! It's finally here! Just in time for the holidays too! What a great gift to all us fans. This is going to be an interesting journey!
Do "Parents of Harmony" next
Haven't even read it yet and this is my reaction to this story being posted. 24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdym34rK931rb5iuho2_250.gif
yay~
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that fucking man.... was my childhood.
hooray storytime from shiro yay
Let the sh*t hit the fan!
=3
3667536 I did. It's called Chaotic Harmony
3667944 ooo
perfect!!!!
YEAHHHHH~! I've been waitin' an' waitin' for this!
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Tis the season for more shiro antics
3668965 Shiro the character or Shiro the author? Because if it's Shiro the character you want, you're SOL. This is all about Razor and his friends.
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Best gift ever!
IT'S HERE!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!11!!!!!1!
Glad to see this at last. If I may, though, might I suggest getting an editor? They're very good at cleaning up what would otherwise be glaring errors.
Write on,
Legion
3669256 Ho ho ho
3669304 I have editors, they're just getting lazy
3669318 I am not!!! Okay, perhaps a little. Work has been steamrolling me and refuses to stop. Damn kids quitting their jobs because they're suddenly "too good" to be working fast food or retail. Humph.
'Preciate the refresher course. It's been a while.
so now i hate fimfic cuz it will not let me read this
3667546 This is the correct response.
3669318 Lucky for me I am just a pre-reader and not an editor. Phew, that takes a load off 'a my back!
Those are some kick ass parents.
HEY YOU STOLE MY NAME!!!!!!
This story should already have like, 2,000 upvotes by now.
eeeeeeee *flaps arms like a crazy person* glad you finally started this!
*gets attacked and dragged away by shiro* wait I'm not an animal!!!
3669244 either or
Faved, simply because Shiro wrote it.
3669732 Or you stole his
I have a dirty as fuck mind
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Friday is quickly becoming the bestest best day. This compounds the already strong qualifications of ending the work week and forgiveness pending.
Oh, and somehow you've managed to make the buildup to the plot interesting as well...
Well done Lord Shiro.
Wow. I did not see that one coming.
That ending! You sir, are a master troll.
Snow barely had any screen time and i'm already loving her. Gotta love a bloodthirsty, fanged pony.
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Dang straight!
Also... Huh whaaaaaaaaat?
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They will either reincarnate in some way, or go missing so long that they are declared dead.
3690712 3690332 3690214 3690163 You guys should be expecting things like this from me by now
3690139 I'm actually reading the new chapter of Forgiveness Pending now. I love how me and Kiro seem to have similar ideas. It makes me feel talented
Hell yes, new story! Squeeee!
>>>Level Up!
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how could you not see that coming, I feel almost like kataya with all that teasers, spoilers and random mentions we got over time when we were waiting for this sequel. I remember mostly all of them. And with master shiro... well his character is chaos mage. You just have to expect unexpected, and still be suprised by it. That where all of fun is.
Now. To author, this better be better than the first story, But try not to blow out minds, OK?
And it would be nice, if at the begginings of few first chapters (maybe five of them) You could put a list with fillowing informations
"name-species-abilities of that species"
And, if I remember correctly, chaotic harmony was like 85 chapters long (I am to lazy to check, but I think it was something like that).
Don't you dare finishing this story before it is at least 20% longer.
Ps. Do you remember me? I am one of the people who spammed you about this story. Now I am happy to see this finally out.
PPs. Sorry for any mistakes, I write from phone and I am not from English speaking country. And sorry for such a long comment.
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Wait a second..... But I thought Razor finished college and Snow moved out..... So how can they be dead?
TIME PARADOX!
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3694209 No, the last chapter in CH (the one I posted last week) took place earlier in that day. It was Snow's last day at home, and Razor's last day of school for summer.
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Dangit! I thought I was onto something!
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3693997 88 chapters i believe.
3714905 A couple of those chapters weren't real chapters, though.
3716371 well that dampened my mood
3717147 One was the alternate ending, and there was a "deleted scene" chapter.
havent even started reading this yet, but im faving and thumbs upping anyway - thats how good i know this is going to be!!!
i only read the first one like 4 times all the way through (would have been more but it's not the only super amazing fic out there)
3718680 Yeah, there are a ton of amazing fics on this. I must have read Memory Pending about five times before Forgiveness finally came out.
Well, Ima read this now, Procrastination took hold for far too long.
Damn, I read to those two way too quick for my liking.
this weird stalker guy is creeping me out.
can I send my griffon friend to eat him?
Awwww man, looks like their trippin' trip is about to trip and uuuh... derail. Alliteration can be horribly hard.
And now i wish my girlfriend was a changeling, this has some potential.