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shirotora


I'm just a simple, southern man that loves ponies, Star Wars, ridiculousness, and adorable things. I'm also an ex-Navy nuclear machinists mate, and life long martial artist.

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This story is a sequel to Into the Black: A Mare's Tale


Don't forget to check out the other part of the collab, Grey Hat

It has been one year since the invasion of Avol failed and the subsequent surrender of the dratali. Since then, the galaxy has seen peace like that which many had never seen. The races of Avol have been in negotiation with the races of the Alliance of Sapient Races. Now, Twilight Sparkle, her friends, and a few others are leaving their homeworld. While the others leave to forge a path in the stars for their fellow pony, Twilight returns to Earth with her boyfriend, Curt, to begin a project of her own; a guide to help ponies better adapt to very different culture.

Not long after their arrival on Earth, though, her plans take a dramatic turn. Between Curt's proposal to the discovery that humans have been developing magical abilities, the nightmare pony has her hooves full. No matter what, though, she was determined to come out on top, publish her book, teach a new race magic, marry the man of her dreams, and prove that even a nightmare's dreams can come true.

Cover art by PhiliChez

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 128 )

Never actually thought you'd get around to this, I'll let you know what I think when I get around to reading it :) Already liked.

Right, finished, I've gotta say that it's starting a little safe as far as things go but that's far from a bad thing, after all, it's been maybe a year since I first read the original and I haven't had time to re-read so a 'where were we again' kind of chapter to start off is hardly the wrong move.

5625788 I'm glad you like it. Admittedly, it's also for those who don't want to have to read through the first one.

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I'm really excited to read this. Add that with the fact that Ed likes it ( I'm a huge fan if his stories) makes me even more ecstatic to read this!

5626710 Hey, get back in my myr deck!

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Dude, I'm pretty sure that's like the third time you said something to me about that :D

5627194 And you still haven't done it :twilightangry2:

That last line was priceless. And I'm glad to see Technia get a mention. I shall now await chapter 2.

5627971 Don't you mean chapter 1? :ajsmug: This was a prelude, meant to refresh readers' memories and get new readers caught up with the basics.

5628060 Hey, when do I get one of those flashy things?

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When you encounter the Isenguard orgy pits.

I can honestly say that I have been waiting for this for over a year. I have not been disappointed.

5630288 I'm glad you're enjoying it. Sorry I made you wait so long. I never realized how much work a collab can take.

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When did we even start this? Hell, why did I even decide to do this? I've completely forgotten.

5631898 Because the original was such an epic masterpiece of science fiction gold you had to be a part of it :twilightsmile:








Or you were just bored :twilightblush:

The story would get a lot more attention if you were to add it to more groups.

5634677 I don't really follow a lot of groups, though.

5634887 It's fine. All you need to do is be aware of a few. Sci-fi ponies, Technology vs Magic, First Contact Stories are all good. If you add it to just one good group and get enough attention, then it can grow fast. I think the people who run the groups can add stories they like to their own group. It was funny, because my one popular story got added to, like, twenty other groups just by magic.

5627992 Seems you forgot something, if my memory isn't screwy. While talking about Ponies being the magical side of Humans, you didn't mention that Curt and them have regained magic now. That's probably going to be a big 'wtf?!' if it just shows up out of no where. xD

Oh damn, boss man Shiro got the ball rollin. I'll finish mine and get it posted later tonight, as well as get you my Skype info. Im sitting in a management training class at the moment. Eight hours of this boring shit... Gah.

5636076 I'm not info dumping everything at once. It'll be mentioned when it becomes relevant.

5636758 I know, I just figured that would be a very big topic.

Because: "hey, a story with humans! and oh my god they doing magic?! Why?! Humans can't do that! What kinda story is this?!"

And that kinda stuff. Besides, didn't they learn about humans doing magic at the same time as learning about King Auther and the two races being one once? You'd think Twilight would at least note it during that point, being a big Magic Nerd o.o

Sqeeee!!- ahem... I didn't just do that...right? :twilightblush:

But sequal! Yesss!!!. :rainbowkiss:

5642707 Don't forget to check out the other part of the sequel, Grey Hat.

Okay...I DO NOT like that cover art.

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It IS a bt creepy lookin'........ah well. Creepy cover art is fine as long as the fic is good. and Shiro DEFINITELY has good covered.

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Scrublord, Journeybro knows all, sees all.

5668647 You know nothing and see nothing :flutterrage:!

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Journeybro sees unanswered skype messages. :twistnerd:

5668697 :facehoof: F***ing Skype, not alerting me to messages :twilightangry2:

Aww, this was cute, can't wait to see things start to spiral down-hill from here, heh. Still, a very nice little chapter.

5685051 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've read a lot of PoE stories, but I've yet to encounter one that has a pony taking horse riding lessons.

Anyway, this one isn't going to be quite as dark as the last one, so there won't be what I would call a "downward spiral". It'll have dark moments, and, of course, plenty of action, but a lot of it will be slice-of-life and lighthearted fun

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Ah, that's fine, just make sure to keep things interesting eh? Then again, knowing you, I'm sure you can do that :twilightsmile:

The Guide to the Galaxy looks like a fun read. :twilightsmile:

I remember drawing that scene. The sunset certainly was nice.

The chapter view count is zero. Did I seriously catch this the instant it was posted?

Hmm, odd part of my mind wonders if she's Cursed with Awesome or Blessed with Suck... hmm... will have to think on this later, heh.

As for the chapter itself, it's nice and it's also good to see some humans developing actual magic. Also, having Curt say this to Twilight

"Anything for my beautiful Nightmare."

It's a wonderful way to get Twilight more used to and accepting of who/what it is that she's become (don't know if this was done in the last few chapters, didn't notice it till now) but hearing those words from the man she loves is a surefire way to help her come to terms with it and hopefully come out even better on the other side thanks to it.

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